In Konoha, Trained by Orochimaru

I just got it today. I directly saw the update section. It is very well written. There are very few Naruto books that write about card palaces. Currently, there are only two books including this one. I think they are very well written. But this book has time travel from the beginning, and the idea of replacing chakra with natural energy is very good (after all, the first generation relied on fairy magic to win, and so did the six paths). It does not need to be based on blood, and it is well-founded. I just feel that the description of swordsmanship is not good. There is still too little accumulation of card palaces at present. I know how to do it. It doesn't feel systematic enough, but the Sannin is still there, the White Fang's flash is still there, plus Kakashi and Narusa Akai who grew up later have a Dai, they can directly penetrate the Akatsuki organization without any problem, unlike Konoha, which only has two people at the beginning of the anime. Come on, the author should write slowly and steadily in the future. You can do some extra plots or bigger actions. The next generation of twelve little ones can directly replace chakra with natural energy. There is also Shisui Itachi Obito. I forgot about these three. With this lineup, I can sweep through 4 villages without any pressure. It also means that there is no advantage in the number of people above Madara level.

Not enough, not enough at all. There is no system or plug-ins. I only relied on my own foresight to reach this point. The writing is very good. It feels like a combination of traditional fantasy writing style and Naruto fandom.

This book is super great! First of all, it is one of the few books written about Kakashi. Secondly, there are no surprises at the moment. The author's writing skills are also good and the plot is worthy of the plot. The characters are not noobs, and it is refreshing enough. In short, it is enjoyable to read without losing your mind. I hope the author can grasp the subsequent emotional scenes and keep writing. It will be another masterpiece of Naruto!

The author's thinking is very clear. There is no water in the whole process, it is all sugar. I thought I would be disgusted with the repetitive plot when I watched New Era Class 7, but I was wrong. When grabbing the bell, Namikaze Minato's admonishment was in his mind. Nazuo was arguing, and in his mind was Kawa who was arrogant towards Kakashi. When Bai took action, Qing, who would rather die than surrender, was in his mind. I saw the shadow of Kakashi's old friend in them. The feeling of such a vicissitudes of life is really helpless and happy. When Kawaharu died, there must have been no pain. I believe Kakashi can take revenge!

It's quite good. I started to follow up from the 100,000 words mark to the finale, but the finale is quite sudden. I hope more people will read the author's next work! Come on!!! 😘😘😘

I don't have a harem, I like the beginning of Uncle Snake and Kakashi's master and apprentice, I have read more than a hundred chapters, basically all the friends from the village are there, but the strength increases too quickly, the battle scenes are not good, and there are few dialogues (the shouting skills are set), compared to the recent Naruto Fans, (it starts with Sharingan at every turn, and then never goes out of the door without taking a step forward, struggling every day, and then there is a love-brained girl chasing after me, my God, there are more than ten chapters dealing with things in the same place, all dialogues, not a single battle scene).

It's a very good fanfic. It starts from a young age and is reincarnated. The response to various events and the timing of the transition are great. There are no bad points. The most important thing is that this author updates super quickly! [Taste carefully] I am personally more curious about the feelings of the protagonist [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua] So far, I have not seen any character who may become the heroine. I hope the author will be more cautious in choosing the heroine. The ending is a little rushed, but overall it is still a pretty good Naruto fanfic. I hope the author will continue his work and add more daily elements [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] and emotional scenes

It's okay, there's no emotional drama, the timeline is on point, and the overall structure is pretty good, even better than other books! It's a bit faster in the later stage, but it's reasonable. It's okay to give it five stars.

Very good, has its own timeline, does not lick the protagonist, and kills decisively

"Sage Kakashi" reconstructs the character's fate with a groundbreaking setting, giving Kakashi the power of the Six Paths and the Eye of Reincarnation, showing his transformation from a "five-and-a-half" to a savior leader. The story combines ninjutsu innovation and emotional bonding, and through plots such as Kaguya's battle and the reconstruction of Konoha, it strengthens his "savior" qualities, and at the same time completes the personal growth and responsibility that were not touched in the original work.