General Menhuzi of Water Margin

The language in it seems to be the same as that of a famous book, which is very good.

The content of the story is well written, including battles on the battlefield and rivers and lakes. I hope the author will increase his efforts in updating the story, so that it does not end unfinished or dies suddenly, and can successfully complete this work according to this rhythm.

The writing is great. I have read a lot of Tomato's novels about traveling through the Water Margin. This one is considered a ceiling level. I hope I will continue to work hard and not be too eunuch or unfinished. I take back what I said before

Come on, write well, at least 30 million words, I will always support you

Update soon. Don't be too unfinished. Don't be too unfinished. Think carefully in the middle. I've read too many unfinished Water Margin novels. This early version is already acceptable [currently in development]

There is a plot, rhythm, clear characters, and a sense of substitution.

The writing is good, I just hope Song Jiangwu won't be allowed to live too long with those bastards like Wang Ying Those who follow Water Margin must fight against the Song Dynasty, destroy the Liao Dynasty and destroy the Jin Dynasty, but once it is too closely related to mythology and immortality, it becomes meaningless!

The author skillfully blends the essence of the original work and depicts the heroism and loyalty of Liangshan heroes with a unique writing style, making these classic characters glow with new vitality in the new story. The author's Water Margin fan work not only retains the essence of the original work, but also innovatively expands the world view and characters of the story, making each character lifelike and the storyline fascinating. The author's Water Margin fan work is like a vivid ink painting, which has the weight of the original work and is full of modern flavor. During the reading process, people can not only feel the precipitation of history, but also experience the author's unique artistic charm. Anyway, I am fascinated by what the author writes. There are only 6 historical books on Tomato that I think are good. This is the only Water Margin fanfic, and most of the other books have been discontinued. But the author still insists, which makes people feel that the author should be ignored and ignored by some short-sighted people who want to slander the author for no reason. Come on! [Laughing out loud]

Don't give up, author, this is the best Water Margin fanfic I've ever read. The writing is exquisite, and the plot twists and turns are profound. Some of the plots are cleverly designed, such as the part about Xu Guanzhong, and some people say about Black Songjiang. There must be villains in literary and artistic creations. Everything is exactly the same as the original work, so why not just read the original work?

This is definitely the first Tomato and Water Margin. The author not only explains the characters and story background in detail, making it easier for readers to watch and understand. And the writing is good, slow-burning. Worthy of praise [top post][please update]

I have also been a bookworm for many years, and I also like history. When I first read this book, I was a little confused. I have also read Water Margin mixed with other high-quality novels of the romance genre. The writing and the plot were pretty good at first, but when I saw that there were spells in Ruyunlong Gongsun Sheng... I couldn't accept it because I was influenced by some novels of the same type that I had seen before. The author basically won't write about things at this level, such as thunder methods, etc., And usually replaces them with another method, such as health maintenance or other things. Although I also explained later that I received a big backlash after using this technique, I always feel that it is easy to be criticized if the mid- and post-processing is not good... Well... There are no other things. The novel has a four-star rating, and friends who like romance genres can read it. As long as the details are handled conveniently and it's not unfinished, it's a top-notch masterpiece among the historical novels of Tomato. It's just that I have some preconceived ideas. [Salute]

It's very nice. The author's logic is very clear and his knowledge is very profound. While he can discuss the Water Margin in the form of a novel, he also adds many other romances and historical knowledge. The author's assessment of various combat powers is very pertinent and highly consistent with me. There is no smoky atmosphere like Douyin, where many of my favorite characters are completely blackened and useless. So when I see the author giving so many characters so much ink, like Xie Zhen, Xie Baoleiheng, etc., I really admire it. I hope the author will update more in the future and continue to work hard (I have now seen Shi Qianfei Bao and I want to ask when Yang Xiong and Ou Peng will be described. Yang Xiong's two good brothers have gone up the mountain in advance. The part where Ou Peng fights Pang Wanchun makes my blood boil even now. I really like these characters [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration])

A good book, indeed a good book. The writing and the main character's thoughts are very good and the ideas are clear. And the origins of some characters are also very clear. I really don't find any shortcomings. Most of the Water Margin books are very fast-paced, but this one has a really good pace. I don't know why so few people have read it. The rhythm of this book is very similar to that of "Water Margin Survival", but the plot is different. It is obviously a good book, but few people have read it. Good luck to the author.

