Tomb Robbery: the System Made a Mistake at the Beginning

Ahhhh, I want to do orthopedics. Hua Ye and Xiao Bai are so good together😍😍😍, but I also want to do All. The interaction between Xiao Bai, Xiao Ge and Hei Xiazi is also very exciting😍😍😍😍. What should I do? I'm so hesitant.

To be honest, now I want to talk about Hua Er Ye and Xiao Bai CP. I know they are brothers, but they feel so CP. Can it be changed to Xiao Bai's mother being an adopted daughter [I'm about to cry]

It's a good read. I finished reading it in one go. Big cheers for the author. Don't stop updating. I like Xiaobai so much. It's just that I can't do it well. I just don't have any photos [face covering], and 101 is also good. [Adore][Adore][Adore]

I cried while reading this novel. I originally read this novel as a reader, but the more I read it, the more I became immersed in it. Especially after reading the last three letters, I cried even more. I think these three letters are the essence of this novel.

The writing is very good, keep it up ੭ ᐕ)੭

Beautifully written in big letters! Looking forward to (๑˙ー˙๑)

Overall, it was okay, except that there was a plot in the middle where I really hated innocence, taking other people's goodness for granted, and being very condescending. But other things are still very good, especially when Xiaobai was going to guard the Bronze Gate and left a letter to Xiaohua and the others, I burst into tears. Xiaobai had always shouldered everything by himself. He was so miserable, but fortunately the ending was perfect. The Wang family was solved, the Bronze Gate was solved, and they had a new life after their death. This was enough. The first half of their lives was too bitter, and I hope the rest of their lives will be sweet.

The protagonist's interaction with the characters in the first few chapters is a bit stiff, but as you continue reading, you will find that it is indeed very nice. Although the protagonist seems to have a bit of a giving personality, he is a flower, a god, and a fool. If you don't see a fan with regrets and a happy ending, what kind of fan will I be watching? There are enough knives in the original work, and I just want them to be safe and happy in the parallel fan world.

This book is so well written! I think Wu Xie is a bit annoying! Wu Sansheng calculated people's hearts, and his brother was injured many times because of Wu Xie. He kept saying that he was doing well for Zhang Qiling, so he was hurt again and again. Xiaobai's space is very good, so when he encounters danger, he can directly walk into the space without fear of danger. Being mysophobic is very suitable for my male god! The ending is very good. I originally thought that the little brother, glasses, and Xiaohua would fight, and Xiaobai would get two people injured. I didn't want to see this situation, but the author gave me a surprise! So wonderful! ! !

The author's writing style is very good. I personally like the character Bai Bai very much.

It's very beautiful [Chigua] [Chigua] When I saw this, I thought it should be orthopedics [Chigua] (If not, pretend I didn't say it) Xiaobai and Xiaohua actually made me want to kiss them from the beginning, but I'm sorry [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh] If it's orthopedics, I don't think it's a big problem. After all, there are two male protagonists. Besides, with Xiaobai's level of dependence [thinking] [thinking] I guess it would be unbearable ([exploration] [exploration]) The author, please give it a try ＾0＾~

OK🌸 Male protagonist❤️Bai Yuebai Attack❤️Hua'erye, Heixiazi, little brother The three letters are very touching [almost crying][crying][crying][crying] The ending seems to have no ending. Anyway, they were not together at the end. They just went to the fart together and turned into ghosts. The younger brother also went through the tribulation and returned to heaven, and then the four of them got together again. This can be considered a good ending. At least it's not really yin and yang. [Understood][Understood][Understood] It would be great if there could be a sweet side story about them being together, but it's a pity there isn't. [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

This book is really interesting. It is well organized from beginning to end, and the ending is also very good. After reading it, I didn't feel that there was anything I didn't understand. The daily life of Xiaobai Xiaohua and two centenarians is also very interesting and [cool]. I really like Xiaohua who dotes on her younger brother🌸. Moreover, Xiaobai is indeed Xiaohua's younger brother, with a strong business acumen and layout ability. The author may have forgotten Xiaobai's blackness before [laughing evilly]. All in all, this book is super good-looking. I would like to give it [heart][heart][heart] to me.

It is deeply touching and unique. Baibai can be said to be a reflection of our hearts. Mr. Hua'er has a noble man, Zhang Qiling is relieved, and the blind man has no worries. Putting us into Stealing Pen, Wu Xie's innocence was bought at the cost of other people's lives. Before Sha Hai, he felt uneasy. Wang Shahai wished he could run over and scold Li Cu, but he was just an ordinary high school student. This was not easy for anyone to accept or couldn't accept at all. He felt that Li Cu and the others had lost too much for Wu Xie, and Li Cu could not get out of the desert called Wu Xie. In order to repay the debt and promise, Bai Bai and the old Heavenly Master went to guard the Bronze Gate, but the Old Heavenly Master also left, and Bai Bai arranged everything before entering the Bronze Gate. We cannot be like Bai Bai, but we are all the same as Bai Bai. We hope that they will be happy and no longer have to worry about surviving in the tomb.

