In the Male************

It looks okay, my friends came to support me, hehe [laughing evilly]

Overall, it's okay, but the sentences are not very fluent. You can finish writing it first and then read it yourself.

Dear author, you finally updated. I waited until the flowers withered [crying]

It's very interesting, good luck to the author💪!

Yes, but I hope you can write 10,000 words a day

Single, married, or married?

I wrote a five-star review [Thoughts]

Big cheers for the author! ! !

It's really good