Springtime Spreads

Coming from 🍠, emmm, let me talk about it relatively objectively (because although I also read the writing, I pay more attention to the setting and plot of the characters. I mainly make up my own imagination, just for family reference). The first few chapters are indeed relatively immature, but I think it gets better later. The main reason is that the male and female protagonists are very interesting to me. In addition, it is in the form of a sweet pet novel. It is still very interesting, and I really like Li Jingmo's feelings for Lin Zhaoqing, believers and gods, clearly didn't want to blaspheme, but they couldn't help it. In the end, they were kissed back by their gods. To be honest, their hearts melted 2333. I hope the author will continue to work hard. If you have time and energy, you can refine the first few chapters and bring them closer to the style of the later ones (by the way, the kissing scene written by the author is indeed very provocative. Have you considered writing it? [I learned it])

It's quite interesting, but it didn't explain things clearly. What happened to Lin Qianwei in the end, what happened when the heroine met her teacher, what happened after the wedding, don't rush the ending 🤦 add extras

So sweet! My aunt was laughing the whole time!!! Mo Mo is so gentle. I really like the setting of the male protagonist. And the writing is also great. I want to take a small notebook and copy out all the love words they said! The first part is not bad, but the ending is a bit rushed. We haven't seen their wedding and daily life after marriage, and there are still some holes that have not been filled. For example, we haven't seen the heroine's teacher, the heroine has not yet regained her dream of dancing, the heroine's maternal grandfather's house, and the revenge of the heroine's sister. There is also hope to seek justice for Shengsheng, so that the heroine's sister will receive the legal sanctions she deserves, etc. I also hope that there will be some extra stories about other people, Miss Lu and Lao Gu, and the two female bodyguards, etc. Also, the content is not consistent with the introduction. The heroine is not a cold beauty. Maybe the heroine looks cold in the setting, but her personality is very funny and cute. I also feel that strong women and dual strengths are not reflected in the article. Moreover, the author's various jokes about 5G surfing made me laugh to death! Kaomoji expressions often appear in the text, which feels a little bit dramatic. I hope the author will continue to work hard to write new articles! 😘😘

The male protagonist is very gentle, and the female protagonist's character is also well-characterized. The plot is not procrastinating, and although it does not have too many ups and downs, it has a smooth flow. The whole article is very bland but the sweetness is hidden between the lines. It's a good choice for relaxing or wanting to watch sweet love. The writing style is delicate, the article is concise, and the prose is full of charm.

It's very interesting. I hope there will be a sequel.

Ahhhhh... This is the best-written novel I have ever read. I feel like I want to copy every word of love between the male and female protagonists. The author is so talented! Looking forward to your next novel

Wow, the romance is so beautiful.

It looks good, hurry up and [send your heart]

The male protagonist is super gentle and good-looking

Not bad, I like it very much