This is the first time in the world of immortal cultivation that such a wild sword cultivator appears.
It doesn't matter if he doesn't know how to use a sword. He doesn't have a sword yet.
Even if he doesn't have a sword, he still has a congenital physical defect.
According to the standards of sword cultivators, he definitely failed.
But in fact...
"No, this kid just casually struck a sword, why is it so terrifying?"
Gu Qing spread his hands with an innocent expression:
"The problem is that I never said I was weak?"
Reader comments
The author's writing style is very good, and his language is full of witty jokes.
Personally, I felt that the scene after killing the Baixiang Ghost and Chen Yanyan returning to their residence was a bit abrupt. Then, the description of the imperial city and various villages could be added a little bit, and finally, the appearance and demeanor of the characters could be added a little bit.
The language is really good. You can roughly describe the character's personality through words, but it would be better if there was more about appearance. You can also add something when changing scenes. These are my personal humble opinions. I have read some novels and feel that if the author improves to a small level, the works can be very good.
Come on! ! ! I'm optimistic about you [top post] [please update]
Short and weak but exciting
Short and weak, but wonderful [laughing][laughing][laughing]
It's interesting, but a little short. I read it in one sitting. Great support to the author.
The author's writing style is very good, and his language is full of witty jokes. Personally, I felt that the scene after killing the Baixiang Ghost and Chen Yanyan returning to their residence was a bit abrupt. Then, the description of the imperial city and various villages could be added a little bit, and finally, the appearance and demeanor of the characters could be added a little bit. The language is really good. You can roughly describe the character's personality through words, but it would be better if there was more about appearance. You can also add something when changing scenes. These are my personal humble opinions. I have read some novels and feel that if the author improves to a small level, the works can be very good. Come on! ! ! I'm optimistic about you [top post] [please update]
Short and weak but exciting
Short and weak, but wonderful [laughing][laughing][laughing]
It's interesting, but a little short. I read it in one sitting. Great support to the author.