Demon Slayer: Kimetsu No Yaiba: Beginning with Chanel, Childhood Sweetheart

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The plot should be more rigorous so that it does not collapse, and the characters should be described with more details. I think we should add a plot that injects spirit into the protagonist, so that he can live in this world with a spirit. Only in this way can the work become a better work.

The whole book is good, and the author's control of the rhythm is also very good. It can be said that it is relaxed and relaxed, but the rhythm of the part before the finale is a bit anxious [face covering]. No matter the plot arrangement or the plot structure, there is no problem. The only slight deficiency is the characterization of the characters. It is not that the characters are not well portrayed, but it is a little delayed in the whole book. If the character characterization is also remarkable, I should not hesitate to give it five stars. Comprehensive evaluation, this is a wonderful Demon Slayer fanfic. Although the setting is slightly flawed, it does not affect the overall look and feel. Recommended [Learned]

In my opinion, the plot is pretty good, and the transitions are straightforward. It's just that the hanging settings feel a bit unbalanced. I feel there is no difference between level 7 Yanhu and level 10. Is the level 10 normal setting too weak? Why can't I open a pattern? The level 10 dual-sword style shouldn't include fighting between left and right. The reason for choosing dual-swords at the beginning is to use two different sword moves, but in the end, it's ridiculous to end up throwing knives to kill people. If that doesn't work, I think it would be okay to learn from a certain Santo-ryu's naming fruit ability user [laughing evilly]

This book is very good. I feel in this book that if you continue to work hard, you may be able to get close to the masterpiece of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba.

Come on, keep working hard!

Why do I feel like I've been stabbed?

A relatively readable book, the pace is slow at the beginning and picks up quickly later on, but the ending is rather abrupt, and Wuxian was instantly killed.

It's very well written, the foreshadowing is very good, and the fighting plot at the end is even more exciting. You can clearly understand the fighting scenes, and it's very well written.

It's very good. The cover is a bit unseemly but it doesn't prevent it from looking good. I hope I can continue writing if I feel like it. The protagonist may be a bit too strong and his combat power is a bit weak. I look forward to the author's next books.

Jiguo Enichi is the second son of Jiguo, and Jiguo Yansheng (Heishimou) is the eldest son. Hei Shimo is Yuanyi's brother. The author should change it after seeing it.

The setting may be a bit confusing, but not completely. Shang Xianyi is Yuanyi's elder brother, not his younger brother. I deduct one star for this, but everything else is fine.

The book is very interesting, but after the battle with Tong Mo, he became a little invincible. I feel that the protagonist can be weakened appropriately, let the protagonist suffer more injuries, have more experiences and insights, and let the strength level increase. It may be more layered and better, but overall it is also a very good book (don't criticize if you don't like it)

It's very interesting, the pace is tight, the plot doesn't drag out, and the ending is satisfactory.

Single heroine or multiple heroines? And who is the heroine?

Liu Huaqiang buys melons, Gao Qiqiang sells fish, criticizes, buys and sells by force

Except that it was a bit short and the heroine didn't arrange a wedding in the end, everything else was pretty good.

It's well written, but it doesn't briefly explain the story of the protagonist and Kanahu after killing Mumen. This is also my regret for this book. [Rolls eyes] I hope the author can write more good works. That's all. Thank you.

It's a very light and fast-paced novel. It's very well written and the interaction in the emotional scene is also good. It's just bad that I can finish it. In fact, it would be nice to finish it a little bit. I guess the author also wants to wrap it up in a hurry. Anyway, this book is really good as a quick snack.

It's well written. In another book, a lot of personal stuff was included in order to gain skill points. It felt a bit dragged out, but the pace of this book is simple and fast.

It's a very good fanfic [smile]

I hope it's not a harem story

I can only give it 5 stars without talking about the shortcomings. Anyway, at least I will give 5 stars if I can finish it after watching it.

It looks good, but the author is really young [laughing]

This book is beautiful, I just wish it didn't have a knife.

Very good, this book deserves my 5-star praise. The author's bold writing style, which is different from the original work, surprised me.

Not bad, the fighting and character portrayal are good. The emotional line is also relatively stable, at least there are no loopholes or anti-personality content. The plot advancement is also easier to accept, but I prefer to read the main character, but this does not affect this is a good book - and is there multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist? (I like more, hehe)

Come on, come on, come on

This book is well written.

Open your mouth at the beginning, and your strength depends entirely on eating.