Shouldn't Lu Zhishen be a rough guy? But I feel that in this novel, he speaks and behaves in a very elegant manner.

Blind Guessing about the Male Protagonist's Wife Hu Sanniang [Eating Melon]

@ Xuanyue I like it very much! ! But here are a few places to mention, Duyingshan, Crosspo, Yinmachuan, Mengzhou, Jizhou, Mangdang Mountain, and Huangmen Mountain. When will the heroes appear on the scene? How else could I kill Song Jiang and Wu Yong? I wasn't pissed off by these two villains while reading the book.

It's good-looking, refreshing but not a novice. The writing is very stable, which is rare in Tomato. Compared with other Tomato novels about Water Margin, it's very close to the original work. Come on, author, don't be influenced by people who don't know how to appreciate it. Come on, update more

To be honest, it's a bit awkward to have a human soul wear things, but if you don't have a soul to wear it, it's hard to get along with the Di family, and the rest is fine. The highlights of the title, the highlights of quoting materials to answer questions [please take a closer look]. In short, "Water Margin" is a very good work.

They are one of the best among the Tomato novel Water Margin fans.

First of all, the chapter-style title makes people feel very emotional. Secondly, there is a flavor of Water Margin between the lines, and the storyline is also fascinating, so I give it a thumbs up. Finally, I hope that the novel will not be unfinished and that I can finish it with high quality.

Compared with the general Water Margin writing style, this article is more delicate and not at all trivial.

I think the author's writing is pretty good, especially with the original descriptions of the characters and analysis of their combat power! Unless you are familiar with Water Margin to a certain extent, you wouldn't be able to write it! The author is attentive! ! No matter what others say, I really enjoy watching it! ! !

Did you mention the characters in Yue Quan's biography? It is said that there is also Di Lei, a descendant of Di Qing, in Yue, and he is said to be the hammer general of the Eight Hammers of the Yue Family Army!

I hope every author can persevere so that they can know whether it is worth it or not. I am a history buff, and I have read many original works and derivative works or fan creations, but this book ingeniously integrates the scattered small worlds into a big whole. Although it is originally a whole, I really like this kind of brotherhood, and I also understand a lot of plots that I didn't know before. The author's popular science is very good and very careful. I don't think this is a word count because it helps to understand the plot and it is not a cool article. A good article must be so step-by-step. I also like some original points. It adds a lot of color to the article. Anyway, I hope I can stick with it. I will read it until the author stops writing. Of course, I really hope it will be officially finished. Thank you for your hard work.

There is an emotional issue, an issue with something brought from modern times, and a typo problem. The rest is not a problem. It mainly depends on how the author writes the characters. The character analysis is also very good, except for the female characters.

This book is just right in terms of plot conception and character description, giving people the feeling that Shi Naian is writing a low-end version of Water Margin. Finally, to sum up, this book is definitely a crushing success among tomato classics (I feel it is several times better than other classics, I hope the author can keep writing and don't end it) [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

It's very good. The plot is not blunt, the writing is good, and the length of each chapter is very sincere. In terms of content, it seems that the author has done a lot of research on each side of the story. The content written is well-founded and has a storyteller feel. Please support it✊👍

The writing is really beautiful. The protagonist and supporting characters are flesh and blood, unlike mindless novels, with rigorous details. The author likes to interact, and he likes to interact even if he encounters something that readers don't understand. Where can you find this kind of treasured author and book? Show me it all! ! ! I want this book to be the first in Tomato Water Margin

Although I haven't come into contact with many novels on this subject, when I read this article, I still found it quite interesting and of high quality.

The princess of the Liao Kingdom is an unimagined path that no previous Water Margin novels have thought of. I am very curious about what kind of head wife the author will arrange. I hope it can bring us surprises [laughter]. In my impression, the most interesting heroine in Water Margin and Song Dynasty is the effeminate Gao Chong (the younger sister of the original Gao Chong is pretending to be her brother).