Rise in Another World: The Great Nation Dream System

The subject matter of the novel is very attractive, but can it be less clumsy? It only takes a few seconds to turn the page. Some things don't need to be described in such detail. The system provides such high-end things. If it still develops slowly like this, then the protagonist is too boastful.

I heard that this is the author's first book. I originally wanted to give it 2 stars, but after thinking about it, I decided to give it 3 stars! First of all, your self-harmony is too thorough! They stipulate that they should not be involved in politics, not be reactionary, and have three correct views! It's not about changing your harmony beyond recognition! Secondly, it is still a common problem among Internet article authors nowadays to get angry! A lot of content that has nothing to do with the main line can be brushed off in one go. For example, about weaving, why do you have to write it in such detail? Do you still expect readers to engage in related industries?

I can't give a five-star review to my book too much😁

Really dragging and dragging rhythm

I don't understand why it's so confusing

It's so long-winded, I feel so tired when I look at it, I can't turn the pages until my hands are numb.

Too much nonsense, more than 20 chapters and only 13 people.