Dr. Juniper Keeps Pressuring Me to Marry, So I Have No Choice but to Accept

Looking at the whole article, I can feel the warm and peaceful daily life. It is my personal favorite Pokémon article. (And the heroine is Sirona!) But I think there are still a few small flaws, and I will list them here. 1. The title of the novel is about the God of Cooking, and the introduction of the title is also related to chefs. However, so far, except for the early mention of a young man who has a strong desire for food, but regrets it all his life, the protagonist decides to become a God of Cooking, and talks to Xiaoxue about becoming a God of Cooking, the theme of becoming a God of Cooking has not been reflected later. In daily life, it has been mentioned many times that the protagonist gets up early to cook, but there is never a positive description of the protagonist's superb cooking skills, a positive description of the color and fragrance of the food, or a side description of the praise of the elves and people around him. It is just an understatement. In other words, there are only a few strokes that point out the center, and it already deviates from the theme later on. I suggest that it is better to have more titles, otherwise it may make readers confused, unable to find the center, and have no desire to read on. 2. In the battle tower, there have been many elves that did not listen to the protagonist's instructions. Act recklessly with your own strength. Although it can reflect the independence and personality of the elves, and although the protagonist is only an elite trainer, this is not the reason why the elves cannot obey orders. Taking the conversation between Grandma Mustard Lan and Grandma Chiharu in the book as saying "Ye Feng and the elves will help each other", since the elves strive to improve their strength in order to protect the protagonist, why can't the protagonist improve his trainer strength for the sake of the elves' desire to fight? If the level of the elf and the trainer do not match, there will be situations where the elf does not listen to the trainer's instructions, such as early Xiaozhi and Charizard. The main character Elf disobeying orders can only remind me of this situation. If the protagonist is a breeder, it is natural for the elves not to listen to the protagonist's command, then why did Xiaozhi command the fast swimming frog to fight Xiaozhi on the Orange Islands? Well, if we combine the two reasons that the protagonist is a trainer and the trainer level does not match the elf, I have nothing to say about the protagonist's elf not obeying the protagonist's command. After all, there has never been an instance in the original book until the plot I watched. In fact, I still want to emphasize that this is a world where humans and elves coexist, and fetters are the theme of this world. From my point of view, battle is a continuation of the fetters between humans and elves. Growing in the fetters, forging ahead in setbacks, and still being able to stay together after experiencing blood and tears. The sincere emotions between humans and elves revealed from it, this is the true meaning of battle. If this can reflect the independence of the elves, there is no need to let the elves fight independently. It can already be reflected by independent training just by killing wild monsters. Geng Gui, a trainer as strong as Teacher Lu's family, can lead a team to train, lead a team to play in the gym, research his own training plans, and even work in the gym to support his family, and he has never disobeyed Teacher Lu's instructions. I believe that listening to the trainer's command not only stems from the match and transcendence of the trainer's level and the strength of the elves, but also from the deep bond between humans and elves. Strive for dreams together, share successes and failures together, face trials and setbacks together, experience the little things in daily life together, and gradually grow up and depend on each other. This is the charm of the Pokémon world. Listening to the trainer's instructions is a reflection of the deep bond between humans and elves. The protagonist and the elf have such a deep relationship, but they can only provide nutrients and conditions for the elf's growth. During the battle, the elf is allowed to fight independently like a mascot. In order to highlight the drama, the author makes the audience and opponents think that he is a person with super powers. Isn't this a big regret? "If you accept an elf, be prepared to shed blood and tears." 3. The words used in this book are just a few words over and over again, okay, ah this, cute, gentle, convenient, happy... And the meanings are repeated many times, such as: Ibrahimovic gave a cute cry and climbed up cutely. "Ah this,,, ah this,,, ah this,,, here I would rather suggest that the author could add some appropriate side descriptions instead of monotonous adjectives to enrich the image of the protagonist, the elves and the bamboo orchid, so that those vivid images vividly appear on the page and impress the readers. In addition, I actually want to emphasize that "ah this" does not need to appear so many times. Hmm... In terms of advantages, this can highlight the protagonist's helplessness and...? Well... But in terms of disadvantages, from the perspective of the language of the article, the appropriate oral habits can indeed highlight the protagonist's personality, but "ah this"... With all due respect, this really does not reflect the protagonist's character image, but is a bit damaged. This can only remind me of the protagonist's drifting with the crowd, accepting everything, swinging like a grass on the wall, having no independent opinion, but still stubbornly wanting to show his helplessness in obeying others. The "Ah this" habit is somewhat tacky even among the idioms in the language of the article. Of course, it's also possible that I'm overthinking it and just making some comments in passing. 4. There are a lot of typos, so I'll just mention this in one stroke. The above are just some of my personal suggestions. I really like this kind of daily writing. It reveals warmth in the ordinary, and true feelings flow in every detail. The sincere emotions between people and Pokémon are the true meaning of the Pokémon world. I hope the author will always have a passionate heart and use his own pen to describe the Pokémon world in his heart. Finally, in Sirona's words, "The encounter between life and life will always give birth to new things. "

It's been a long time since I've seen a daily heart-warming Pokémon. There are so few. It's well written and warm. I hope the protagonist will get better and better in the future.

Super nice. My Pokémon is the best book among the books. The character setting is not particularly abrupt. It has a single female protagonist.

Five stars for my support. Overall, this book is well written and the writing is pretty fluent. Let's add more chapters [face covering] [face covering] As the number of pictures increases, the number will increase. This book will naturally become popular, and the writing is really not bad. Let's add more chapters. [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

Tomato's Pokemon is a good read, but I feel that the author's vocabulary is a bit lacking. There are 529 helpless moments in 353 chapters. The protagonist will be helpless twice on average in each chapter. I am also quite helpless [laughter]

Come on, author, pursue quality and pursue speed over quality [Learned]

It is a very good book. I hope the author will not abandon the book and update it well.

Okay, let's just say I think it's the best Pokémon article I've read recently.

It's so good-looking, I'm impressed so far! ! Hope to keep it up! It's a pity that it's too short, please do your best!

It's good and looks good. If it's in the Hezhong area, based on the character of the protagonist, I think both black and white dragons are possible, but I feel that the white dragon is more likely.