I Transmigrated into a Women's Fiction World and Raised the Heroine into a Good-for-Nothing

This is a pretty good novel, with obvious advantages. For example, the subject matter is relatively small, and there are many cool points. So far, I haven't seen any poison. However, there are some shortcomings, such as the imperfect power system, and the emotional development is a bit too fast, and the way the relationship heats up is too monotonous. Although the hero saving the beauty is the fastest way to heat up the relationship, if the hero saves the beauty often, it will feel a bit too monotonous. You can do more peaceful things, such as shopping! , And then you inadvertently write about the male protagonist's attentiveness to the female protagonist, for example, walking outside! If someone approaches the heroine, he will turn slightly sideways. These details can be described. The most important thing is that the combat system is too imperfect. There can be more fighting plots to heat up their feelings from the fighting. Moreover, I think the power system can be slightly strengthened and the world view can be grander. , In this case, the novel will be more interesting. The so-called world view is grander, that is, for example, you can have more power systems, make up some stories or some festivals, which will make the novel more, more perfect. For example, in this book, you can use some Confucianism and Taoism power! , You can create visions of heaven and earth by reciting poems, and for example, physical cultivation, etc. Anyway, they are different power systems. As for how to make the world view grand, for example, you can add some, heaven and earth, gods, demons, demons, anyway, different types can qualify, and then you can give They make up a story to bring out these world views, and they can also introduce more heroines. Different types of heroines can always satisfy others. You can have more loli, royal, tsundere, gentle, yandere, etc. In this way, the novel can be perfect. Also, I don't like mature women. Isn't this a pick-up story or a cuckold story? If you don't write about mature women, no one will not read it, but if you write about mature women, a lot of people will not want to read it.

The writing is pretty good, good luck to the author.

Throw away your schoolbag, throw away your computer, throw away your brain... Don't be too smart. It's okay to read a daily novel where the male and female protagonists sprinkle sugar. There are indeed many other poisonous points (the setting is at the beginning, and the male protagonist seduces the female protagonist with just a few words...) As long as I don't think about it, this is a generally sweet and good book.

Well, the characterization was not strong enough. As a result, during the first climactic battle, it was not clear even the name of the character who appeared and where he came from. But it's pretty exciting 🤔

Really, come on!!! This is the first time I have seen this kind of book about a man wearing a female channel. Not to mention it has a different kind of appeal, and it makes the female channel heroine! Hehehe 😏 I feel like I'm just watching male and female videos at the same time! Anyway, it feels good! Personally, I think this theme can create a genre! Hope it gets better and better! 💕💕 After reading Chapter 15, I felt quite confused. There were so many characters all at once, and it was 7 years later. There was too little time with the heroine. There was also Leng Bao. Nothing happened yet. The favorability level was almost full. The heroine was almost like a dragon. It was a pity. The first few chapters were very good. Come on.

It's a good book worth reading. To be honest, you may be a little wary at the beginning, but as long as you keep reading, you will find that this is a novel that requires H and H and high quality [smile] 😳

A short batch (the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this) It is considered relatively good when compared horizontally with similar people. It makes people want to read on, and the laughs are not so embarrassing. It's fun to watch. I'm happy to watch it.

I like this. The author's writing is very good, and he can portray both the male protagonist's character and the female protagonist's character very well. Especially the plot, it's very smooth, I like it very much

It's not bad. I hope I'll be nice to my fellow villagers. The little lolita plus Zhanyu are really pitiable.

This should be a single female protagonist, please reply from the author