The Book of Gluttony

Overall, the story seems to be very coherent. Although there is a bit of a slap in the face, it is not too pretentious and the connection is very good. Moreover, the plot is normal. It is not a clichéd plot of "obtaining SSS level at the beginning and so on". It is divorced from low-level taste [laughter]. Sometimes it suddenly gives me a feeling of "Jobless Reincarnation" (the handling of major events and the emotional line are not like it), which is really good. My friend likes the last cover very much, please post more 🙂 No one has good works 😢

It's not bad (although there are some parts that make me a little confused, but I have forgotten where it is) but it's still good, at least that's what I think. I really don't understand why this book has so little traffic? I have to try pushing it.

The four-star mark is to show that this review is not a troll or something like that. Perhaps the language of this book is a bit dissuasive to some readers who are not used to it, but I confirm that it can be adapted to it, and this book is a very good work. Give me five stars - I'm not sure if this will affect the rating

I personally think it's great👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

The relatively common opening, characters, and background settings of western fantasy novels are considered bonus points in Tomato (laughs) However, I always feel that the author's wording of sentences is very strange. Some people say it is a translation, but I feel more like machine translation, just like the machine translation subtitles accompanying the gun version of the movie I found online.

Chapter 18 Gluttony (Goldfinger) Exposed, I don't mind thinking about others with the most vicious thoughts. It's hard for me to trust others and tell others my secrets. I would rather take it to the coffin than tell others, so I say goodbye.

It's so beautiful, why is there no one there? (◇) The author is updating faster and faster, at least once a day 🥺

"If lightning strikes a living creature, it is never safe." 🤔 Google Translate accent?

After reading a few chapters, I found that there was only so much, so I added a bookshelf, so I quickly started writing. I will read more after writing more [rolls eyes] Don't give up yet. Although Western Fantasy has a small audience, you've read a few chapters and it's pretty good. It's well written. The reason why there are not many people now is because the number of words is too small. If there are more words, people will read them (I personally recommend reducing the "reading guidance", such as reading the second chapter at a fast pace. You can read a few more chapters instead without losing)

The author writes very well, and the writing style has a bit of a translation accent. This feeling is not bad, but it gives people the feeling of reading a translated foreign language fantasy novel. I think Western fantasy is written in this way, so that it feels good to read.