Guardian of the Collapsing World

Personally, I think the fighting is very well written, with a strong visual sense, and the personal image of the protagonist is portrayed in various details (like the photo of the former owner of the house, you can see that he is a conscientious person who knows how to thank and repay kindness), but I provide a personal image. My suggestion is to try to make the plot as coherent as possible. If you say which character will meet the protagonist next, you can write it in advance as a supplement to the plot. However, if you will not meet the protagonist, it is better not to write it (just like writing the chapter about Duan Qiyana in the middle). Summary: The writing is good and the number of words is very conscientious, but the writing skills need to be improved. Five stars are given to @page

First of all, Xi'er [like], I, the leader of Canghai, must support The fighting is quite professional, and it can be seen that the author really put his heart into [learning it] The author has a very good attitude and is very powerful. He will never bow to the forces of evil readers [laughter] The setting is very good. The protagonist becomes stronger through his own efforts. It's not like the current assembly-line cool novels where he somehow gains invincible strength and is able to use it flexibly. The word count and quality are guaranteed, usually more than 3,000 words per chapter. In the case of fighting, there are even more than 7,000 or even 9,000 words per chapter. This word count alone surpasses 90% of authors, right? Finally, come on, the author, the author is awesome Grandma, why? It shouldn't be rated so low.

As a high school student, this novel is really close to what I imagined from the Honkai Impact fanfiction in terms of setting, protagonist's character, plot development, etc. The protagonist's strength is not too weak, but it's not necessarily said to be the best in the world, and it is in the development stage. I am very much looking forward to the next development of this book [Blow kiss]

It's a very good book, I hope the author can keep updating it (can you please add more?)

The fighting is so well written! I hope the author will continue to work hard and finish it properly. If it doesn't fail, I will just buy Xier's cosplay suit and record a video shouting that I am Ye Ningxi's dog.

It's my second favorite fanfic among my favorite games. The characters have distinct plots and obvious growth. The characters are not OOC. Except for the sword being blunt, everything else is good. The author is very considerate and added a summary of ability growth at the end of the Demon Slayer chapter, considering readers who skipped chapters. The writing attitude is serious, the fighting scenes are excellent and well-founded, and it is very comfortable to watch. It's not mindless, you can read it with your brain in mind, and although the update is slow, almost every chapter is not watery, and it is full of content. Among the books I have read, it is considered to be above average. As a novice author who writes a book for the first time, this is the best I have read in Tomato. I almost quit when I saw the two male protagonists in the introduction, but luckily I allowed myself to read a few chapters, otherwise I would have missed this book.

It looks good, it's a good book, author, come on [like][like][like][like]

I am a veteran of this book, and I am just reviewing it now. The details of the battle are handled very well, and the daily life of St. Freya Academy is also very good. The important thing is that Xier is the heroine. Summary: Very good. I must have spent a lot of time studying.

Let's put it this way, the characters are well written and not broken, at least unlike other fan fiction where the characters are written in a way that they don't look like the original characters. I personally feel that as long as the characters don't collapse, it's a good fanfic! [Praise]

This book still gives me a very good feeling. [The road to recovery, you have me in you, you have me in you, it is full of fun (look forward to seeing the content of my madness) [smile][smile][smile]Sister Xiao Wuzi~~] Wang Ling, I'm waiting for you to come back. I still want to continue watching Zhanshuang TV. Don't forget, I'd better forward it to you [laughing evilly] [like] I'm waiting for you Don't worry, I will always guard this group for you. Don't forget to come back.

It's great. Come on, the author, try to write a million words about it [laughing][laughing]

I don't like reading books with two male protagonists, but this novel is really good.

It's good to read. Don't care about the introduction. I was persuaded by the introduction to quit at first. Then I came to read it later when I ran out of books. After reading it, I found that it was not as bad as I thought, but the writing was quite good.

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I saw the author in the group asking for a review, so I came here. Objectively speaking, the quality of this book has continued to improve, and it is still very good. (Also, can the author give me an exclusive title in the group? Let's call it Liantian Demon Lord, because Demon Lord is very cool)

This book is great, there are two protagonists, the background is well drawn, the characters are well described, the plot is reasonable, and in this work Himeko successfully falls in love, which is the most powerful thing in this work. I hope the author will work harder and make this work better and better, come on! The author works hard! (ง•̀_•́)ง! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Suppression, technique, desperate situation, breakthrough, self, proof, peak, shackles, answer, dependence, end, interpretation, calmness, adversity, confidence, infinity, break, dilemma, doubt, reversal, temper, limit, stop, illusion, result, final, aspiration, break away, restriction, field, peak, past, farewell... There are no words that can perfectly describe the plot of this book.

Not many people watched it, but the Honkai content was pretty good.

The fighting scenes are very detailed and very graphic. The author has put a lot of effort into this aspect, and the emotional foreshadowing in the content needs to be improved. Overall very good! I love so much!

The writing is wonderful, the Taoist "Qing Xin Jue" is quite good The characters are portrayed in detail, the fighting scenes are exciting, and the pictures are full of sense. If the author works hard to accumulate his own cultural heritage, he will have a bright future. Come on

Come on, author, I like Xier the most!

It's beautiful, one of the best ones I've seen in Honkai Impact

Come on, this book is great, I hope you can stick with it.

The author has long legs, works hard on writing novels, and his writing skills are constantly improving. Come on, don't let their stories be forgotten.

Come on, author! ! ! It's great to watch. I really enjoyed watching the fight [note][note][note]

The writing is very good, the plot is very realistic, and the battle scenes are also very realistic. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. Although the current results are not very good, it can be seen that there is great potential. So it's up to everyone to support the author in writing better stories.

Well, the plot of the story is very funny, but also very depressing, but it is mainly funny. After all, I am in the hospital now because of the things the author wrote. I laughed so hard that my retinas detached.

This book is very good-looking, and it is considered one of the best among the Bengsan novels I have read. Especially the fighting part is written in detail, which is very good-looking. Most of the other books avoid fighting and make it look like a romance novel. Although it is very interesting to read, the fighting part of this book made me very comfortable. It is very interesting and I love reading it. I hope the author will work hard. I hope the updates will be more diligent (thoughts) [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The writing is very good, and the progress can be seen. The author has written this article very seriously. The details of the fighting scenes are also among the best among the novels I have read. The protagonist's character is very similar to me and I feel very immersed [laughter] Has the author established a group? I will join it [sending my heart]

It's quite good. This is what I'm reading online. I can't say it's absolutely not the case, but few protagonists value life. The average number of words in each chapter is 3000+. I also read an author with good reviews. Look at the duration 1