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Let me comment on the advantages. As a single heroine, the romance line of the story is not drawn out. The character settings of the male and female protagonists are quite good, and the sugar content is very high. Disadvantages: The main plot is not very clear and it is difficult to retain readers, especially after the relationship between the male and female protagonists is established. The plot is relatively dull and even repetitive in many places. However, in Tomato, a hodgepodge of novel platforms, it is a good source of information and worth reading. As a reader, I also have some suggestions. The author can make more twists and turns, add a little knife, or even separate the male and female protagonists for a period of time, write a content with two lines between the male and female protagonists, and darken the female protagonist who is the leader of the demon sect to add some excitement. In the end, I just hope that this novel won't be a eunuch. There are too many authors who have written another novel. There are only a few novels that can be completed normally. If the author has no idea of ​​​​continuing, it would be good to just create a happy ending. At least it will give the readers who keep reading a not perfect but at least a satisfactory ending.

Ah, I read novels. I am on the Tomato app. I also read two accounts on this app, which adds up to almost 2,000 hours. I don't want to talk about anything. It's awesome. The writing is okay and the plot is okay, but these are not important. He doesn't drag out the plot. He talks about important things three times. It's really comfortable to watch.

This book is really good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ It is definitely not a brush with ratings. This is a rising star. If the author doesn't mess up, the rating will definitely be nine. It is a kind of fantasy sweet novel. There are not too many funny plots, but it is really sweet, so sweet. [Blowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] is much better than the fantasy sweet novels I have read before, and urban sweet novels are not as good as this one. Like, like, like (/≧▽≦/)

I finished reading it in one go. It's really good. It's almost the same plot as the previous book I read (both the female protagonist is in a vegetative state and the male protagonist is caught in a state of joy), but this one feels much faster and sweeter than that one. Anyway, I personally feel that this one is better than that one.

It's really cool to watch it without half a brain, it's so good and I love watching it [KISS]

The writing is good, and the inner life of the heroine is very likable, but the updates are not enough! Come on, author!

Woohoo, it's so sweet, sweet and interesting, the heroine is so cute [crying][crying][crying] Author, do you plan to give your husband a child in the future [laughing evilly], I want a daughter [please taste it carefully]

Very sweet and fast. How can I describe it as sweet? After watching it in one night, I kept smiling unconsciously. The speed of the car is actually not that fast, but the experienced driver in the comment area drove it faster [laughing evilly] If you like daily life and love, I highly recommend you to try watching it. [Sending Hearts]

The author keeps writing, it suits my taste very well

The general outline is somewhat similar to that of Li Hanyi next door, but the details are very well written.

Not much to say, it's really good-looking, with a single heroine + daily life + plot, it's absolutely amazing.

The plot development and sugar welfare aspects of this book are very good and attractive. It is one of the best books I have read in Tomato. The plot development outline is quite organized, and the daily sweet articles are also very warm to read. Such a good-looking book deserves to be read by more people. Support the author, come on!

I can only say that the sweetness is off the charts. After facing the heroine at the beginning, it has always been sweet. [Sending Hearts] After Xiao Rourou woke up, her feelings for the hero were even more heartbreaking to me. My heart would beat violently just looking at it. It was too strong. It is no exaggeration to say that if I could meet such a girl in real life, I would only give my heart to her. Go and spoil [crying] [crying] [crying] The emotional scenes are very well written, but as the plot progresses and the male protagonist's strength is improved to the same level of powerhouse, it is not so strong to advance the story. I really like this early plot [blowing kiss] The author will keep up the good work, come on

