Azure: Commander's End

I feel like I may have played a fake game It's boring. It was very useless at the beginning. Xiao Guanghui, there is no need for this character to exist. She can be summoned, but she doesn't trust the commander. He saved her and backhanded her. He just said that others were wrong and we should fight and die together outside, right?

I think this book is an ordinary blue fanfic, but it seems to be what I think a blue fanfic should be like. Whether it is the plot direction or the storyline, it perfectly fits my thoughts. Although I also think the foreshadowing at the beginning could be more perfect? If you really want to wish me anything, I wish you a smooth landing. It's normal for the score to be slightly lower because there aren't many people watching it yet. When more people watch it, the score will naturally go up.

After reading the first twenty chapters, I found that the beginning was very controversial. Let me share my opinion. First of all, the writing is good. The author does a good job in handling emotions. Xiao Guanghui's persuasion to the protagonist and his recognition of the Prince of Wales are just similar to the agreement and maintenance of beliefs between gays. The reactions of the protagonist and Xiao Guanghui are normal. Then the writing is awkward, The first one is the melon seller, that is, the later clip of the Prince of Wales selling melons is a bit weird. Originally, based on what the protagonist said before and what the Prince of Wales said to Little Guanghui when selling melons, I thought the author was implying that the Prince of Wales' commander died of thirst in the desert. But later the author wrote that the Prince of Wales had no commander, so it can only be explained that the Prince of Wales experienced some painful things and kept selling melons there. Otherwise, it would be difficult to explain why a public official of the Azur Lane branch would sell melons in the desert. The second one is about the issue of deserters. The Prince of Wales said that the two protagonists were deserters. Many people in the comment area agreed with this statement. However, the concept of deserters refers to people who fled without fighting or who fled cowardly. However, the protagonist obviously escaped after encountering a large army and being defeated by the enemy. Such soldiers who were defeated by a strong enemy should be called rout rather than deserters. Rout can be forgiven and reorganized, while deserters can only die. In addition, the protagonist kept his entire organization intact during the retreat and did not lose order. Therefore, strictly speaking, the protagonist did not break out, but broke through and retained his strength. Therefore, the Prince of Wales cannot say that the two protagonists are deserters. The third one is that the Prince of Wales arranged for the protagonist to go back and continue to guard the frontline port area after rest. The official was only responsible for recapturing the port area, but did not provide support and compensation to the protagonist. There is actually a very serious BUG here. Let's do a sandbox simulation first. The article says that the protagonist comes out of the port area into an uninhabited desert, and the Azur Lane headquarters is confident that the protagonist can be guarded by a commander with only a level 30 ship girl, which shows that this desert is almost worthless. However, it is later said that the Prince of Wales, as a public official, sells melons here, indicating that people should often pass by this desert, and it has a certain occupation value. Otherwise, Azur Lane would not let a Welsh public official with a certain combat effectiveness just sell melons here. Therefore, this desert should be a target of certain value close to the front line, and there is also a suspected transportation route through the desert. But this conflicts with the previous conclusion of worthless targets, and a valuable target is only guarded by the protagonist. How stupid must the people in this headquarters be? Even if the Prince of Wales is really just selling melons there, that would be outrageous, because it shows that there is no shortage of people in Azur Lane, and there is even free combat power, but he is unwilling to allocate some people to support the protagonist, because even if this desert is worthless, it is still an important strategic depth, and it is not necessary for just two people to defend it, which is contradictory to the previous point. Let's break away from the sandbox and take a look at Wales' arrangement. First, the protagonist is determined to be a deserter, and the protagonist is asked to return to the port area with an attitude of atonement. It is said that Azur Lane can help retake the port area, but will not compensate the protagonist. So the question is, what happens after retaking the port area? Will Azur Lane people still stay in the port area? If they don't stay, the siren's raid will be very similar to the German blitzkrieg in World War II. It is obvious that there is sufficient intelligence support. They obviously know that the defense force in this area is weak. The Azur Lane army will leave after the attack, and then the siren will come again. How do you ask the protagonist to defend it? What if the headquarters army stayed? It is not the protagonist's turn to decide whether this port area belongs to the protagonist. When the time comes, it is logical to directly deal with the protagonist as a deserter, and then absorb the protagonist's ship girl as a filler baby. Even if the protagonist is not liquidated, the protagonist is destined to be speechless in the port area. The fourth is the attitude of the Prince of Wales towards the protagonist. Let's not talk about the issue of her saying that the protagonist is a deserter. As a civil servant of Azur Lane, you are also a main battleship. You are so close to the protagonist's port area, but you just don't support the protagonist. You sit comfortably in the rear and eat watermelon by yourself. The front line is tight and the rear is tight, right? After the protagonist retreats, she arranges for the protagonist to go back and die in a superior manner, as if you have made your own mistakes and you have to take responsibility. How can she be embarrassed? Such a major mistake is obviously the fault of the command. The responsibility should be shouldered by the Azur Lane headquarters, and the protagonist should be compensated. If this kind of thing is not handled well, it will cause a rebellion in the army. With this kind of command ability, it is not even as good as the comprador army of the Fruit Party. Therefore, there is no problem with the protagonist's reaction in this book. The higher-ups don't care about his own life and the life of his shipgirl, and the protagonist himself should care too. Those armies that are not on the same page, do not care about the lives of soldiers, and force soldiers to die do not have much combat effectiveness. But it's uncomfortable because all forces in the book are more or less blaming the protagonist, which is very uncomfortable.

