Demon Slayer: I Started as a Beggar in the Yoshiwara Pleasure District

Come on and update! [Like] After reading your book, I suddenly became energetic and decided to update what I wrote next week.

The plot should be more rigorous so that it does not collapse, and the characters should be described with more details. I think we should add a plot that injects spirit into the protagonist, so that he can live in this world with a spirit. Only in this way can the work become a better work.

The whole book is good, and the author's control of the rhythm is also very good. It can be said that it is relaxed and relaxed, but the rhythm of the part before the finale is a bit anxious [face covering]. No matter the plot arrangement or the plot structure, there is no problem. The only slight deficiency is the characterization of the characters. It is not that the characters are not well portrayed, but it is a little delayed in the whole book. If the character characterization is also remarkable, I should not hesitate to give it five stars. Comprehensive evaluation, this is a wonderful Demon Slayer fanfic. Although the setting is slightly flawed, it does not affect the overall look and feel. Recommended [Learned]

In my opinion, the plot is pretty good, and the transitions are straightforward. It's just that the hanging settings feel a bit unbalanced. I feel there is no difference between level 7 Yanhu and level 10. Is the level 10 normal setting too weak? Why can't I open a pattern? The level 10 dual-sword style shouldn't include fighting between left and right. The reason for choosing dual-swords at the beginning is to use two different sword moves, but in the end, it's ridiculous to end up throwing knives to kill people. If that doesn't work, I think it would be okay to learn from a certain Santo-ryu's naming fruit ability user [laughing evilly]

This book is very good. I feel in this book that if you continue to work hard, you may be able to get close to the masterpiece of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba.

A relatively readable book, the pace is slow at the beginning and picks up quickly later on, but the ending is rather abrupt, and Wuxian was instantly killed.

Why do I feel like I've been stabbed?

Come on, keep working hard!

It's very good. The cover is a bit unseemly but it doesn't prevent it from looking good. I hope I can continue writing if I feel like it. The protagonist may be a bit too strong and his combat power is a bit weak. I look forward to the author's next books.

It's very well written, the foreshadowing is very good, and the fighting plot at the end is even more exciting. You can clearly understand the fighting scenes, and it's very well written.