Yan hope found that he had traveled through time
Bad news: He's going to die soon.
Good news: The wage earner who has become the Lord God can continue to live.
Bad news: It seems to be the outer box of the Lord God's gift package.
Good news: Fortunately, as a gift box, he was compensated and started his long journey as a dimensional invader~~
All in all
This is the story of an unlucky guy who traveled through time and became a wage earner of the Lord God, working in countless worlds.
Reader comments
It's okay. Maybe it's because the total number of words is a little less and the plot hasn't reached its peak yet. I just have a slight desire to watch it, but I don't have a strong desire to watch it. Meow
The writing is smooth, and the protagonist also hides his arrogance. Although it is not completely covered up, it does not make the reader feel an obvious feeling of emptiness.
There are currently fourteen chapters. If you want to write it well, you must pay attention to some knowledge that already exists in reality when you reach around chapter twenty-five.
If you connect certain chains of the world in the article and form a system, it will be a truly successful book.
However, if you don't do it, just think of it as a dream, it has a lot of flavor.
The sentences are logical and smooth, and if you have a certain world view, more people will read it.
I give you five stars today, meow~
It's okay. Maybe it's because the total number of words is a little less and the plot hasn't reached its peak yet. I just have a slight desire to watch it, but I don't have a strong desire to watch it. Meow The writing is smooth, and the protagonist also hides his arrogance. Although it is not completely covered up, it does not make the reader feel an obvious feeling of emptiness. There are currently fourteen chapters. If you want to write it well, you must pay attention to some knowledge that already exists in reality when you reach around chapter twenty-five. If you connect certain chains of the world in the article and form a system, it will be a truly successful book. However, if you don't do it, just think of it as a dream, it has a lot of flavor. The sentences are logical and smooth, and if you have a certain world view, more people will read it. I give you five stars today, meow~
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