Horse Racing Girl: Dark Warrior

It took me a day to read it in one sitting. It is an excellent Ma Ni fanfic. The writing is fairly smooth and comfortable to read. There are many illustrations and sufficient explanations of settings, making it easy for outsiders to read. It can be viewed both inside and outside the circle. But for the inherent skill panel similar to the game system in this article, I personally think it is a bit redundant and destroys the sense of immersion. It may be better to integrate this inherent skill into the world view like "Blue Prison" or "Kuroko's Basketball". Regarding the extra chapter, I think it is worth writing, just like what the review said: "Ordinary people achieve success, and extraordinary horses enjoy family love." The two-way soul redemption, as long as it is well written, may become a masterpiece comparable to "The Name of the King". However, the "mixed feeling" of watching this extra chapter inserted into the main film (especially if the world view on both sides is not the same) will be relatively heavy. I suggest that you either don't write it for the time being and wait until the main film is over to write it, or simply open another separate book and don't mix it with the main film. I hope the author can work hard! ! !

There are very few stories about horse racing girls in Tomato. I personally think it is very interesting. After all, there is a system to hope that the protagonist will not be too weak, and it will be very bad if he loses. I support the author and hope that there will be more updates.

It looks pretty good, and the sense of immersion is very high. If you have played Ma Niang games before, this is a thoroughly enjoyable article. I won so many times, and I'm so happy. Maybe some readers think it's not very satisfying because the protagonist doesn't win all the way or something, but I find it very satisfying. It's as comfortable as taking a good rest, having good luck when going out, and getting 4 colorful circles when you have nothing to do. It's so smooth. The growth process of the protagonist is also clearly visible. As a Ma Niang book, there is really nothing wrong with it [Chigua] It's a pity that there aren't many posts that I like to read, but I feel that the style of this book is passionate, so this aspect doesn't seem to be important. To be honest, after reading the previous chapter again recently, the most uncomfortable thing for me is the timing of losing. This is also the reason why I feel more and more uncomfortable in the later chapters. I also feel that the protagonist is not unable to lose, but the time has not yet come or the time has been said. You can lose when you are at your weakest, you can lose when you are at your peak, and you can lose when you have not reached absolute invincibility. Moreover, the description in the following article makes people quite uncomfortable. I can just ignore this matter and not care about it, but I have to talk about it all the time. I can't feel any other effect except adding to the annoyance in my heart. Of course, this is a free novel, and I know not to be too demanding. It's just that the more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I can bear it. The author is busy now, and hopes that the writing style will be more uplifting. I prefer the horse girls to post happily every day and experience the enthusiasm of the game, instead of constantly seeing them feel sad for their ability and reputation. Come on O(∩_∩)O

The strongest horse girl currently in service in China, the undefeated eight-time G1 champion. The undefeated overlord, the unyielding king. Don't be afraid of clouds covering your eyes. Accept your glory, accept your failure, failure? Even the uncrowned king can gallop on the field! Then you who once dominated the world, shouldn't you return to the game and create new glory? Good book, excellent work, Ao Shou. As the pinnacle of the same type of fandom, he is dignified and dignified. The settings in Jockey Girl are rigorous, with deletions and annotations. The descriptions of Ma Niang's competitions are a bit boring. Most of the competitions did not make me feel immersed or empathetic, and the excitement was mediocre. The description of Ma Niang's emotions after she suffered a tragic injury is extremely bald. The main book is easy to read, even those who have never read Jockey Girl can read it. But plainness is the main tone of my reading. Fluctuations are also knives, encouraging and unimpressive. I think the climax is the sentence: "The king will still be his ministers until he dies."

It looks good, and people like me who have never played Jockey Girl and don't know much about horse racing can find it very comfortable. (The author's generous annotations and illustrations are truly amazing) (The chapter "Ten Thousand Words of Feelings" was very touching, a land of etiquette... It really makes people feel ashamed)

