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Not bad! The writing style is good, but the immortal novel pays attention to generosity, which is not highlighted in some cases, and the protagonist whose evil is highlighted is more suitable as the basis of a refreshing novel. You can take a look when you are bored. The author still needs to improve, come on

It's pointless not to score points. This book itself feels very good. Really true. And isn't this just about releasing the inner darkness and achieving the effect of refreshing writing? . . Cultivation of immortality is nothing more than human nature. One kind is being too ruthless and another is being wanton. In reality, absurdity does not need a reason, but in novels, darkness becomes something people question. People live just to live, and it is best to show their holiness in front of others. For every ascetic, none of his peers died tragically at his own hands, and his wealthy partner became his wedding dress. The knife cannot be sheathed when it sees blood. When you take it back, it becomes a drop of blood dripping from the tip of someone else's blade. Then why not indulge, why not be afraid of death? In order to live, they grovel and linger; because they live, they force good people into prostitution and do all kinds of evil. . . This is what I want to say to those who are slightly disgusted by the plot. . . To be honest, this novel will definitely not be read by too many people, and not too many. Therefore, the author can update slowly without rushing, or he can start a new book at the same time, delete some of the more explicit content, and write about cultivating immortality, with just the right amount of bad money, without trembling. The author doesn't need to pay too much attention to those who criticize. After all, some people are always self-righteous and cannot accept reality or darkness.

But don't be fooled by his rating, I just watched it overnight! ! ! The protagonist is really ruthless, and he doesn't want anything when he is ruthless. Unlike other villain stories, where he fights with other protagonists to the death, and ends up losing none of his relatives, pets, or other things, but this one is different. It shocked me so much that I was convinced! This book is really beautiful. When I came in, I still had the feeling of trying it out. I didn't expect to find a treasure.

The description of the world of cultivating immortals is very real, and the feeling of reading this book is only experienced in the legend of mortals cultivating immortals. In the eyes of those who have read too many cool articles, they may think it is very poisonous, but it is indeed a very good book, so it must be praised with five stars. Come on, author, keep updating more The Ninth Elder of the Zhatian Gang Taishang March 9, 2023

Let me review this book. I like to encourage new books, so no matter how bad your book is, I will give it five stars. There is nothing to say about this book. I feel that the author writes about a person's emotional changes in an exaggerated and real way, just like he exaggerated the inner emotions caused by various reasons that you and I encounter in life. Well, that means that although your writing is very real to vent your emotions, readers don't like it very much! But on the other hand, this may be an innovation! After seeing too many positive images of the protagonist, I felt that it was too unreal. The protagonist of this book is very real and exaggerated. This may be the reason why your rating is low [face covering], because you may not appreciate it. But to be honest, this kind of novel about cultivating immortality and fishing for family development is still good [Like]

Yes, the writing is very good. Maybe the author will not see these words, but I want to say that writing is a kind of exercise for myself. If the author can persist, then I will definitely reward you heavily in the future. Take this as evidence

A dark fairy tale, very interesting

It tells the true story of cultivating immortals. It is flexible and flexible. It is very satisfying to my appetite. It is not like other novels. It is about the emperor or the realm of gods when I am under 20 years old. This book is very good. I fully support it.

The writing is very good. It is among the best in dark literature. I feel that the protagonist is very suitable for the world of immortality. He is not limited to emotions. Although it is a bit dehumanizing, I feel that it is nothing in the world of immortality. It is a pity that the update has been discontinued...

This is a truly villainous article, but if you don't have much time to read, I recommend you not to read it, and don't write negative reviews when the time comes.

The writing is really good. There is one star left to update. Looking at the subsequent plot, there are no big problems so far. Those who say they can't stand it are probably some students, but it is really interesting. As a dark novel, it has been very successful. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot.

Yes, he is decisive in killing and able to stretch and bend! I like

It's very beautiful. The main character can shrink and stretch, and the little girl can open and close. Do you know why the author is slow to update? Because the author has another book to update. If you know something better and report that book, the author will be less stressed and can update more.

It looks good, but the updates are a bit slow. Others only take a few pictures a day, but yours only has one picture, which feels a bit sparse.

The main character in the world of cultivating immortals is a villain who is determined, flexible and capable, sinister, unscrupulous, and endures humiliation. It is written clearly. Although this book has a low rating, it is very good [like][like][like]

I have been searching hard in the sea of ​​books, hahaha, and finally I have exhausted all the yellow sand and found the real gold. I really can't find it anywhere without wearing iron shoes. It takes no effort to get it. This book is very good, very good!

Writes about the real evil and darkness of crossing the world

A good dark novel. My favorite protagonist.

Not bad, the subject matter is novel and creative

It feels like a very real world of cultivation, much better than those mindless Madonna articles.

The protagonist of this book is strong-willed, would rather die than give in, is charitable, willing to help others, friendly, upright, and is not tempted by money. He is a first-class good person in the field of immortality [smile][smile]

This is the real world of cultivating immortals. It seems that the arrogance and kindness of the protagonist's time traveler have been obliterated for hundreds of years before he obtained the system. It's very good.

The author is very good at writing about the evil in fantasy novels. The protagonist licks those who are taller than him and steps on those who are lower than him. Women are also killed when they play. The plot is not deviant at all and is very compact [Like][Like][Like]

The main theme is a truth, I like it very much, come on Okay, I read a lot of people's comments and I need to give it a try. I'm afraid that one day this real novel will be gone.

It's so beautiful. I like watching this kind of evil. Please update it more [laughter] Author, have you been kidnapped? One month, maybe. ╥╥It feels so painful not to have a book! I've read a few villain novels recently, but there's still no villain like you (ToT).

Kill decisively and put profits first, this is what the world of immortality is like. Survival of the fittest by feeding on the weak and the strong. Holy Mother, stop screaming. Don't look. Don't look.

Good, very good, very good slow, too slow, very slow short, too short, very short

It's okay, it's quite satisfactory. My own words don't feel like it has any sense of substitution, but in this era of online writing, it's good to be able to write a book like this without being blocked.

I have never seen this kind of book. This book is beautiful and exciting. I like the protagonist. Update it soon. Update it soon.

It's really good-looking. I don't like it. Actually, there's no need to criticize it. What he wrote is actually quite good-looking. I always thought he had already reached 100 pictures. I came here to take a look today. It's really good-looking.