With All Due Respect, Dragon Ball and Human Novels Are No Longer Masterpieces. If You Don't Agree, Come and Argue!
With all due respect, Dragon Ball and human novels are no longer masterpieces. If you don't agree, come and argue!
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I really like the author's books. I have read every book by the author. The quality is very high. I highly recommend it.
It's very good-looking. Gohan's character in the original novel will not be changed just because he has read the original novel and merged the memories of the time travellers. The growth rate of his combat power is only a little higher than that of the original novel. It is innocuous. This is the correct way to open Dragon Ball. The speed at which the combat power of various Dragon Ball time travelers expands without thinking is simply outrageous. Broly is weak compared to them.
It's pretty cool, but the treatment of Bulma is still very unclear. Just try to make it as reasonable as possible, but for now, don't start a harem (´△｀) Bulma is a childhood regret, any more would be too much. After all, it's based on the original Goku, and Goku is not the kind of person who would cheat.
The writing is really good, the treasure author, let Goku and Bulma be together, which solved the regret we had when watching Dragon Ball. The description of Bulma's psychology is really good, and the author should not make Goku weaker than Gohan, let them chase each other, this is interesting, don't write Goku without a sense of existence!
Come on! You wrote well!
I finally saw a normal Dragon Ball fanfic. Most of the Dragon Ball fanfics basically have a kind of no-brainer writing [especially those about improving combat power without brains], but it's only written by you, the author. I don't have this feeling at the moment, come on! !
The writing is okay. After all, it's just a fan. It incorporates plots from many games, TV, and comics. I feel that the length is just right. I hope that next time I won't include the author's subjective thoughts in the novel and let the story unfold its own plot and setting.
I finally found a book about Gohan who didn't travel through time to become Gohan. Every time I watch Dragon Ball, I get annoyed by Satanòᆺó
The only Dragon Ball fanfic on Tomato that I have read has such a low rating and no one has read it yet. Other Dragon Ball fanfics are basically one-hit wonders. Compared to the original Dragon Ball, which is famous for its power collapse, the fanfics are even more difficult to write. This book is very good except for the anxious ending and a slightly sloppy ending.
The setting of Soul Fusion Gohan is good, but in terms of plot, I feel that Vegeta and Bulma are more suitable. Although this will reduce a lot of plots, I can write more fighting plots! Overall very good!
It's very interesting, the plot is very exciting, it really beats more than 90% of the fanfics. As someone who often reads fanfics, I think it's super good. As for why the data is not good, I guess more people like to watch the system flow now. They don't like people who slowly become stronger, and they like people who are invincible at the beginning. I hope the author will not give up easily, come on! ! !
The content is very good. Most people may not want to see the Shura Field in the deleted scenes. Isn't Dragon Ball just about fists and feet breaking stars? However, the author's daily life is also well written. What if the Shura field is not annoying [laughing]
I agree to open a harem for Wukong, author, just write it boldly! ! ! !
The book is wonderful, good luck to the author. [Like][Like][Like]
On the surface, he is the protagonist Gohan, but secretly he is opening a harem for Goku, right?
Sun Wukong and Bulma together [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The plot is quite interesting, so I'm curious to ask, what will Bidili do next?
Author: I have a friend who was stabbed 287 times. The knife missed his vital part. Ga Qian's novel has stopped updating. So, author, I don't want you to be like my friend [Sending Hearts]
Very good, but Bulma and Goku have to figure out how to make it a circle? If the roundness is not good, probably not many people will read the book.
It's okay, except for a few weird chapters in the middle, but it's really well written. Also, please give me a few more chapters, author [please read carefully]. This is enough for anyone to read. If the next door saw it, they would think we can't read [laughter] [laughter]
I like this book very much
Give me some support, okay!
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Not bad, cheers for the author.
I have read a lot of books about Dragon Ball, and this is generally in line with my taste. I hope the author will continue to update it, and I won't say anything else. Highly recommended.
I like it very much. I hope the author can keep writing. Finally, I hope Goku and Vegeta won't be left behind too much.
Good! Goku and Gohan are almost as good as the one portrayed in the original work. OCC is great. Opening a harem for Goku is very exciting [laughing][laughing]
The writing is so good, why is the rating so low? I support you and cheers [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
Come on, come on, I've wanted to read this kind of book for a long time. [Top post][Top post][Top post][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]
Well written, worth recommending