Using Distortion to Reach a Happy Ending in Honkai Impact 3rd

As far as my current perception is concerned, the plot arrangement and setting are quite good. The only problem is that the description of the text is too simple. I have read a novel called "Mengmeng Classic of Mountains and Seas" before, which is exactly the opposite of yours. Every point is written in detail, which is very annoying to read. As the author, you write every point very simply, and the plot transitions are not obvious, so when you read it, it will make people feel inexplicable. Normally speaking of a novel, Some parts should be written in a simple way, and some should be written in a detailed way. The simplest thing is that for the fighting part, it would be too boring to write just a few words about drinking and haha during a fight. Of course, this is just the key part. There are other places similar to this. Changes in emotions are very important. There are also a lot of settings and backgrounds such as the protagonist's cognition. They are all very good. The only problem is that for suggestions on writing, you can ask more friends to give opinions. Come on!

This book is very readable and amazing. The first and second readings have completely different feelings. (Don't think of me as a human machine, not a human machine) (´•ﻌ•`)

Greening Otto made his life worse than death.

Nothing to say

Uh, can you not describe too much about your own psychology? 🤔 Just appropriate. I have seen too many psychological descriptions by the author in Chapter 16.

I think this book is very good, especially the personal setting where the protagonist's ability is distorted is particularly novel and powerful.

It's okay, I'm just an old fan [laughing evilly], too few people have watched it, and no one has commented on it.

I know why it's not popular 🙂🙂🙂

Very beautiful, good luck to the author

The plot is good, but the segments are too uncomfortable [face covering]