Immortality: Immortality Begins with the Jailer

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The writing is very good. I stayed up all night to read this for a long time. I just like the ordinaryness of the protagonist. The protagonist is flesh and blood. I don't want other novels to insist on writing the protagonist as a saint. This will not work and that will not work. I hope the author will continue to update it. Come on, come on, come on. It's very interesting to read. I like to read this kind of book. The protagonist is stable and trusts no one. He quietly develops his power and is invincible in the world. He is free and easy. It is a rare good book. I hope the author will work hard to update it. Come on!

Okay... In the book of immortality, it's okay

Very good, it is already very good to be able to write about the theme of immortality like this. The protagonist's IQ is online, and the plot development is interlocking. I just feel that the protagonist is a bit too cautious. In the first 100 chapters, the protagonist spent more than two years to determine whether the disguised ointment was harmful. In the later period, the protagonist spent seven or eight years in order to obtain the skills to enter the innate world, planting secrets everywhere. Only after reading more than 400 chapters did a woman finally appear. It was too Sigma. In fact, I hope that there will be more bloody plots in the later stages. The protagonist's life is too boring. All in all, it is highly recommended to watch it. The experience it brings is still very good. You can skip it a little in the early stage. The character of the protagonist is very good. What I am most satisfied with in junior high school is that the supporting characters are all very intelligent and have no brainless behavior.

High praise for the author, the writing is very good. After the protagonist breaks through the innateness, the writing is getting better and better. Three chapters a day, very regular, and the content is getting better and better. It is a very good book in the longevity stream, and it does not sell dog meat with sheep's heads. Like it!

After reading more than 500 chapters, as a 10-year-old bookworm, this book is really good. It is different from other brainless immortality novels. The protagonist feels that it completely explains the state of an immortal person. Others are just passers-by, and there is no causality. [Like] [Like]

It feels very good, very engaging, and truly reflects the difficulty of cultivating immortals. It is not the kind of mindless writing, the level rises quickly, and the journey is smooth. If it is like that, you can just trim your hair and become invincible. [Like] [Like] Five-star praise

It is no exaggeration to say that this is the most rigorous Gou Dao longevity novel of all. The protagonist has just entered the elixir formation stage. According to this progress, this will be a very long novel. I hope the author will continue to update it, and I look forward to seeing him cultivate all the way to the immortal world and become invincible in the immortal world!

After reading the current 138 chapters, the protagonist described by the author is consistent with the initial setting. There is no over-the-top complex. Now in chapter 138, the protagonist's martial arts is not innate, and he has not yet reached the stage of transition from martial arts to Taoism. He is still weak, and the environment he lives in is an era of mistaking others. Of course, he must be careful and work hard to improve himself. If you really could live forever, you wouldn't be too careful.

The previous writing is really good. You go your own way and don't care about other people's opinions. Living forever without a wife, spending time in a house, and having children can be said to be a benchmark in the industry. Unfortunately, when you get married and have children, I don't know how the author will handle it. The risk is high, and you will definitely be criticized when you watch your wife and children die.

It's good, but I don't know how long the author wants to finish this book. Based on the current progress, it is estimated that another master who is the personal assistant of the school beauty will be born.

The book is quite good, with many notable merits. The author is a master of temple literature. The ancient imperial examination system, the three provinces and six ministries, the general customs and customs are all online without flaws, the power struggle and IQ are also online, the traitor, the weak master, the control of the aristocratic family, the powerful master, the prince's father-killing, the yellow robe, and the rise and fall of the ancient emperor's family are vividly written from the perspective of immortality. The characters are also fleshed out, including the jailer, the shop owner, the teacher, and the secret guard boss. Every experience is fleshed out and is a complete life. It took 600 chapters to carve out the book in detail. The result is that the protagonist in the book has a real sense of vicissitudes and sedimentation. When we look at the protagonist in the book, we will unconsciously feel that this is a truly upright old devil, unlike other novels that just mention the old devil in one stroke. Of course, there are other advantages. Authors who can write temple articles must have online writing skills. On a fast-food novel platform like Tomato, this kind of writing style is considered outstanding. In addition, there are some characteristics of this book, which vary from person to person. I prefer those who are decisive in killing but not holy. If many people get in the way, they will be killed regardless of whether they are good or bad. They are self-interested in college. They have no emotional lines but they are frequent visitors who have a romantic night. Because immortality does not leave the bond of master and apprentice, it gives people the feeling of being free and pure. This is the mentality of a real immortal person. There is really no need to create great integrity, holy motherhood, and friendship to cater to business. Of course, there are also shortcomings. This book should not be a book about cultivating immortals. The author is not very good at writing about cultivating immortals. Three-quarters of the current length of the book is about human experience. After switching to the time of cultivating immortals, many parts are true and it was written in a hurry.

I think this novel about immortality is more realistic. I feel that the protagonist's progress in entering the civilization of immortality is relatively slow in the early stage. It's a pity that Xing Yue can't be with the protagonist later. I also hope that the author can keep updating it. It would be better to have a single female protagonist.

