Naruto: at the Beginning, Yuyin Village Takes in Xiaonan as a Gangster

My younger sister's role is getting less and less, especially after the emergence of new characters. After a new character is introduced, the role of the previous character is gone. The characters are very isolated, and there are too many to mention. The relationship between multiple characters should be handled better. For the sake of sister control, I will cheer you up [laughter]

Brothers, five-star praise.

The writing is pretty good

Not bad but a little too dark

Not bad. A bit of a new routine. It's much better than those kneeling down and licking Konoha. Five stars start. Top it up

It can be very good. I quite like it, but it's a bit lacking.

Five-star praise is given. Come on, the author, and look forward to the next one.