Dragon Ball GT: at the Beginning, the Two of Them Became Disciples.

Incredibly beautiful! Brag!

Awesome. It's so beautiful. Please update it soon. Thank you, the author.

It's very interesting~ The article is well written, the words are expressed clearly, the sentences are used smoothly, and it makes people feel like they are on the scene. I hope you can achieve it~ The novel has brilliant literary talent, gorgeous diction, simple language, fresh writing, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting. Be more passionate,

At present, the senses are good. Everyone has a different path. Have you ever thought about one? The basic combat power is not strong, but he can get stronger as he fights. Because of his attack, every time he hits the enemy, he will extract a part of his energy, and also eliminate a part of the enemy's energy. Then he will replenish himself and fight back. By dividing your energy and using your strength, your combat effectiveness becomes stronger and stronger. It's like a dead skin plaster. You either kill him in seconds, or he will disgust you to death. I feel that it is very suitable for an earthling like Klin. Then I give others some skills. It seems like a candle in the wind, but you can't beat him, but you think you can beat him.

It's great. I hope there won't be a heroine or something later, that would be too ruinous🤣. I once saw a book about an angel, and then I fell in love with a woman. In order to make that woman immortal, I went to challenge the sixth and seventh universes and get the Super Dragon Balls. . Didn't see it. I really didn't see it. Also, the author's writing is great, but it's too short. I suggest starting with five updates a day [laughing and crying]

Not bad, but I just don't know how to write the subsequent melee. Although time has been unified into the same parallel world now, there is a problem. GT's universe is ahead of Dragon Ball Xenoverse by more than ten years. Goku's normal combat power in GT is Super 3. He doesn't even need to become Super 4. He can directly transform into Super 3 to defeat Super Blue. In Dragon Ball Super, Red is set to be 5 to 10 times stronger than Super 3. The success rate of blue is twice that of red. The information revealed so far only reduces the consumption of breath. It is unclear whether the specific improvement has improved the combat power. But here's the thing. GT's Goku Super 1 transformation is based on the current Super 3 Goku, with an increase of 50 times, and then there are 100 times Super 2, 400 times Super 3, and 4000 times Super 4. It can't be compared at all. I don't know how to balance this later.

After Vegeta transforms once with a machine, he can change himself. The machine only stimulates his cells to make his tail grow. The light waves are accompanied by the moonlight effect of the moon. After turning into a gorilla, he regains his sanity and becomes Super 4... [Awkward laugh]

This novel is very good, come on

I like this style, but I don't know if there is a group

I seem to have read a similar book before, but it was about training Vegeta to become the God of Destruction. There is also a super five, and it is also an angel born in GT time. I thought it was the one I read before and then deleted it. Now that I think about it, it should have more than a few hundred chapters. I didn't expect it to be more than fifty chapters.

The source setting of GT is okay. I hope that Goku's character will not be written like that of Chao, who is mentally retarded and only knows how to fight. GT is still very mature.

It's good-looking, it's really good-looking, but I've been thinking about whether Gohan has the time and space of a beast, and the time is after the fight between the sixth universe and the seventh universe, then will the timeline of Zamasu (Black Goku) change, for example, just a Black Goku becomes Black Goku and Black Vegeta [laughing]

It's very good. It's a new idea in the fandom. I just don't know if it will collapse in the later stage. Anyway, the front part is okay. [Sinister smile]

A single heroine is still good! It must be Angel Bardos haha! Come on

I quite like it, but it's a bit lacking

The ending is a bit sloppy, but the book's topic is well chosen.

Come on, the plot is very good [like] The most important thing is more [laughing]

In line with my wishes

The author was crushed by Frieza? [Cry]

I always feel like I've seen the plot somewhere before

I want to ask, will there be a harem or a female protagonist in the future? What is the protagonist's goal? Or is it just for the purpose of training soldiers, then he is just a tool?

A good Dragon Ball fanfic

I have to say, this book is super beautiful!

Why is it over? This is the third coolest Dragon Ball fanfic I've ever read. Why is it over? Is the author short of money? I'll give you money.

I personally like Dragon Ball very much, and the author's writing is also very good.

The main reason I read this book is to see two people from time and space fighting, but according to the author's update speed, it seems that it will take a long time... Five stars... But it should be regarded as one of the few high-quality products, but it is short and weak... Change it to 4 stars?

The writing is really good. I finally found a protagonist with a good personality and no such arrogance. The plot is also very enjoyable to watch. But the author is too bad and it is not enough to satisfy him at all.

It's a very good book. I can be considered a 1/3 Dragon Ball fan. After all, I started reading it from Z. But is there a female protagonist?

It looks very nice so far, with five-star reviews.

Please update soon, the story is exciting and the subject matter is very creative.