Hidden Immortals in the Market

Recently, I had a friend who is an author. Because his updates were too slow, when he went out, he was put in a sack and beaten up severely. He was so miserable that he is still lying in the hospital. I don't mean anything else, I just want to tell you!

Super double and invincible. It is different from the ordinary novels about cultivating immortals. The protagonist is clear-headed, organized, and cautious. He can also assess the situation. If he doesn't have the ability, he will just do it. He won't be like many male protagonists in novels who go around causing trouble. Be against the whole world. The most important thing is that the protagonist is not the kind of bastard who goes around in heat, but she is a beautiful girl and she will not let go. The plot of the story has ups and downs, the rhythm is well controlled, the writing is smooth and detailed

Let's give a brief review. In fact, this book is quite good. Different from other longevity novels, in this book, the protagonist seems to have done nothing, and seems to have done everything. He is still a relatively stubborn protagonist. The plot logic and foreshadowing are all there. The writing style can be given 4 stars, because I think some places still need to be polished. It is one of the few good-looking articles. I highly recommend it. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It feels good, and the writing is pretty good.

I was reading Tomato Novels on the subway today, and a beautiful girl behind me suddenly asked me, "Are you reading novels?" I said, "Yes." She said to me with a look of infatuation, "Are all the boys who read novels like you?"

At least I saw one person. If a person who is born as an immortal never communicates with others, what is the difference between him and the walking dead? Humans have always been social animals. You can be sad, you can be angry. A man without a woman is worse than a eunuch no matter how long he lives.

Watch it to the end in one go, it's very interesting, keep up the good work. Five-star praise.

I have read Chapter 594, and there is basically no problem. I quite like this kind of Immortal Gou, but it always mentions the relationship at certain times. Maybe the characters in the novel are not aware of it, but we can easily detect it from the perspective of God. This will make people who have in-depth investigation and attention of the protagonist notice the relationship between Wan Yu and the original body. As long as there is a slight relationship, it is still a bit dangerous. The setting of the novel should refer to the sky, such as the division of classes and the gods on earth. There is also Danshan Toutuo. I like Danshan very much. I don't know why.

It's okay. I always feel that the male protagonist is like a hypocrite. It's just a feeling (no malice). Although the author also writes a little leisurely, it still doesn't have the feeling of immortality. For example, he has written a little bit about time travel, invincibility, and immortality, but not much about each theme.

It's nice to see the foreshadowing at the front, which opens up the gap between the protagonist and the newly-started immortal cultivators. Also, if the 360 ​​green lotuses and 360 rejuvenation tools are used up, the protagonist will be invincible. This should be it.

That's right. You have to fight to become an immortal. You can only be the sixth child. You can't make it to the end. You don't have a heroine on purpose. Over a long period of time, you meet each other. You do it casually. Through the passing of people around you one by one, you can better explain the other side of immortality. It's good.

Although I don't read many novels of this type, I have read many types of novels. I think this novel is quite good in terms of longevity novels. Come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

This book is already quite good among Changsheng and Gou Daowen. Come on, author!

Sometimes immortality is not a good thing. Is it good to live ten thousand lifetimes? Style can only be achieved by enjoying the life at that time at a certain age. Just let yourself have no regrets. If you miss it, you will miss it. Just do what you can do. Immortality. Loneliness. Watching the people you cherish leave one by one. Isn't it uncomfortable to feel suffocated? It hurts your heart again and again. Forget it. People who are not cultivators should not think about immortality.

If you want to see the protagonist of Boiling Sheep, just watch it. He licks women in every life.

Please take a look at chapter 324, ""It can take as little as one or two months, as long as one and a half years. I can't determine the specific time. "There is a Virgin Mary in this paragraph of commentary.

Not to mention, it looks surprisingly good now.

