Douluo Dalu: Naruto

Didn't portray Ben's character

Didn't reflect Madara's expression

This book is okay, but Madara is not as domineering as he is. I usually give five stars to books, but I suggest that Madara be more domineering and awesome.

Author, please position Gu Yuena as the heroine. Tianmeng has come out, and the Silver Dragon King has come out too. I mainly want to see Susan in the majestic outfit, Susan wearing the Silver Dragon 😳😳😳 Author, please

(I state in advance that these are just some personal thoughts or suggestions, not requests. We hope for friendly exchanges.) The overall feeling is not bad, and it is quite novel. I deducted one star because I feel that the focus is a bit wrong. I feel that most of the author's words are used to establish concepts and advance the original plot. I personally think that it should be used more for character creation, such as Madara's psychological changes after time travel (for example) This is just an example), and because time travel will inevitably be different from the original plot, you can give more thought to this aspect. You cannot write him like a transparent person just because of his character. Others, such as the theoretical explanation of the master in the early stage, can be simpler. It can be seen that the author wants to write better and more comprehensively, and he has put a lot of thought into it, but he still hopes to pay attention to the issue of proper matching of details. Come on 👍[please update] To be honest, the more I watch, the more I feel that Madara's character is falling apart, which is not good enough. Moreover, after chapter 50, the chapters should be out of order. The jumps are too abrupt, and it's obviously a mess. I originally came here for Master Madara, but to be honest, it was really unsatisfactory.

The writing is very good, I like it very much, but sometimes there are typos, and the content of Naruto is a bit lacking, please give it a thumbs up, the author

Can the author write another one? It's the same as this one, but it doesn't have to be a master, and it's good at ninjutsu, okay? It's more palatable. There are a lot of people who quit because the main character is a master. Please, I really want to read a novel in which Douluo's protagonist is Madara's reincarnation. Please

It's so beautiful. I hope this book won't be a eunuch. [Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's still good, but Uchiha Madara's character design is a little bit broken, but everything else is fine. The author will update it as soon as possible! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Book title "Madara Uchiha: I Open a Harem in Douluo"