I like this book very much. It can be regarded as the only masterpiece in my mind among the Tomato Horse Girl fanfics. If I had to rank it, it would probably be ranked in the top 8. It is a daily-oriented horse girl novel. It may not be as local literature as "The Miscellaneous Fish Horse Girl", it may not have as tightly arranged competitions as "Tokyo Horse Girl", and it may not have the series of setbacks like "Become a Horse Girl with Good Brothers". How can I put it, it is the kind of journey that an ordinary horse racing girl protagonist should have, normal and nuanced, and touching people's hearts. There isn't much in the game, but it's definitely enough to watch. The popular science, details and illustrations are also very comprehensive, and it is also very suitable for people who are semi-involved in this circle, so that they can know some details of reality. As for reality... I think the "spoilers" of Horse Racing Girl have a different kind of charm. The fact that this project overlaps with reality is a big reason why I like this story. It makes me think that I may be able to see, hear, and feel Ulala, Raging Waves, and Necha. It turns out that Geng Si's extra story hopes to be released in a separate volume (looking forward to it)

It's so pretty, I can't stop watching it! After reading this book, I went to various websites to find some fans of Jockey Girl, but I still didn't feel the same way about this one. I can only say that it would be very difficult for me if the author didn't update it ten times a day [laughing evilly] Ahem, and also, can there be more plots between the protagonist and braised tofu? It feels a little sweet to see them getting intimate [blowing kiss]

The characters in the book are illustrated with illustrations when they appear, which is very friendly to newcomers and people who don't know much about it. During the dialogue, some will also be accompanied by text explanations. The main character is not a classic Triple Crown runner, so less has been written about this. The overall style is more everyday, so I don't like it very much. I wish the author will get better as he writes more! [Eat melon]

It's rare that the main character is a horse racing girl fan, you must support it

Chenlong Gengsi (Silong): The world's top horse girl, the legendary horse girl at the palace level, the strongest in the world, and the king of the field. Career record: 18 championships and one runner-up in 19 games, 14 career G1 championships, undefeated French classic triple crown, two-time champion of the Arc de Triomphe, two-time champion of the Japan Cup, winner of the three major tournaments in the world in the second half of the year, undefeated and six G1s throughout the year (referring to within one year).

This is the first time I've seen an article about Ma Niang. It's very interesting. I hope I can continue writing it. Come on [Blow a kiss] It looks great, when will it be finished?

I have finished reading this book, which I have been following for a long time. It is also a high-quality horse racing girl novel on Tomato. It can be seen that the author is very serious about researching information and writing about the competition. I really didn't expect that the emperor, a single heroine, would have this skill. One month every year can be exchanged. I thought that after defeating the will of the world, the crystal fragments can build a passage so that both of them can travel freely through each other's world. If it is only for one month, it still does not count as the beauty of the end (in my opinion, it is like this. I feel sorry for the emperor. I hope I can make up for a sweet extra story between the two of them) I only lost one game, with McQueen, and I was thinking about it, but in the end, it was even better than coming back [face covering] In fact, this can also be a side story, Master of Dreams, with clear ideas, the writing of the game is quite good, after losing, my heart changed and the realm opened. I didn't understand it at first, but later I saw it was really cool to see the cocoon turn into a butterfly. The rest of the book is not bad. There is nothing wrong with promoting family ties and patriotism in the book. Faith even becomes an important factor in the transformation of the protagonist later. If it is written well and is not abrupt, there will be no problem. I hope there will be more extra stories about Gengsi and everyone. I really like watching their daily life.

I can feel the author's heart in this book. The author put his emotions into the book and wrote in a way that makes people sympathize with him. His worries when he was injured, his excitement when he won, and various supplementary explanations. My understanding of Horse Racing Girl is only limited to two seasons of anime. It can make me, a person who doesn't understand horse racing, understand. It's really attentive. Come on, I support you^O^

Good looking, one of the few Jockey Girl fans in Tomato

The book comes with pictures, so people who have never read it can have a concept map. He is really a conscientious author [crying]

