Xuanhuan: I Just Built an Amusement Park, So How Did I Become an Immortal?

It looks so annoying, the little cannon fodder keeps jumping around in front of the protagonist, which disgusts the protagonist and also disgusts the readers. It was okay at first, but became more and more cliché later on. The author always emphasizes that the protagonist is very strong and invincible, but he always lets the clown dance in front of the protagonist, forget it once or twice, and come back a third time. The villain's house is about to be confiscated, but he still doesn't forget to come to the protagonist to increase his presence. What is this written about?

The subject matter is good, but the protagonist is poorly portrayed and not tough enough. A capable person's character is like a softie. Will an elephant waste its saliva with an ant?

The eunuch who can see the Emperor, the Queen Mother and the Queen's concubines at any time. No one believes what he says. I'm afraid he's just pretending to be a fool [Petrochemical]

It's a fool's errand, but I spent three days fishing and two days drying nets, so I couldn't write a good story about an amusement park. I wandered around, but in the end someone else chose me.

It's a mess. Every time I read a page, I feel like the author is hitting me on the head with a hammer... After reading a few chapters, I feel like I'm going to be mentally retarded... I can't bear it anymore.

I give you five points. I want to see the follow-up.

The writing was pretty good, but the ending was a bit lame. I felt the ending was too rushed.

After reading a few chapters, the claw machine in the World of Martial Arts and Immortality is useless. Who would play with it?

The ending is so rushed, and it feels reasonable [I learned it] [I learned it]

There's an amusement park somewhere in the back. It's all about training and fighting.