Cyberpunk: a Small Start

It's pretty good, keep up the good work [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

Looks good, looks good, looks good, say important things three times

A very good plot, the plot is very immersive, the only regret is that it is not a female V. The only shortcoming is that the game has developed too fast since the establishment of the company, and there is a lot less interaction with the heroine (but I feel like there is nothing to write about), and a lot of fun is missing (although the later game plot does not have much content)

Cyberpunk and mods are really great highlights. It can attract two major audiences, and those who don't know it will not hinder the viewing experience. So poisonous. .

Overall, there are no major problems with the novel, except for the fact that the original male protagonist is awesome and a little loli is included, but in the cyberpunk world view, there seems to be no problem. The plot is compact. After the integration of technologies from multiple worlds, you create your own company and your own system to overthrow the original world. By the way, the part about the dry weight hammer that ends in two or three strokes is a bit uninteresting. I don't understand the hatred in my heart.

You can recommend the book so that the author can make some money and update it faster. In fact, there are not many people nowadays and there is no need to be too harsh. In fact, the author's writing is not bad. Anyway, it is better to give more praise in the early stage so that the author can make some money. I mean, if you are too harsh, there will be no good works.

A rare cyberpunk article with a complete structure and smooth writing. No procrastination, no pee spots. It looks cool. The only drawback is that it's too short. I also want to see the daily life with Lucy.

Overall, this novel was okay [like], but it ended too quickly [thought]. What about v's follow-up arrangements? Don't you write more about the sweet life of the two heroines? [Cover face] Personally, I suggest you write a side story about V, the two heroines and exploring the starry sky [sending my heart] (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

It's a tough, very nice fanfic, much better than the other half that got a 9 rating. There's nothing dramatic about it, and some of the developments are very fast. Maybe the balance is a bit lacking. Is there something wrong with the outline? Anyway, I hope the author can persevere and look forward to it very much

You are the best cyberpunk fan fiction I have ever seen. How can I put it this way? After reading it, I quit immediately, but now I can't help but come back and leave a comment [crying] Is there no update today? I waited until half past one because it was the May Day holiday.

The pace of the novel is getting faster and faster. It develops steadily in the early stage but the emotional scenes are a bit rushed. Although the pace is faster in the middle and late stages, the viewing experience is quite good. It can be seen that there is some skill. It would be better if the ending can be written with one or two more chapters. Looking forward to the next book

First of all, the cyberpunk style really impresses me, especially since it can be linked with multiple games, making it feel like a multi-chef ecstasy. Secondly, the writing about edge walkers is a bit hasty, there are too few emotional scenes, and the writing is simple. Of course, it is also possible that different eras have different values. In the end, it feels like the cultivation flow (building a country, building a company). But since you are writing about cyberpunk, I think you should not describe this aspect too much, but should instead enter the combat flow later (to compete with Arasaka) But the overall impression is good, I give it four stars.

I think this book is very well written, allowing some items in the game to appear harmoniously without violating the rules. But for other aspects, my talent is limited, so I won't comment. I feel that the quality is superior among fans. However, I feel that cyberpunk writing is not long. After all, the original work is finished. I don't know if the author will continue to write new content after finishing the original plot, or start a new book. Anyway, I am optimistic about you, young author [smile] (Also, I am not a robot!! [Lip])

A very rare subject matter, there are too few cyberpunk books on Tomato. Although to be honest, I have not watched the anime, but as an uninformed person, it is still effortless to read this book, which is a good point. I also hope that the author will persevere. Tomato's rating system is from low to rising. Don't underestimate this book just because it has a low rating.

Very good looking, one of the rare good-looking 2077 fanfics The setting and plot are very good. There is a section in the middle where the protagonist sells a super soldier serum and is exposed and is captured by Arasaka. I thought it was the kind of plot that forcibly increases the conflict between the protagonist and I was almost persuaded to abandon it. In the end, I was directly asked to cooperate with Arasaka. I was hasty. The plot is very good, but it lacks some of the characteristics of 2077. It is constantly climbing the technology tree. Other than that, it is very good.

It's good to watch, but it's not enough to read at all. It's pitifully short. The author will update it quickly. Why did it suddenly end after I had been raising it? [Smile]

In cookie-cutter novels. The author wrote this novel with clear ideas and complete structure. The content and plot are full of twists and turns. It is very rich and different from ordinary novels. For an old bookworm like me. I really like it and hope the author won't give up. Persist in. Brother, my ability is insignificant and I can only send out my love for the author.

This book has a bit of a cyberpunk feel. The protagonist has his own cyberpunk development, and the author has his own ideas integrated into the book. I personally think it is well written. Don't stop updating, just write slowly.

The writing is quite good. To be honest, I have played the game and watched the anime. What makes me most upset is Jack's sacrifice. Can the author let him survive to the end? Even without him as v's leader, I believe v can still rise [take a closer look]

It is a work above the passing line, but the pace in the middle and late stages is too fast, and to be honest, every major event can be seen as the shadow of the mission in the game, but the flaws are not concealed, and it is one of the few cyberpunk fan works that can be watched.

It's really good, the author is great. I thought you gave up on this book. I didn't expect that this book was on the recommendation list today, so I read it again. I must say it's really good. I hope the author will work hard and update it. I don't want this book to be a eunuch! No eunuchs! ! No eunuchs! ! !

Very exciting, one of the few good cyberpunk articles

A very good cyber fanfic, good luck to the author.

The sense of immersion is really strong. The author's analysis of the plot is very direct, but the length is a bit short and the meaning is not fully understood.

What's interesting is that the plot is too fast-paced, with products being farmed and then suddenly being mined for planetary resources and cosmic technology, and then there are too few other characters. V is basically invisible, and each character only has a few sentences, but it's pretty cool to treat it as a speed pass on technology.

It's comfortable, although it's a bit short, but it's fun to watch, and it's not obtrusive at all. The technology is piled up, plus the minerals on the planet, and you can fight directly. It's cool. It would be great if it could be played like this in the game. Thanks to the author for the wonderful story, looking forward to the next work [Blowing Kiss]

I felt it was okay, but the pace started to speed up inexplicably in the middle, and there was less writing about the protagonist group, and there was little characterization of the characters, but it was still quite enjoyable to watch.

Except for the fast pace at the back, everything else is good.

Not bad, the author wrote it in big letters [like]

I have read more than a dozen chapters and I feel very good. I support it with five stars.