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Don't stop updating. You must work hard to write. Even if you update less every day, it doesn't matter. I just ask you not to stop updating.

The author also has too many typos, but the writing is good, and the emotional aspect is very good. It's all ambiguous haha. It seems that I have confirmed my relationship with Youruo. I'll update it soon. I've finished reading it.

It's a masterpiece among fans! The identity of the senior brother and the power of absorbing the strange fire can still be left for Xiao Yan to devour. This setting is very good. It does not take away Xiao Yan's resources. It is indeed very friendly to old fans of Dou Po. After all, Yao Lao went to the Great Thousand World and was also the Supreme Immortal Grade Heaven (unlike Gangzi, who is not satisfied with level 30?) Women are like grabbing, so they kept the original couple Xun'er and Yafei (actually I don't know why Yafei was kept, maybe because they are slightly less popular), Nalan Yanran is probably also kept (but it would be a bit awkward for master and apprentice to be paired with brothers), Qinglin has no role for the time being, and several supporting roles of confidante have no role, only the little doctor fairy, Yun Yun and the queen. (Zi Yan hasn't seen it yet, does it count?) There are two main small problems. One is that the duplication rate of some scenes and Dou Po is a little high, which is still a bit eye-catching for old fans who have watched Dou Po over and over again twenty or thirty times. The other is that the new heroine's emotional line is a little abrupt, and she suddenly falls in love at first sight, giving people a feeling of lust. I hope the author can make up for it later.

For Xiao Yan to become Dou Emperor in 10 years, it won't be Xiao Fan who becomes Dou Emperor first and then Xiao Yan becomes Emperor through Dou Emperor's bloodline [Thinking]

Come on, this is a rare good book about Dou Po Tongwen [Like]

The writing is okay. In my opinion, the only flaw is that since it is a supporting role system, why are the tasks and facts all trying to steal Xiao Yan's opportunity and light, especially taking away the Fallen Heart Flame, which is an important alien fire in Xiao Yan's mid-term [eating melon]

It's okay. It's a good one among the many Dou Po novels I've read. However, I hope the author can reveal Xiao Yan's "protagonist" status a little bit [facepalm], otherwise the supporting role system will always feel like it doesn't support the role [facepalm] [facepalm] [like]

It's really good, and the author kept changing at a speed that was visible to the naked eye while I was watching. Thank you so much, but I hope the author can pay more attention to his body. Thank you for making my boring life interesting, thank you! Very good, especially like it

I have read it all over the Internet. Your book is really good, but I think the function of the system can be strengthened. I feel that this system is a little weak, and the number of occurrences is very small. The system is strong, and the plot you wrote is very rich. Don't have too many harems. I feel that no more than five is the best. The author should not pay too much attention to those trolls. Keep writing, and I will give it a thumbs up👍🏻

I have not read Dou Po, but I think this book is quite good. Although the harem is a bit large,

How could such a beautiful and diverse book not have 5-star reviews? [Laughing]

It's considered to be a top-notch Dou Po fan. It's very good. New characters have been introduced and it's very successful. The new heroine has been created very successfully. Medusa is also very good. I hope the author doesn't finish it. I'll keep watching it. It may be too slow, so I have to save up for a long time to watch it once.

Yao Lao's only regret is that Yao Lao and Han Shanshan almost failed when Yao Lao tried to subdue the ancient spirit Lenghuo, because the ancient spirit Lenghuo at that time was so powerful that he almost had spiritual wisdom. In order for Yao Lao to succeed, Han Shanshan sacrificed her soul to befriend the ancient spirit Lenghuo so that Yao Lao could successfully subdue him, but Yao Lao didn't know it. After that, Yao Lao never found Han. Shanshan, because he didn't know that Han Shanshan sacrificed his soul and merged with the ancient spirit Lenghuo. Yao Lao may never know about this. I hope the author can let Yao Lao know that Han Shanshan has given everything for him. The author can learn about these incomplete things I mentioned. I hope the author can greatly satisfy our readers' small wish [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Fighting to Break the Sphere is not a good book to begin with. But this book. Gave me a new feeling. I hope the author can update it

Praise, it's very nice, why is the rating so low?

I came across the dubbing video of the novel from a barrage website. It's quite enjoyable and interesting to watch. Personally, I think it's enough to just read the online novel without getting too hung up on the plot. Read the books you like and do what you like. If you think it's not good, just abandon the book. Life is not easy. Stop spreading negative emotions like resentment to others.