First of all, as a reader who reads books every day, let me evaluate this book. The author of this book first realizes that even excellent people have good intentions. The author's original intention is to write according to the timeline of the show "Jockey Girl", with some introductions interspersed in the middle. These authors have statements, you can go and take a look. These introductions are of great help to someone who has just gotten to know this circle, and the author also covers a wide range of aspects, including family, friendship, confusion, competitions, passion, and final regrets. Helping the Emperor of the East China Sea and Rice Bath, these two places are also very interesting to watch. After all, it is a bit regretful, but more of them are indeed perfect. I was still very excited when I saw this. There is the passion of the game and the confusion after time travel. The reason why this book has such a high rating is because of the author's seriousness in his work. It's also a good supplement, the side stories are also very interesting, and the extras are also very interesting. If you like reading something light-hearted, this book is a pretty good choice. To be honest, when reading this book, it gave me a feeling of familiarity and strangeness. The overall impression is excellent. If I were to write a novel about jockeys, this book would be a great help to me. After all, it is not only about some rules, basic knowledge and historical background of horse racing, but also the author has covered it. This is actually not easy for an author. You can refer to it for details... As for other novels, I won't advertise them here, because this is an excellent home for this book. I rarely publish such a long paper or review. This book has been of great help to me. At least for people in the expert circle like me, it is extremely helpful. To be honest, it was okay to follow the timeline of this novel in the early stage. However, since I just followed it not long ago, some events were not very clear. The author also explained these in Chapter 11 of the book. Only when you understand slowly can you become interested or have a hobby and don't rush it. These cannot be fully explained at once. After all, horse racing is an internationally renowned event, just like football and basketball. Although the audience in China is not large, it does not deny its popularity. These are not things that the author can solve in a novel or a series. This is a process that requires long-term accumulation and interest. In my spare time, I also like to write novels or poems. I feel that the author of this novel is very interesting. Reading some of the novels as extras will not stop you from reading them, which is actually fine (this varies from person to person, but I like to read it.) Every step is full of consideration, but one of the highlights of this book is that it is not very passionate, very brainless and directly invincible. But it is close to semi-invincible. The look and feel of this kind of book is surprisingly good. This is one of the top 10 books I have seen so far. After all, I still like this circle very much. There are not those very messy things. It is very clear, the main line is very clear, and the emotional line is also very good. That's it. I recommend everyone to read "There Is No Good Book". I also want to thank the author for being a great help to me entering this circle and understanding this event. If I really want to write this type of novel, I think this book will be a huge reference for me. If I really have the free time to write a novel, I will learn from the author and promote it. Of course I will explain Okay, so on and so forth, that's how I felt about this book. Summarize it in one sentence. The plot is excellent, the emotional line is clear, the design content is extensive, and the look and feel is excellent. If you like casual competitions, daily life, and making up for regrets, you can read this book. Goodbye everyone, I will continue to read this novel, maybe 45 times, because it has helped me a lot. Finally thank you...

It is really the second best novel among the novels about Saima Niang. Really, I don't know if you can think of any other three-law-two novels besides this book that can compare with it? I dare to say that this is the best and most beautiful novel about horse racing girls. I just hope that the author of the novel can update it quickly and don't stop updating or abandon the book. The protagonist in this novel about horse racing girls is not only passionate, but also makes people feel deeply involved in it. Well, I really can't imagine that there is any other novel about horse racing girls that can compare to this one, but I really, really hope that the author of the novel will not stop updating, don't stop updating, and don't stop updating. I have said important things three times! ! ! Finally, I wish the author good luck!

Tomato is one of the few articles about horse racing girls. The writing is very good; the plot is also very enjoyable to read. I hope the author can work harder! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's a magical book and very interesting. I came across Horse Racing Girl by chance while browsing Douyin. I was very interested in the explanation, so I went to watch the anime in general (it was my own reason (dog head to save life)). It was a very good anime, and I'm still a little bookworm (manual comedy), so I searched Horse Racing Girl to see if there were any fan novels, and I found a treasure. Haha. No more beeping, nnd five stars! Must be five stars! !

Really like it! The protagonist is very strong, but he is also working hard. He is not a simple and mindless passionate person. Everyone is shining! To be honest, it's really fun to see all the horse ladies running hard! Although many parts are based on reality, failure will inevitably make people a little bit sad, but it also corresponds to what everyone often jokes: There is no shortage of miracles in this arena! Miracle could have been any horse! Whether it is winning the Takarazuka Commemorative Sun Yat-Sen Celebration, the "Assassin" Rice Bath, or the "miraculous resurrection" of the Emperor of the East China Sea, or the good opera that dominates a year's competition in reality, the invincible but healthy Ulala retired, the golden journey with a 100% overseas winning rate, everyone has his or her own miracle! (But it's still sad every time the horse breeding arena is upset and failed:( The rhythm of the plot is very comfortable, and the climax and development of the content are very exciting. I especially like the daily life when the protagonist gets along with everyone. It is warm and beautiful, and everyone is a good kid! Of course! The commentary on the game makes people can't help but imagine the intensity of the game! It's so exciting! ! The author is also very responsible and explains in detail the relatively obscure knowledge content of the article. The entire text is very logical and makes people want to put it down! Hmm... It would be nice if it could be updated faster! Just kidding, come on author! My friend is also looking forward to it!