The emotional line between the ship girl and the protagonist is handled very well. The progress of the protagonist's relationship with the ship girl does not have the cheap feeling of other ship girl novels, and it is very immersive. He also has very good insights into the analysis of Kan Niang's thoughts. The author, please don't be a eunuch! (If possible, please revise the previous sections when you have time. This should not be the only result [face covering])

Let me tell you what I think now. The whole book is very well written, and it is considered a high-quality work among Kanmu fanfics. The emotional interaction with Kanmu is also very well written. After all, Kanmu fanfic is about the interaction with Kanmu. Personally, I think the poisonous point is that the protagonist's memory can be manipulated at will. Let alone the fact that the Sirens and the protagonist play cards are all for the protagonist's benefit. Is the "Su Chen" whose memory can be manipulated at will still "Su Chen"? The memory has been tampered with at will, which makes me feel that the protagonist is like a puppet on strings.

This book is really good to read. The relationship between the protagonist and the ship girls is well written and feels very good. The image of each ship girl is what I think is perfect. The only flaw is probably the Prince of Wales, who is a bit estranged, and Xiao Guanghui at that time. According to my understanding, Xiao Guanghui should trust the commander. Of course, the author also explained it later, and it is more or less acceptable. Generally speaking, it is one of the top three books in Azur Lane that I have read. Great support to the author, please don't stop updating! (PS: The above is just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

It's hard to say, but I always feel uncomfortable watching Prince of Wales and Little Glory. Maybe it's my problem.

It's hard to imagine that my time is not as high as some readers' time, which I have to say is a surprise

The Secretary-General of the Philosophy Level reports from the Gendarmerie next door~ I heard that you are going to do a fantasy collaboration ~ I will also start to be active in this book ~ Keep up the good work~

A popular commander is as ordinary as us and feels sorry for the girls. The first dozen or so chapters are a bit poisonous because not many people understand it. Later on, we will find that we are just like him. We are selfish and don't want girls to get hurt even if they are annoying to others. We are greedy and want all the girls by our side. The one thing that won't change is that we will always love these girls.

This book is considered acceptable among books related to Azur Lane, but some of the dialogues are quite long, which is a minor flaw, and I was a little confused about the plot arrangement at the beginning. However, this book is generally good, so I can give it four stars.

I give you five stars and let the protagonist struggle for me! ! ! ! ! Power Bond summons old friends for me! ! ! ! ! ! If you really can't struggle, just accelerate beyond the limit and synchronize, the light of evolution! ! ! ! !

