Beyond the Ascension to Immortality

[Correction Building] [Opinion Building] Hello everyone, if you have any suggestions or good ideas; or if you find typos, wrong sentences, confusing chapters, etc., You can post them here and I will correct them as soon as possible.

Not bad, a relatively new book. The story is exciting and not cliche, and the logic is relatively rigorous. It's just that the author is too slow in updating. It is recommended to update ten times a day!

Demonic author: The current plot of the story is okay. Please change it quickly. Don't use modern words such as Arabic numerals, meters, hours, etc. In the article. The articles on cultivating immortals are written based on the ancient times, so the words that appear should be capital letters from one to ten; inches, feet, feet; how many hours, etc. In order to avoid lowering the review star and affecting the rating! Give me five stars to encourage you! I would like to make some small requests and update more quickly, so as to attract more readers! Percentage should not appear in the article, and should be based on the percentage of probability. During the Qi training period, the state can be divided into nine or twelve levels. During the Qi training period, the subsequent state can be divided into early stage, middle stage, late stage and peak stage.

Not bad, very good!

I have been reading this book for dozens of hours and it is very well written.

It's a pity that there is no messy stallion drama. The pure fairy tale is very beautiful. It's a pity that it's all over. I don't know who the heroine is? 😂😂

Very good version

There is no messy relationship between men and women. The plot is very good

Come on, come on, let's take a look together, hey hey hey

The story has twists and turns, the writing is smooth, and you won't be able to put it down. May the author work hard and reach higher levels.