This fantasy novel is like a grand and magnificent picture, slowly unfolding in a fantasy realm. The author uses his wild imagination to build a world full of mysterious spiritual powers, rare animals and ancient ruins, making people fall deeply into it as soon as they step into it. The protagonist embarks on a journey from ignorance to ordinary life to change his destiny. His growth path is full of thorns but passionate. Every battle is depicted in a thrilling way, with brilliant spells and majestic spiritual energy clashing, as if they are about to break through the shackles of the pages of the book. And under the passion, the bond between the protagonist and his partners is like a trickle, tender and indestructible, adding a touch of warmth to this fantasy world. The book not only contains ups and downs of the plot, but also contains in-depth philosophical thoughts on fate, good and evil, and inheritance. The author uses the pen as a sword to break through the illusion of fantasy, allowing readers to unconsciously think about the true meaning of life while reading. The writing is smooth and natural, and the rhetoric is rich and gorgeous yet smart. Sometimes it is majestic and majestic like a bell, and sometimes it is as delicate and graceful as the sound of silk and bamboo. It perfectly presents the wonder and splendor of the fantasy world. It is a masterpiece of fantasy and is worth savoring again and again, allowing the mind to roam freely in this fantasy dream and explore the endless possibilities and unknowns.

This book is in the category of short sweet articles, so don't be fooled. The reason why I didn't give it full marks is that it was interrupted for a long time. However, it was unexpected that it was revived. In short, I won't give it a low score. First, it has been updated and there are no major problems. -4 Stars I really finished writing 666, but I didn't check to see if it was unfinished, but I really took a year off and finished it. If you have the courage, I must give you a good review.

Actually, it's okay. I feel quite comfortable with it, but the heroine's words don't make it seem like she is a decisive killer, or to be more precise, she is not like an empress, but more like a girl from the Ling family. It would actually be better if you change the heroine's identity from a decisive and decisive demon sect empress to a saint who is new to the world. To put it more bluntly, the heroine's dialogue made me embarrassed. But it's not so overwhelming that you can't stand it anymore. Keep writing. I support you.

Among the fantasy Empress novels, except for the one across the river [My Wife is the Empress], this one is my favorite. Like the one across the river, the writing is good, there are many foreshadowings, and the plot is smooth, but there can be more fighting scenes and less dog food cleaning. I think the plot is more attractive to me than the dog food.

It's really sweet. It can be watched by both men and women. I think the story is quite interesting and I didn't expect it at all. So I'm not saying how amazing some parts are, but it can also be said that it's really great. Come on, the author. I believe the author can do it. (*´I`*)

At first glance, it seems that the senses are very good. This book shouldn't be rated so low. It feels like it should be 9.3 To 9.4. Maybe some people don't like to read this kind of pure love story. The subject matter at the beginning is very novel, but it is not a knife. I woke up after the fifty chapter. I thought it would be delayed until the finale. So far, it is still very good. I hope it won't collapse later. Halfway through, I felt that the heroine's role was a bit lacking, and she was basically writing the main plot. But when I actually watched it, I felt that it was okay. It seems that the author stopped updating it before and then dropped the rating. This is quite typical of a film where the male protagonist crosses the border and beats someone up, and then narrowly wins, but I personally prefer to watch more daily. It's true that this book is well written. Although I haven't seen the ending yet, I feel that the main plot written by the author is quite good. However, the heroine's cultivation is getting slower and slower, and it feels a bit like a drag, but it's not bad. I really feel that the rating of this book should not only be 9.0 But should be higher. Maybe it's because the author stopped updating it midway. It's been a long time, and this book is more about romance in the early stage, and in the later stage it mainly focuses on the main plot and fighting. The heroine's role is relatively less, which makes it more uncomfortable to watch love and fighting. However, the author dared to stab me. If you hadn't come back, I almost gave up. The knife really stabbed me, but all in all, this book is still very good, the author should work hard! ! ! Finished spreading flowers, thank you for your companionship! ! ! The writing is really good. Whether it is the main plot or love, I was really moved by the power of love. This book deserves more than this rating. I just don't know why other books seem to be in the dark room, but this book is really good-looking. I highly recommend it! ! !