This book is really good. From the content, it can be seen that the author wrote this book with intention. As for the front part, I think it is okay. This book is about the author's understanding. The front part can be seen as a pavement for the subsequent change of heart. It can also be regarded as a knife, aiming to reflect the psychology at that time... After all, I don't want to lose anything. I usually rate the book after reading it, so my five stars are a bit slow?

The daily writing is really great. It's so sweet. I'll write it down and use it as material [blowing kiss] [Crying] Storm is crying, why can't I reward you if you write something so good?

I think this is one of the best books I have ever read. The part written by the author in the previous part may make people feel a little uncomfortable at first glance, but after this paragraph, you will see the many foreshadowings laid by the author, echoing back and forth, the protagonist's experience from loss to gradual recovery. It makes people want to put it down, and the description of the bond and emotion between the ship girl and the commander is also very good, with rich details, there are laughter and tears in it, and I can deeply feel the uniqueness of the author's writing. I may not have read many novels, but I personally think this book is worth it.

I will cheer for every Azur Lane author, no matter good or bad. After all, if you can write, you are already a big step ahead of me (I can only read [face covering]). I also wish you can continue to persist in Azur Lane (there are too many to persist. If you can't persist with the author key, you can take a break, but don't give up, okay [crying]). I wish that the life of the commander of every player who loves Azur Lane can be as beautiful and pure as the battleship elves on the sea. I also wish the author can always love Azur Lane.

The psychological description is very delicate, and the ability to control the world view is strong, but the dark side of human development is not clearly expressed, and the positive impact is small. Overall, it is an entertaining book with positive energy that can bring about self-reflection and change, and has social and environmental factors.

Recommend a good book, Azur Lane. Clarifying the emotions between the ship girl and the commander is the key. This book uses an ordinary and true story to connect the emotional threads. (The explanation may be unclear in the first few pictures, but everything will become clear later on) The author is also very active, and questions can be answered. [Sending Hearts]

Come on! Write what you think, It's a good thing that someone reports it, it proves that they want to see good things, But don't let your mentality be affected! Ratings don't mean anything. Okay, okay>_<Come on! The second week of the game begins🤗 Let's see how long the banished immortal Sang can last. Happy^_^

Let me ask you, at what chapter does your own fleet begin to arrive? Or can the protagonist's awkward personality be improved?

The combat requirements are not many and are used to build the foundation. The world view is also the same, tending to use emotions as the main theme to promote the main plot. I initially thought it was a book with artistic conception, but later I found out that it was not entirely true. It was not too obsessed with the plot, and the main focus was to stimulate emotions. It must be the first time I wrote it. As for those big paragraphs, I suspect that when the author was imagining the plot, he got excited about writing it. Afterwards, he thought about it and wanted to express that sense of firmness without pausing, so he didn't divide it.

I really don't know why such a great book has such a low rating [scrolls]

Thank you for letting me see another kind of light in subspace.

I don't read my suggestions for playing my game, because there are some parts in the front where the ship girl is against her commander, but the comment section is polarizing. I suspect that if you just skip the first few, the rest are very good, I will continue to taste them.

To be honest, the front part is a little bit toxic, but it wasn't a big problem for me and I finished it smoothly.

It is not recommended for those who play our game. In the early part, you have your own ship girl standing on your opposite side. That's all.

Looking at the comment section, everyone knows how important a good beginning is. The first 20 chapters completely confused me.

It seems that if it is less than half an hour, it will not be counted as a score.

I forgot to give a star rating, so I'll add it now. Five stars for you (^▽^*))) By the way, "please" hand over your manuscript, author [laughing evilly] This is my support for Bilan and your novel, the content is quite exciting. Also - when will you be able to break through six updates a day? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Why hasn't there been a good blue novel for so long? It's not just that there aren't many people writing about it, but it's also very difficult to write into a novel. Compared with other blue novels, this one is pretty good, but in itself it is still not good. I can only say that this is not my ideal ship girl. Individuals have different opinions on how to develop ship girls, and we know very little about them. There are also character voices and memory files, and the meaning emerges after reading the book a hundred times. I hope the author will get better and better