Dragon King*******

Yes, it's pretty.

It's awesome, I'll show you my thoughts. [Love]

Keep up the good work. The author writes beautifully.

The author gives himself a perfect score, not too much~✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩

Good-looking, but a little lacking_(:з∠)_

When this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan. I hope the author doesn't stop updating it.

The author is really experienced, come on, I will always support you

This book is really good! By the way, Gu Yuena and Tang Wulin's CPs won't be broken, right?

Very interesting, come on, author

Author, come out quickly. Can I shoot you to death with a 40-meter machete? Such cute Xing Mian has lost her memory. The author should change it back. I really like the "dumplings" stuffed with black sesame seeds.

Wow, the writing is super good, and the characters are not broken at all. It is the best portrayal of the original characters in Douluo fanfiction that I have ever seen. Mianmian is so cute [Sending my heart] I hope the author can keep updating it

It's very interesting, so I just want to make a small suggestion. If the author doesn't like it, you can ignore it. That is, could Xing Mian be a little less prone to red eyes or crying? The writing is still good, but it's just a personal opinion.

Very good, come on author

"About feeling the author's strong desire for five stars while reading"

From the current point of view, I feel that the younger brother is too strong (referring only to strength), and the elder brother's edge is covered up (referring only to forging). Also, when something goes wrong, it is all the younger brother who does it, and the older brother becomes the background. It would be better if the two of them come up with some novel actions or highlight their actions when something happens. The above are just personal feelings

The author, please don't be cool! Come on! Always support you! Because the people who write this kind of books basically stop publishing in the end, but I believe that the author will never be disappointed, and he will definitely be able to write it to the end, waiting for your update [smile][smile][smile]

I have to say that you, the author, are really hard-working, much more diligent than the authors of the Douluo fanfics on my bookshelf.

Seeing as the author that you are going crazy for wanting five stars, I will give you a five star [laughing evilly]

Woman, you and your book have successfully attracted my attention [love], you'd better update [love], woman, I advise you to be more knowledgeable [smile]

Come on, author ＾0＾~, but if it is too high, it will be removed from the shelves. Several Douluo Tongwen books were removed from the shelves just like this [crying][crying][crying]

It's pretty good, I like to read it, but I hope the author can update it soon, because there are so few Douluo 3, I'm so embarrassed [crying]

Tang Xingmian, hehehe (ｰ̀εｰ́)

Give him five stars first, then the protagonist wants him to suffer

It's still very interesting to read, but I was confused by the unexpected event [amnesia]. I searched the full text before choosing between starting another project or waiting for the memory to be fully restored. Fortunately, there is a situation where it needs to be restored. I personally wait until the memory is fully restored before reading (don't comment if you don't like it, anyway, this is a 4-star review, delete it if you comment [this thing should be deleted] (≖_≖ ))

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! (Do you need to control the score? I need to modify it. Several fanfiction books on my bookshelf were removed from the shelves by the restaurant because the score was too high [crying] [crying]) Also, a quick question, when does it usually update?

The author really wants five stars, so I'll give them to you. I only have one request. I want the author's thumbs up\^O^/

Come on everyone, Mianmian is so cute, try to get more updates [Adoration][Adoration]

Don't give up, keep at it!

Very nice, I like it very much

Take a good look, author, please give it a try