Hehehe, I shamelessly gave myself a five-star rating. In fact, I originally wanted to write a hen article, but because of my recent relationship experience, I really often emo, and even if it is true, it is just to keep up with the symbolic characters. I did make the heroine more powerful in some places, including the part where she was destroying Voldemort, but I thought it was okay. And I think the ending of the story was quite unrealistic for me, because Voldemort was really scary at the time, so I had to be more realistic. In fact, I think this is considered a joke, because Sirius and Cetina's cubs are still accompanying Sirius, and there are no people who have sacrificed too much. Finally, thank you to all the babies for their suggestions, praise or criticism [shy][shy]
Woohoo, my dears, I read it a few times myself, and there were some mistakes in writing [crying] I'm very sorry that I didn't bring you a good reading experience. I will definitely check it a few more times next time, and this will never happen again. The mistake I found so far is that after the heroine left, the hero hugged his body, and I wrote it as the heroine hugging the hero's body [crying]
Woo, that's good, but I don't accept it [I'm about to cry]
Hehehe, I shamelessly gave myself a five-star rating. In fact, I originally wanted to write a hen article, but because of my recent relationship experience, I really often emo, and even if it is true, it is just to keep up with the symbolic characters. I did make the heroine more powerful in some places, including the part where she was destroying Voldemort, but I thought it was okay. And I think the ending of the story was quite unrealistic for me, because Voldemort was really scary at the time, so I had to be more realistic. In fact, I think this is considered a joke, because Sirius and Cetina's cubs are still accompanying Sirius, and there are no people who have sacrificed too much. Finally, thank you to all the babies for their suggestions, praise or criticism [shy][shy] Woohoo, my dears, I read it a few times myself, and there were some mistakes in writing [crying] I'm very sorry that I didn't bring you a good reading experience. I will definitely check it a few more times next time, and this will never happen again. The mistake I found so far is that after the heroine left, the hero hugged his body, and I wrote it as the heroine hugging the hero's body [crying]
Woo, that's good, but I don't accept it [I'm about to cry]