It's not bad, and the longevity novel is also unique. Occasionally, there are some small flaws that can't be concealed. Even when there are some changes in the big world, the detailed description is still not enough, giving people the illusion that a new book is written by someone else. The main body is from the mortal world, then to the outer island of the world of immortality, then to the middle-earth world of immortality, then to the world of ghosts, and then to the world of spiritual insects. Later, it became the way of heaven and entered the cosmic world. Now it uses its divided soul to enter other people's small worlds to practice. The protagonist is also quite open-minded, and the description of the eternal indifference of human nature is OK. At least I have seen about 2,300 pictures. It is still a good book. Friends who are not good at reading can read it patiently. Basically, there is no big poisonous point. I feel that it would be better if the author could fill in some of the small holes in the previous world when completing a big world, otherwise it would be troublesome to fill in the holes later. If the author pays attention to describing some details in the book, it is possible that they will become fairy grass.

It's okay, but I feel that the realm is a bit slow. It takes 1000 cards to build the base realm strength, which is a bit far-fetched in some places. Also, does the golden finger have no other use than immortality? Maybe Goldfinger can change that.

At present, Dan has seen that chapter 1065 is just the beginning of foundation building, and he is curious about what state he will be in after more than 1000 chapters. So I turned to chapter 2480, and guess what? The realm is innate [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Five hundred years of Qi refining is counted as one day, one thousand years of foundation building is counted as two days, and the number of days of preparation for forming elixirs is counted.

For immortals, the five skills of Disguise, Cover, Escape, Cowardly Poison, and Burning Lifespan Skills must be ignited. The Burning Lifespan Skills add blue to the first four. Especially if the first three are not satisfied, longevity will be a joke.

This book is also a breath of fresh air on Tomato. At least it allows me, a reader, to truly put myself into the role of the protagonist. A rating of 9.8 Is no problem. The remaining 0.2 Is not given because the protagonist progresses too fast. He has already reached the ninth level of Qi practice in just three thousand years. In addition, there are some years, levels, and names are always miscalculated and written incorrectly. Hope to update 5 times a day

This is my favorite type. The main character is really stubborn. No matter what the technique, he will let others try it first and then practice it himself. But why does the author basically add an exclamation mark after every sentence? It always gives me a different feeling.

Basically the first 1,000 photos are pretty good. The rhythm is also very good. All I can say is that it suits my taste very well. It's a pity that it became procrastinating later on and there was a lot of nonsense. But I really enjoyed this book, it was so close to my taste. I read it every day as soon as it is updated. Even if it is shit later, I will still eat it. [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

I have read more than 2,000 chapters so far. The author has written it so well. It is currently tied for the first place in the longevity stream. I highly recommend it. It is also very creative and can be circulated in an orderly manner, pushed infinitely, and retracted and released freely. Now it is a system. In the future, there will be a series of cheats such as summoning and grandpa. Later, it can travel through works, time and space, etc. I sincerely hope that the author will continue to update, no eunuchs, no unfinished work, thank you very much!

It seems pretty good lately. I read this book for two days and it took me two days to finish it. I think it's okay. The protagonist is probably going to embark on a journey to immortality. If I had read this book before, I would definitely not have read it. The progress was too slow and I was impatient. However, I have gotten better in the past two years. This longevity novel is more of a long-running story and I have no patience. I don't recommend reading it. In addition, the protagonist is a little, um, screwy? …

I probably saw more than 1,100 people. How can I say that? Overall it's okay, it's coming gradually and spreading out slowly. However, as long as there is one bad thing about the heart, it is that it is difficult to grasp the boundary between ordinary and smelly. And for this kind of article, if you want to skip a paragraph in the middle, you don't know how much to skip or where to start.

Why does Wang Xiuhe keep living like this? ? ?

The more I read, the more I get excited. The author's writing style is the same as the protagonist's character, and he carries it through to the end, so sometimes it is boring to watch, but it is acceptable. The longevity novel is finally considered a success. I hope it won't be unfinished in the future, and I hope the author will become the second Zi Ling Fengxue

The author shows the protagonist's homesickness by writing numbers, and vividly demonstrates the protagonist's uselessness.

Isn't it normal for immortals to be different from mortals? There are techniques for cultivating immortals as soon as you go through them, so you have to go through the world of cultivating immortals. If you can live forever after passing through mortals, then you just practice martial arts and seek immortality as a way to protect the Tao. There is a difference between mortals and immortals at the beginning. First seek martial arts, reach the ultimate in martial arts, enter the Tao through martial arts, and get in touch with the immortal way. Immortal people don't seek queens, but they should play for fun, which is the background of a normal person. After all, if you give birth to unworthy descendants and cause trouble, you yourself know that you are only immortal, not immortal. A prosperous family will always have unworthy descendants. You can cut off emotions, but not blood ties. You can ignore them whether they live or die, and they can also offend evil cultivators who can kill you through bloodline spells.

Very logical. A very excellent piece of work. Everyone has his own opportunity, and every character is real and has a soul. If you are reading a lot, you can read it. Come on author! [Praise]

The writing is quite good and the level of proficiency is high. I stayed up late to read it and saved the rest.