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Come on, support you, don't be a loser

Come on! I'm optimistic about you!

Five stars! Although there are some areas that need polishing, but who made me like Mew? Originally, there were few people writing about this material. If Mew and Tomato hadn't launched an event now, no one would have written about it. Come on, update it! [Eat melon]

It is recommended that the author be confident and bold in writing attributes. Since the attributes of the characters have been cheated and have not broken through the reality, it is really meaningless. You can write attributes that can be crushed. Otherwise, it is unreasonable to beat others at 16.7 Levels. To sum up, it is equipment. Babies can boldly break through, but the game mechanism cannot be changed. I have read a lot of fantasy fan fiction, but the author's cognitive level is limited. The attributes of the top boss accounts are not as high as those in reality. How can you defeat others? The commanders they hire are those who have been playing high-end PVP for many years and are familiar with various versions. If you don't form a crushing situation, it is impossible to beat it. Because in the game of Fantasy, it is normal for a good commander to beat 16 levels at 14 levels. This is the mechanism, and then you can write some urban content interspersed with it. After all, making money by cheating can only make the game fun, so there is no point in making so much money. I wrote these suggestions seriously, but I don't know if the author has the writing style to grasp it.

Come on, it's so beautiful that you don't need to be a eunuch.

I give five stars because writing is not easy. Come on, the author's pace is a bit too big all at once. I suggest you refer to other books. It just feels like the protagonist is in a hurry while reading the book. He wastes time and does not do the preliminary work well. Come on, the system can also have other functions for the protagonist. After all, it is more enjoyable to read.

When I saw the word "empty", I knew it was Li [laughing evilly] Didn't you write it in waste?

Not bad, looks comfortable. Come on

4 Chapters a day, not enough to read

Come on! I want to tie up the author and update it [laughing][laughing][laughing]

There are not many fantasy books, so I just ask the author to be careful and not to get into trouble.

More preliminary work would be better.

Now it's 5.5. I can only say that this book is right. I wonder why it's so difficult to find a good book about Dragon Palace.

It is not necessary to bring a useless book when holding the country and listening.

Come on, don't be a mess

No, no, no, I don't want to comment. Hello, author. Goodbye, author [Chigua]