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Overall, the story seems to be very coherent. Although there is a bit of a slap in the face, it is not too pretentious and the connection is very good. Moreover, the plot is normal. It is not a cliché plot like "obtain SSS level at the beginning and so on." It is divorced from low-level taste [laughter]. Sometimes it suddenly gives me a feeling of "Jobless Reincarnation" (the handling of major events and the emotional line are not the same), which is really good. My friend likes the last cover very much, please post more [smile] No one has good works [crying]

It's not bad (although there are some parts that make me a little confused, but I have forgotten where it is), but it's still good, at least that's what I think. I really don't understand why this book has so little traffic? I have to try pushing it.

The four-star mark is to show that this review is not a troll or something like that. Perhaps the language of this book is a bit dissuasive to some readers who are not used to it, but I confirm that it can be adapted to it, and this book is a very good work. Give me five stars - I'm not sure if this will affect the rating

I personally think it's great👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

The relatively common opening, characters, and background settings of western fantasy novels are considered bonus points in Tomato (laughs) However, I always feel that the author's wording of sentences is very strange. Some people say it is a translation, but I feel more like machine translation, just like the machine translation subtitles accompanying the gun version of the movie I found online.

Chapter 18 Gluttony (Goldfinger) Exposed, I don't mind thinking about others with the most vicious thoughts. It's hard for me to trust others and tell others my secrets. I would rather take it to the coffin than tell others, so I say goodbye.

It's so beautiful, why is there no one there? (◇) The author is updating faster and faster, at least once a day [I'm about to cry]

After reading a few chapters, I found that there was only so much, so I added a bookshelf, so I quickly started writing. I will read more after writing more [rolls eyes] Don't give up yet. Although Western Fantasy has a small audience, you've read a few chapters and it's pretty good. It's well written. The reason why there are not many people now is because the number of words is too small. If there are more words, people will read them (I personally recommend reducing the "reading guidance", such as reading the second chapter at a fast pace. You can read a few more chapters instead without losing anything)

"If lightning strikes a living creature, it is never safe." [Thinking] Google Translate accent?

Very well written. I haven't read a novel with this style of writing for a long time. Keep up the good work, the author [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The author's writing style is quite similar to that of foreigners, and the extensive use of appositives and postpositional attributives demonstrates the author's solid language skills. The only flaw is that there is not enough to see (fog

The author writes very well, and the writing style has a bit of a translation accent. This feeling is not bad, but it gives people the feeling of reading a translated foreign language fantasy novel. I think Western fantasy is written in this way, so that it feels good to read.

Good writing, keep it up

From the perspective of Western fantasy, it is really a good novel. I haven't found such a novel in a long time that makes people feel very comfortable. There is no weird plot, the content is coherent, and the relationship between the main characters is harmonious. It is really good so far.

How should I put it? It feels like the language is a little too deliberate, and some places are a bit awkward to read. But that doesn't stop me from liking this book, it's really good

As long as it looks good, that's it [blowing kiss]

So pretty, really

I beg the author not to stop updating or unfinishing it. I really like this book so much [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The rhythm and writing style are both excellent but a bit bland. Overall, it's pretty good.

A good Western fantasy and magic novel, with a strong Western writing style overall Here is an idea (I haven't read much yet, so I don't know if it will appear later): With the improvement of gluttony ability, can you swallow the opponent's magic and analyze the formula during battle [Thinking]

Just like the introduction, it really attracted me to finish the book after reading three chapters. It is worth a read, and you can also listen to it while sleeping.

Personally, I think it's very good. I've been reading it all afternoon, but I don't understand it very well. Why is it only rated at six points?

It's well written, the writing style is good, and I also like the subject matter.

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It's good, but there are beautiful white-haired girls somewhere

Personally think it's very good

The book is very good, but I personally don't like Western magic books because their names sound awkward to read, and I haven't been able to change them after reading them for many years. However, this book still deserves a five-star rating.

Worth a read, much better in tomatoes than in parts

Great support for the author, I think it's quite beautiful [Admiration]

Super cool. Very beautiful writing