I'm not bragging, everyone who reads this book has a majestic talent, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, a jade tree facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiment, super invincible, proficient in one's work, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stone, miraculous, and deafening. He is enlightened, the candle illuminates the world, he can see thousands of miles clearly, the rain and dew are all over the world, and the trees are covered with all directions. The eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger steps. He is heroic and majestic. He is in a commanding position. He is benevolent and moral. He is charming and suave. He is selfless. He looks like Pan An. He is more talented than Song Yu. A pear tree weighs more than a begonia. , You have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have righteousness, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you have good virtue, you have a pure heart, you have a beautiful view of the mountains, you have high sentiments, you have great virtues, you have immeasurable merits, you have good gold and beautiful jade, you have bright virtues, you have a beautiful heart, you have a good heart, you have a beautiful heart, and you have a lot of good things. , A man of lofty ideals and a benevolent person, a white crane in the cloud, a man of great splendor, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix, unparalleled in the world, a peerless hero, one of a kind, a branch of Guilin, a man of cranes, one of the best, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, a piece of jade in Kunshan, unrivaled.

This book is very popular with me. I really want to read some sweet books recently. And... Ahem [smile][smile][smile]

Uh... How should I put it? This thing is... It's just crazy sweet. I don't feel like it's a romance novel with a cultivator's skin. Romance accounts for more than 80%, but hey, I like it (ºº )

Sweet! It's so sweet that I'm going to develop diabetes! For such a tooth-droppingly sweet plot, all I can say is... Keep up the intensity!

This book touched me deeply. I was a freshman in high school when I read it. It seems that my memory may have been a little messed up. When I read it, I thought it was very interesting and sweet. But because it was serialized, I picked up the book and stopped reading it completely. I was really sorry at that time. I was very confused and irritable in school at that time. There was something different about this book. It has really been with me for a long time, and it can be said to be my spiritual food. Alas, until now, when I am in my third year of high school and have gone out into society, I found out that it is finished, but I really don't have the same enthusiasm as before to read it again. I remember that I had read more than 200 chapters at the time, but I had forgotten it. It is really a pity. I am looking forward to the next new book, Octopus!

Four stars. Sweet pet stories about cultivating immortals are indeed rare. They start with a vegetative hand. This writing method is quite conventional, and the overall rhythm is quite smooth. I would like to give you some suggestions. First of all, the description of the background of the protagonist can be made into a trap, so that the subsequent connection will be smoother and will not feel abrupt. Secondly, I could write a little longer about people in a vegetative state, but it's a bit short now, and I wake up a bit quickly.

This book is quite sweet. Personally, the way the male and female protagonists get along is quite novel, but I quite like it. The male protagonist is well portrayed and responsible, and the female protagonist is also very cute and a little tsundere. The relationship between the two is very sweet. However, I have only read more than 160 chapters, and I have not read very far, but for now I still recommend it.

Maybe I'm a bit of a pervert, I want to be abused a little bit, maybe I'm used to reading abuse articles, and suddenly I'm not used to reading this, but well, this book is well written, it's just that, it's too sweet, from the beginning to the heroine, it's too sweet, and the whole process of sugaring didn't stop, I really have a bit of that, I can't stand it, I've read articles about sugaring before, but they were all about abuse at the same time, this kind of hair is a bit hard to watch, but in the end it's good to say that

Yes, the main focus is on love, but Luo Zhirou fell into trouble so quickly at the beginning, which is a bit rushed. After all, the author initially portrayed him as a cold leader of the demon sect, but overall it is still okay, a cool article (~￣▽￣)→))*￣▽￣*)o

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It's very interesting. For some reason, there are few such slow relationships in the world. In the early stage, both parties are afraid of losing, and both rely on clumsy love to infect each other. One thinks that he is not strong enough and has no ability to protect the one he loves, and the other thinks that he will leave her. Just like in real life, two people don't sit down and have a good chat, but keep it in their hearts. It is very consistent with the love pattern of most people nowadays. I don't know why we can't let go of that damn face like them.