Really love it! After reading this book, I felt that the entire Tomb Raider Notes was formed by a conspiracy! But Bai Yuebai is really the moon in the sky! It belongs to Bai Yueguang! It can only be hung in the sky and cannot be taken off! The little brother is still the same little brother who is always so kind, really! Love it so much! Regardless of whether it is detailed description or easy to describe, each person's character characteristics, their temperament and temperament are all described in great detail! Really love it! ! ! Come on 😍 [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [love]

It's really beautiful. To be honest, at first, the setting seemed a bit cliché, but then it got better and better, especially Bai Bai. It's really heartbreaking. Uh-huh. Really, the whole plot is really coherent, especially the many details, which really make people laugh and cry. And in the end, the author, you are such a bitch, you stabbed me, it really hurts, my heart! But thank you to the author for letting me see such a wonderful story. I have another Bai Yueguang in my heart, Bai Yuebai. I wish them all the best in the future.

It's very interesting and has very few chapters. Alas, the only thing is that Wu Xie's image in my heart was shattered. I have never watched Tomb Raiders, only the TV series, so in my mind Wu Xie is a blank slate. It's so uncomfortable, my little Bai, I really can't let you go, Bai. Did you know? For you, after several hours of struggle, I planted the tomatoes again. Ah, Bai, I miss you so much. Ah! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I came across this book by accident and it was surprisingly good-looking. Highly recommended [adoration][adoration][adoration]

This is the second book about tomb robbing fan fiction that I have read. I didn't skip a chapter. It's a cool read. The first few chapters are a little immature, but the overall story is really good, and the last three letters are heart-wrenching. The white moon is the moon, so bright and flawless. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I like it. Although I haven't read Tomb Raiders Notes and I don't know some of the plot, I also know the difficulty of the blind man and others. Everyone is happy. He fills in the holes very well and doesn't abandon it like other authors. Thank you to the author for showing me a different side of the story. I was also very angry when I read the little brother's experience later. Even I, who had never seen it before, felt that the ending was really good (that is to say, I thought Bai Yuebai's name was Bai Yueguang at the beginning...) Ahem, anyway, thank you to the author, and wish you good health [love] [love] [love]

It's not brainless at all, and the person's image is well designed, um, and his identity is also great. I still like this book better, because it is one of the few books on my bookshelf that I have successfully read. It's really, really great. Highly recommended!

Come and see them all, come and see them all. This book has a rating of 9.2 Or above. The ending and the dozen or so chapters can be said to be amazing. I just cried when I watched it, but it wasn't that sadistic. Instead, I felt very satisfied and relieved. The regret of stolen pens is really uncomfortable and hard to accept. When I watched it, I directly... Considering the protagonist's identity and abilities, what he can do is already very impressive. Finally, it's not a fic that was finished in a hurry. Some people may feel that some people's personalities will collapse when they look at it. But seriously, with how I feel and how I feel. On the contrary, I felt very relaxed. Although there are still some minor flaws. But it's already very good. Really, it deserves more than nine points! ! ! Come on, great author! ! [Send heart][Send heart] If someone says that the last part is a bit outrageous, then I can only say that there are still some people who really can't see it, don't understand it, and don't want to care about the regret and tragedy of stolen pens. On the contrary, the logic is very strict. It makes sense from back to front, from front to back.

It's quite good. When I read it before, I didn't like Wu Xie very much, especially the innocent lives involved in Sha Hai and the destruction of the Wang family. I couldn't understand the thought of Li Cu being done like that. This book spoke my heart~ When I first read it, I didn't like it very much. I guess it touched those CP gangs [laughter] Why is it four points? It's because it was so embarrassing for the first person to recognize their relatives. . .

Bai Yuebai is really a very warm person. He has considered everything for Xie Yuchen, brother, and Heixiazi. They all sacrificed everything for Wu Xie in the Tomb Raiders series, and Wu Xie is always desperate to find his third uncle. Brother and the others are worried about Wu Xie, so they will go to settle things for Wu Xie. So, it feels like a cycle

This is probably the best-looking fanfic I've ever seen. I can't say it's the best-looking, I can only say it's the one that suits me the most. I didn't like Wu Xie from the beginning. He doesn't take other people's lives as his life and is generous to others. I made the same comment many years ago. I was scolded for being autistic. They are all like living Bodhisattvas. Wu Xie is innocent, kind, cute and cute. They are praised to the heavens. I don't dare to comment now after being scolded. If I were Zhang Qiling, the moment I remembered, I would send people from the Nine Sects to meet the King of Hell.

I felt like the storyline was really good and I went from happy to very happy to crying to honestly wonderful. My expression keeps changing every day. But it's still pretty good-looking. I'm telling the truth, it looks good, it looks good, it looks very good. It didn't leave any more regrets, unlike other dramas I watched that ended hastily. Does the author have a sequel?

It looks great, come on!

This book is really beautiful. I really like this book. I have read it for the second time. Every time I read it, I laugh until I can't breathe. Although the ending is a bit disappointing, it is very interesting. I highly recommend it. You should read it. You must read it. Anyone who doesn't read it will make me sad, okay?

It's a very good book. The author wrote about my feelings, especially the point of view on innocence. The writing is very good. The best thing is the ending. Although it is not said out loud, it stays with me all the time. This is the best love, and all the merits will return in the end. Only then can you have no regrets for a long time, five-star praise

This story is really good. This book painted a different world for me and really made me see the story (Tomb Raiders Notes) clearly from another perspective. This book is worth reading! ! !