Pokemon: How Could the School Beauty Ever Fall for Me?

The writing is good and worth recommending. The daily novel has little to do with Pokémon and is a bit sweet, so I will treat it as a romance novel.

This book is well written. Are we here to watch the protagonist raise Pokémon to battle? Who has nothing to do to watch Pokémon battles, right? Aws, I hope my sister will become a yandere in the future (Long live Shura Field, long live yandere≧▽≦)

I feel that some of the dialogues are a bit polite in writing the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It is not because the female protagonist is alienated from the male protagonist. It is as if they are not brothers and sisters, but just friends who have just met. And the writing skills need to be improved. Come on [like] I wish you better and better writing.

The appraisal is completed, brother controls the elf text. The heroine is slightly yandere or not really yandere, she is controlling and possessive but not to the point of morbidity. Then the male and female protagonists have similar looks, with silver hair and blue eyes. However, Tomato did not allow people to write about marriage, so the author was sanctioned and changed. Therefore, the relationship between the male and female protagonists depends on everyone's own xp. Pokémon are not very popular. Anyway, I haven't seen the ones that the protagonist currently collects in other Pokémon novels, or maybe I haven't read enough. The author's writing is very good, the daily life is very good, the battles are also good, the character creation is also very good, the heroine is particularly proactive, well, that's what you understand. Let me make a digression: A lot of the elf novels I read don't have female protagonists. I'm used to it, so I don't know how other people feel.

Come on, author, there are very few good Pokémon books on Tomato, I hope they won't stop updating (ᐡっ ̫ •̥⸝⸝ᐡ)

It's pretty good to watch. In fact, I prefer watching Baili. Even if the protagonist brother and sister can't be together, they can't let others succeed. Write more emotionally ambiguous scenes. But after all, this is a place where I lived a good life. It's quite normal for the protagonist to be with his sister.

So far, the plot seems reasonable, the writing is average, the author has experience with Pokémon, and communicates frequently with readers. Rich potential The emotional line of Pokémon's family is an insurmountable mountain for most authors. Judging from the current situation, the author has written well and there is no sign of collapse. As long as it is written like this and does not make any mistakes, it will be fine (it's okay to use a sword, but don't go too far). Now that both parties are young, there is no rush to write the emotional line. Let's finish the career of both parties first. As for the problem of orthopedic violations, the author can just find the opportunity to set up a reasonable reason for not being his biological child. He can first give hints, such as returning to the orphanage by chance and looking through the files or relics left by his parents. To add a positive point, there is no system to give seven to eight, there is only a golden finger based on qualifications and skills. I don't like that kind of fancy system, so this is the best.

This is the best Pokémon article I've seen so far! If I couldn't only give it five stars, I would give it 100 stars! What I was knocking was Tiantian's CP, but in my heart I was snatching away Baili. In my dream, I was eating dog food, and what I was shouting was, "It's so sweet!" This book is not a cool book in the absolute sense, but it is definitely comfortable to read for people who don't like cool books or like cool books. It pleases both ends. So far, in the pages I have read, my sister has a little yandere attribute, but it is not very deep. I hope it can be deepened in the subsequent plot [laughing]. Also, author, how did you make my xp become barefoot with bells? You give me back my white silk~ How can I repair it! The author has a very good attitude towards admitting mistakes. If there are typos, he will basically correct them. If he has suggestions, he will basically listen to them. He usually wanders around in the comment area (please code the words for me quickly). To sum up: [smile] Can you let me mua Baili? (ﾉωﾉ)

It is good-looking and different from ordinary Pokémon articles. Combining the beast-controlling text with it can better show the style of urban Pokémon. The living Pokémon has more daily life writing methods that are different from simple adventures. The article talks about the two brothers and sisters, the shadow of the destiny, the love that is not accepted by the world, the innocence and persistence of love, the mutual respect and mutual affection. It can be said that it is acceptable among free software like Tomato. I hope this book can continue, and I also hope that the brother and sister will have a good ending. The last thing to say is - Three Spoons, you really deserve to die! . Ahem, it turns out that Bai Munan already knows that she likes Bai Li. Can the author push their progress quickly? (I prefer to watch the plot of the two of them, and I just like to eat dog food [shy] eh hey [smile] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen])

Looks good, what are you biting? What is it! ! Are we together? As long as my sister and Pokémon are [shy], otherwise I will give a bad review. All I can say is that it looks good, it looks so good, the plot is okay and not bad at all, sister, hey, my sister [Admiration]