A good book in Dou Po fan fiction, it makes up for all the regrets of the original work

It's okay. Those beauties have no impact on the plot outline, and there's no chance. The protagonist has just solved the problem. It's great. Anyway, it's quite fun to watch. Just hurry up and save Yueyao. You have to fill the hole you dug, and don't make the background too outrageous. It's best not to surpass the ancient tribe, or Yue Xun'er will come again? It's over when you feel good. Don't take too long to achieve success. It will take another half a day to gain family approval.

The author should be faster, there are too few and it's not enough to read [laughing and crying]

I'm going to Zhongzhou soon. The author can write more about Sound Valley. Attack moves, sonic booms, defenses, barriers, treatments, exorcisms. There's a lot to write about. The original book didn't introduce much.

666 Good Book Suzuya Tour I know very well that life is like a mayfly and even death is like a shadow. But at this time, even if it is one more year, one more day, one more hour, I still hope that my life will continue. O God who is brave and brave, I sincerely ask you to help me and give it back. Think and think again, call upon the gods who have disappeared from the sun, call upon the gods of the land that have been passed down from generation to generation. This mountain and this river have been indebted to me for a long time, and I am deeply grateful. Sincere fear, sincere fear. I sincerely respect God's will and return it. I know very well that life is like a mayfly, and I know that death always follows me. But at this time, even if it is one more year, one more day, one more moment, I still hope that life can continue. O brave God, sincerely, sincerely, I ask you to help me.

I have seen this book going through all the paths Xiao Yan has taken and taking away all his opportunities (except for the rewards from the alien fire system). There are also some timelines that don't match up, but this book is a little better than other Dou Po fics.

Reading makes people broad-minded and open-minded; reading makes people visionary and ambitious; reading makes people increase their knowledge and speak extraordinary words; reading makes people relaxed and happy, like a spring breeze. Reading can give wings to one's thoughts and blossom buds of emotions. Reading can make one's thinking active and intelligent. Reading can cultivate one's sentiment and let one's dreams fly. Books are the ladder - Gorky said: "Books are the ladder of human progress." A good book is a good society, which can cultivate people's feelings and temperament and make people noble. Reciting a Li Sao, the mountains and valleys are vast. Recite a book of songs, and your lips and teeth will be fragrant. Read a magazine and travel around the world. Read a history book and travel through the past and present. Books enrich our experience and make us no longer poor. Books purify our worries and make us no longer bored. World Book Day, it's a great day to have books to read!

In the name of a supporting role, he steals the wife of the original protagonist! ! ! It's good to read, but after reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy , Gradually, it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was me crying or the rain was heavy. It might be both. My mood became more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Who are you looking down on in the next few chapters?

(Story background: The system was annihilated by the will of the universe, and when it dissipated, it used its last power to send the host back to the beginning of the battle) Hello host, it's me, my name is Pi Dan, I'm Doubo Supporting Role System, listen to me, your head is in chaos right now. You don't know who you are, why you are here, and what you are going to do next. You feel that I am familiar, but you don't know whether you should trust me. But none of that matters. The important thing is that I am leaving and leaving you alone in this Douluo Continent. So from now on, you don't have to think about the past or doubt yourself. My host, when you embark on the journey again, you must... Remember the meaning of the journey itself...: HVSnns@, ".,/Last point... Although my role is... A little small, please... Please remember me... My name is Pi...(The system has been erased)

A relatively good presence in Dou Po fan fiction

The author's writing is very good, but the part about Xiao Fan going to the Izumo Empire is a bit long. Although it is for the little medical fairy [laughing and crying], there is too much foreshadowing and it seems a bit long-winded. Also, can you update more, why do you spend 23 hours updating 24 hours a day [laughing] Really, the author is not very sensible. It's been a month since I stopped updating. Do you know how I got through this month?

It's really well written. If it can't be unified in ten years, it will be wiped out. It also has such an awesome physique. In one year, it rose from Fighting Qi 8 to Fighter, and even mastered several low-level fighting skills. The protagonist is really a genius. As an accessory, it also eliminates the opportunities and risks for the protagonist in the future. It is really great. Moreover, the male protagonist is also very cautious. There is even a slight glitch in the system and even rewards are given. The protagonist actually stopped practicing out of caution. It's awesome.

It's very interesting, better than the novel software I've read before.

Originally I just had the mentality of giving it a try, but later I found out that it really looks good.