Youfeng Xiaoyuan Shenhao Traveler, His Wife Xu Hongdou

I just finished reading the 40th episode of Youfeng, and there are novels here [face covering] Come on ＾0＾~

It's totally not enough [crying][crying][crying] I wish the author will sign the contract soon and release more updates soon

Maybe the editors have all gone home during the New Year, and it seems they have to wait until work resumes before they can sign. The boss asked me to update once a day, save the manuscript until the work resume sign is successful, and the update will be released [laughing and crying] So dear readers, I'm sorry, I will update every day during the Chinese New Year. Once I resume work and sign the contract, I will make up for the previous ones and update quickly. I beg you all again, Yanzu Reba, to insist on reading 100,000 words and about 50 chapters. The reading rate of 100,000 words is so important to the author. Thank you, thank you [laughing and crying] I hope readers will support you a lot. I will work hard to update the new book during the period. I love you. Bookshelf, follow, and remind the readers. It would be better if I give the author a free gift [sneaky laugh] Now the income is very low, basically for the love of generating electricity, and I beg the big guys to show their kindness. [Almost crying]

It's really good. Please sign the contract with me as soon as possible.

It's very good. Although the protagonist robbed Xu Hongdou, I think the protagonist created by the author is actually more suitable for Hongdou. It's quite good. I also read the novel along with the TV series in the past two days, and I feel very good about it.

Update quickly! The writing is very good, and the cp is removed, but it is not stiff and has no sense of dissonance (right?), But it is really possible. Although I have never seen the gender change, it is pretty good now. Come on, author, keep writing! Why can't you give me a gift? You can write it. It's really good. I really want to give you a gift?

Update, update, write more about daily life or getting along with the heroine. I believe that everyone sitting here is here for the heroine.

I'll give it five stars. It's not easy for the author to write a book. The subject matter is my favorite type. Although in the first dozens of chapters, the male protagonist repeatedly recalls his past life and this life, and feels about what he has now, and the emotions of the male and female protagonists repeatedly jump and pull, it will really dissuade many people. Some things can be mentioned once or twice painstakingly, so as not to emphasize them repeatedly, and Xu Hongdou's heart is still there. I really don't understand what I'm thinking, it's too contradictory. Maybe I'm a womanizer. I can't understand being so indecisive one moment and so rational the next. I just like it, but it has to involve so many things. My best friend who passed away, the reality is that we don't want long-distance relationships, and there are all kinds of reality. Seriously, after considering so many things, do you think this love is still pure even if it starts? I look forward to them starting their journey after a hundred chapters. Don't mess up the writing anymore. It's rare to find a book that I want to follow, 😞😞😞

The protagonist's outlook is quite upright, and the relaxed and casual style is quite to my liking. However, the author's writing layout needs to be improved. The strategy was a bit fast, there was no foreshadowing, and it was too eager. The subsequent travel and treasure hunt did not have the same sweet feeling as before. It may be due to the adjustment of the outline in the middle [laughs]; then, the character description was not done well, and the description was forced to be repeated in order to establish the character, which was a bit deliberate. For example, Mr. Ma's entanglement and Teacher Hu's reliability are all a bit deliberate. Forcible emphasis seems awkward. Overall it's pretty good, I hope it gets better and better.

The book is pretty good, but the main character is 1.9 Meters tall. Isn't it too tall? The average male is 1.75 Meters tall and the female is 1.67 Meters tall. Does the main character, who is 1.9 Meters tall, have to look up at the main character? What happened a month ago and a few days earlier? I remember Xu Hongdou was the first person to stay in the windy courtyard [face covering]

Good

This book is very well written. But, there are three disadvantages Slower, slower and slower [thinking]

Direct five stars. Come on, author, write more now. I'm afraid that you will be removed from the store due to copyright in the future.

It's okay, but the emotional writing needs to be more delicate. Hongdou and the protagonist have just met, and I feel that Hongdou has already fallen in love with the protagonist. I think we should work harder on the process.

I see it's pretty good now, but in terms of relationships, the male protagonist had better be quick and easy. As of the chapter I read, he hasn't confessed yet. Although Hongdou has already made up his mind, he just has to confess. Quick, author, we are still waiting! Hey hey hey [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] The author hasn't updated for half a month. Is it temporary... Or is he just giving up? [Rolls eyes]

Author, get up and work. Are you possessed by Damai? I've finished watching the second TV series and I'm just waiting for you to write it. Hurry up.

Just one sentence, not enough 👀, add more, add more, add more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

It's very beautiful. If you like it, you can take a look.

Yes, there are some minor flaws at the front, but you can still read it. There are too few Tomato books that are windy. Come on, author.

For the sake of the fairy sister, I give you five stars.

OK! But when will you confess your love (formally)?

Hello, author of @, the first few chapters of this book are quite good. Before I watched the TV series, I thought the heroine Xu Hongdou was okay. But my fault was that I had watched the TV series. The contrast in it was too great and I couldn't accept it. However, I still want to thank you for letting me find a good TV series (I only watched that TV series when I saw such a plot in your novel). Thank you.

I really like this kind of slow-paced and follow-up, because I felt empty after watching the TV series some time ago, and I always felt that I just ordered something. I think it should be missing a happy ending, getting married until old age, none of these, but what you wrote made me see a new ending. Please update it quickly. Dear author, you have been discontinued for a long time.

Five stars are given, but the output of the author is a bit low, [laughing and crying]

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Worth five stars, it feels very natural

It's just that the updates are too slow and not enough to watch. I hope the author can update two more chapters every day

What a unique system, it should be to pass through the book and steal the heroine from the original protagonist.

Overall, it's good, but I'm too anxious. I already have the marriage rope, so there's no need for anything else. It would be better to give Hongdou some time to get out of her sadness, and a little more warmth and running-in.

I envy the slow pace of life of the protagonist in the book, but I also hope that the author can catch up with unlimited updates [Chigua]