Beginning: Deceive Everyone in the Country to Practice Immortality Together

Ten years ago, I was the cowardly eldest daughter of the Lin family. Being forced into a marriage by her family, she was unable to resist and married the other party. After we got married, my partner often cheated on me, and even got involved with my sister. In the end, they conspired to drive me out of the family. Now, I am a business tycoon with killers all over the world. Today, I'm back and I want to take back everything that belongs to me. Give it a good review and let everyone take a look at my revenge plan.

Oops, it's not bad, but it can be written better. The main plot should be cultivation, but at present, cultivation is not as focused as daily life.

Since you said it, author, I will give it to you!

Too much emphasis on daily life, I hope to cultivate immortality as soon as possible

Well written! Keep up the good work [sending heartfelt wishes]

You can continue to work hard to distribute food [like]

This organization gives people a feeling of being dispensable. The protagonist does not have the feeling of being the first person with cultivation. The subject matter is novel, but it does not read much different from the traditional feeling [grievance]

Nice book! Keep writing! It will definitely be popular