The first is the male protagonist's first life. I always feel that he is a bit like Neptune. Because there were two women who particularly liked him the first time. Then the male protagonist knew about this feeling and did not refuse it. And he was very nice to these two girls, so I felt like he was a bit of a scumbag. Then I wrote about some of his later decisions, which are scheming, all kinds of things are quite good, and it is also relatively quick to slap in the face. It looks quite cool. And when you look at the back, you will find that the male protagonist is also the kind who values ​​love and justice. Then he will find people who were kinder to him in his previous life and help them. It just feels better. Then when I saw it later, I felt like the male protagonist would want to have a harem? This is my question because he already had two lovers in his first life. Then during the second and third time, I met a few more apprentices, and they liked him more. It just feels like that. (Of course, it's possible that I'm overthinking it.) So I'm not sure what will happen next. Will he fall in love with another woman or something? Also, this novel feels like there is no female protagonist, but there is one in it. Because in this novel, the heroine (because she is with the hero, so I call her the heroine) has very few scenes. It can be said that there are only a handful of them. And the male protagonist is actually an immortal. He must know that relationships should be allowed to take their own course, but he actually forcibly restores people's memories. It was he who went to find the fruit and give it to the little fox. Then you keep helping that little fox. First of all, I personally feel that since they no longer remember you, they have started their own new life. You shouldn't disturb them, you can just let it take its course and get along with them until the end. If they think you are familiar or something, do they think we have known each other before? I think this is the best way to go if you want to restore your memory. Instead, the male protagonist admits his mistake. He thinks he is an acquaintance from his past, and then goes to find the fruit, gives it to her and says this will restore your memory and say we knew each other in the past life. Anyway, I feel that this direction is very bad. And it was true that the little fox and the male protagonist were not familiar with each other at that time. If you are an acquaintance, you can give it to him, but you have done a lot of things for her with people you don't get along with, and this and this, I feel it is a burden. And I feel like he wants to recover his memory later, and it's not the kind of recovery that comes naturally, but she thinks you helped her a lot, and she's curious about what the relationship was in your previous life that made you help her so much now? I would doubt that he is willing to restore his past life memories. Is this the reason?

I started reading this book when I was in my third year of high school. After the holidays, I changed my mobile phone and account number. Think back to the three hours of outside time every Monday. Check out this week's inventory. You are a very happy memory. In this nearly year, this book has brought more color to my boring senior high school life. From a little mortal to a master, it is really a magnificent event. I hope the author will continue to work hard and maintain three chapters a day. Thank you for accompanying me all the way.

It's a good book about immortality. Immortality should be based on one's own heart and be at ease. The protagonist pursues martial arts and immortality, and there is nothing wrong with finding some fun in his life of immortality. However, there are some flaws in the details (such as giving excuses for the protagonist to do bad things). I hope the author will not write too much in the future. I am a bit worried [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

This is the only novel with over 100,000 words that I actually finished reading without skipping chapters.

I'm quite looking forward to this book. I hope I won't get too excited later on. Author I am going to school, I hope you will still update when I come

The subject matter is novel and fascinating. I have read Chapter 24 so far, and I hope to see the return of Hua Xinzi and Jiang Hongyun in the future. After all, it is quite lonely without a companion on the road.

As a bookworm of fifteen years, I can tell you that the author's ability to control the overall situation is simply unrivaled. It even ranks among the top three in my reading career. Except for a few characters, I think the arrangement seems unreasonable now (Zhou Yuniang), but I also believe that this will probably be improved in the later chapters. Almost no character description is redundant. I haven't seen such a perfect online article in several years. It's so rare to find an online book that can make me, a bookworm of fifteen years, not turn the pages quickly without missing every plot point.

I have read many longevity novels, and this one is the only one that does not skip chapters. It is full of flesh and blood, with distinct personalities. The author's writing style is excellent, and each person's personality characteristics are vividly written. It is a rare masterpiece. From the very beginning, chapter by chapter, to the turning point in the forest, I had completely skipped chapters. I looked at one map for too long, and I thought the sky was vast, but the author made a circuitous interlude and came back to it. The author's idea at the beginning was really good, but I don't know why at the end of the writing, I couldn't let go, and I was distracted.

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. The battle lasted for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. But I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, you are proud, don't show it in front of your brother Liang. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are on the scene, and the character descriptions are also in place!"

Can the protagonist survive to the present day? I hope to write some articles about living to modern times

The writing is very good, the narrative plot is good, and the big scenes can depict individuals. It has all the small characters, and throws away what needs to be thrown without delay, but there is a problem with the control ability. Also, when I read this paragraph around 240, there were so many treasures from heaven and earth, leaving a little more clues, but it hurt the protagonist's IQ too much, which is a pity, but the whole book is large and it is to my taste, so I will give it 5 stars for the time being. C, it looks okay, but in reality it's a mess

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Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't overflow, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only by leaving a message in the comments can I stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your Dear Readers First March 12, 2023