Wow, there is such a beautiful horse racing girl novel on Tomato. It is updated very frequently. I read it in one go. The author please don't stop. There are more and more tomatoes and Hermès. [Chigua] [Chigua] I predict that there will be a wave of readers rushing to the track in the future. With Poke Me

The plot is quite light (although I am a non-stop reader), but it would be better to add a little more commentary on the description of the race (although I don't know how to add it, it's not that I feel bad, but I always feel that this kind of description is just like Cun Zhi). Come on, author! As a reader who doesn't know anything and can only rely on others, I just need to take the essence of the comments and discard the dross! [Laughing]

This book is one of Tomato's best Ma Niang novels. Let me briefly analyze it from a personal perspective. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The main aspect of this aspect is that the protagonist is soul-transported and will change back. In fact, I don't care about this aspect, but some people say it is a poisonous point, so I will mention it. Furthermore, the protagonist will lose the game and is not invincible. This does not seem to be very popular. Let's talk about the advantages. The writing and plot are considered to be the best among the books I have read, the emotional line is not broken, and the competition is handled very well. The most amazing thing about the competition is that when watching the last few games of Geng Si, you can almost judge who will win. Even if you know that Geng Si will definitely win, it does not prevent you from experiencing the thrilling experience. The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

I only commented after reading the latest chapter. The overall feeling is very comfortable. It is very suitable for Hermès who is into the game and has a certain understanding of each horse girl. The character creation is very natural🤗; it can also be watched by those who have only watched the anime. You should be able to learn a lot of new and interesting things, and maybe you can join the game and go to jail together😋; as for those who have never been exposed to the game, they will not click in and will not see my comment, and I don't believe that there are weird people who are into the game but not the anime😦. All in all, this book is quite interesting. It would be better if it could be updated soon😩

Super exciting, super beautiful, five stars

It's really beautiful! The best book among Jockey Girls! The author is really passionate and attentive, and the author's views are correct! So pretty! Come on, author!

I paid close attention to this book when it only had more than 100 chapters, and I have been following it until it is finished. I still feel very emotional about it. This book is really unique in terms of the subject matter of Sai Ma Liang, and I read it several times. This kind of subject matter is difficult to write about. I am grateful to the author for his persistence to see this. Finished spreading flowers, Rem.

It would be perfect if the author wrote better details. For example, after writing a game in three or four chapters, he would just rewrite a few characters and relationships. Otherwise, it would be very painful in the early stage when there are so many people at once. Come on, author, keep at it [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's very creative. This is the first time I've seen a novel about Ma Niang. Don't be fooled by this rating. It's normal for this book to have a low rating just after it was released. I just hope the author can write more chapters about the protagonist's competition, although it's pretty good to read in daily life.

I finished reading it in three or four days, and I swallowed it wholeheartedly. But overall not bad. The author's words have some influence. Occasionally popular science is a good thing and won't make me unable to understand it, but too much makes me too lazy to read. The plot is well grasped, it's smooth to read in one sitting, and the characters basically don't collapse. Most of the characters' transformations have clues. Mi Yu's transformation is my favorite part. The explanation of horse racing has the feeling of a horse racing girl anime, with a strong sense of animation. This book is not quite like a traditional time-travel novel. There is a plot for both the original owner and the time-traveler, and there is some explanation, but not much. For example, is there something mysterious that exists in the world of time travellers? There is relatively little research on this, or maybe I didn't look carefully? I'm very curious about the reason why time travelers travel through time. Is it caused by the three goddesses in Horse Racing Girl? Or is it the particularity of the traveler's world itself? The book ends well, and the ending is not unfinished. It gives me a feeling of unfinished business, such as the story of the pony girl who wanted a trainer, or the daily life with the emperor for a month, whether the original owner Ma Niang can go back to the world of time travellers, the story of the development of Hualong Academy, etc. The story we can see ends here, but there is always a feeling that Silong's story is still going on.