A Touch of Red in Another World

I just like reading this kind of novel. It's the kind of novel that gets stuck when it accidentally hits the red line.

Give yourself five stars 😏

It's pretty good, but the writing is a bit problematic. Sometimes there's too much dialogue. I personally think it could use some action when speaking. There are also some chapters where you can introduce the current situation or write about other things at the beginning, otherwise the pace will feel a bit fast, such as the beginning: Thanks to the fearless spirit of the Red Army soldiers and the solid support of the farmers who received the land, the white areas in the north were quickly liberated. Although the White Army had an advantage in equipment, the Red Army's high morale and guerrilla warfare, coupled with the complex terrain of the forests in the northern region, drove the invading enemies to a crawl. After thinking about it, the theater commander sent a request to Su Ze to stop the attack at the edge of the forest. ... And there are so few people there. I'm afraid you won't update anymore.

Comrade is more than just a word. It's faith

It fits my fantasy of revolution very well (

It's really good to watch, and the plot really attracted me, but the writing style still has room for improvement. By the way, author, can you update it faster? The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.

Comrade, although renewal is important, the body is the capital of revolution, come on!

Learn more about how others write.

Come on, comrade! (It's so pretty)

The author should update soon. It would be best if a revolution breaks out in all the worlds. This way, you can watch it for two more years [laughing]