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The writing is good. I have read a lot of the Devouring series. This book seems very comfortable. I become brothers with the original author. Each has the opportunity to look after each other and move forward. It would be better to pay more attention to the details of the text (not talking about the plot), such as inconsistent titles, such as the repeated words "then, then" in a paragraph. Come on, author, there are too few chapters at the moment. Recommended for everyone to take a look

The writing is good, but sometimes it's hard to tell the difference between you and me, you always bring yourself in, the narration is unclear, and the other flaws are not serious. You should write in your own style, don't always follow the plot, you will get tired of it.

It's very good, why don't you continue writing?

Yes, it would be better if you change "I" to "Lin Ye" and "we" to "Lin Ye and the others"

Ok, ok

It's really good, but the author seems a bit short and weak.

Brother, this is the short period of time you mentioned. It's already been six months.

It's quite good, but it's the original version, so I hope you will update it ten times a day, or fifty times a day. Not promising at all? I have watched the original version no less than ten times.

Yes, yes, but the author suddenly disappeared.

If the author keeps writing like this, this book will definitely become a big hit. I hope it will be written well and not updated.

I like it very much, it's very good, I really like it, I hope the author will stick with it

It's good and interesting. Come on, author, don't stop updating. [I understand] I just feel that the protagonist is a bit naive. Don't follow Luo Feng all the time.

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Very good, but the quantity is a bit small

Good book, hope it will be faster

Not bad, pretty good.

Where did the author die?

Very good, the author keeps up the good work

Red! Red! Red! The book will be popular!

Very good, recommended to watch, but the chapters are a bit short.

It looks pretty good, it kind of means that.

I hope to get the copyright soon

Not bad, not bad. Among the fan novels of Devouring the Starry Sky, this one is considered very good.

It's okay, it's enjoyable to watch, it's not like other fanfics and it's nonsensical.

The plot is described in detail. Very nice

It's really good, but it's too short.

Is this person gone? Or went in?

If you can update more, please update more. If you can't, just say more. Just don't stop updating it, as that will only make people want to read. [Note][Note][Note]

It's well written, but it's a little lacking. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

As a reader who has been reading for 10,000+ hours, the writing is good, but there is no update from January to October. Can the author explain it? If he stops writing, can he post the saved manuscript and take a look?