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◎Two heroines◎
After Bai Yuran had a car accident, he traveled into a novel he had read and was tasked with conquering Qi Suyu, the protagonist in the book.
"I have someone I like, how about you change the taskmaster?"
The system told her that she was dead in the real world, and that only by completing the task could she return to reality.
Thinking of his family and friends, Bai Yuran had no choice but to give in.
She asked the system what the favorability value of Qi Suyu was towards her now, and the system told her that the favorability score would not be displayed.
"How can I guide you if you don't show your favorability value?!"
"That's the rule."
Bai Yuran's heart was ashen.
Unexpectedly, her jaw dropped when she saw Qi Suyu the next day. He looked exactly like the person she liked in real life!
After a week of getting along, Bai Yuran was sure that he was the person she liked, and she actually traveled through time too! But for some unknown reason, that person didn't know that Bai Yuran came into this world like her.
"I don't know what's best. After all, in reality we are good sisters. If she knows my identity, how can I complete the task."
Finally, Bai Yuran looked at the string of "mission failures" opposite and fell into deep thought.
Reader comments
Jade Stone Gate is great, needless to say. Although it is a bit classic, it is relatively new. The character design of Qi Suyu is quite good. First of all, the setting of the female protagonist being bullied will give people a stereotype, mistakenly thinking that Qi Suyu is the kind of cowardly white lotus. (No derogatory meaning), and then the plot unfolds and it is discovered that Qi Suyu is actually Bai Qiehei, and Bai Yuran, who was domineering at first and is now cowardly, has little contrast before and after, just enough to highlight that the two of them have changed slightly because of each other. Qi Suyu It would be better to be more proactive. After all, it is not good to pull all the time. You can also pull in a few assists, such as Zhong Yuanyuan, to speed up the development of the plot and enrich the content. Organize another group activity. The sugar content can be higher. Group activities are used to give out sugar. Make good use of it. Just have some unexpected events. Looking back on the last group activity, the sugar content was too low and the plot was a bit short. Let's improve it based on this. Come on, Beibei [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]
Rich and interesting plot, distinctive characters
It's beautiful [sending my heart] but the author disappears from time to time [staring]
It looks good, I love reading it, cheers for the author
Jade Stone Gate is great, needless to say. Although it is a bit classic, it is relatively new. The character design of Qi Suyu is quite good. First of all, the setting of the female protagonist being bullied will give people a stereotype, mistakenly thinking that Qi Suyu is the kind of cowardly white lotus. (No derogatory meaning), and then the plot unfolds and it is discovered that Qi Suyu is actually Bai Qiehei, and Bai Yuran, who was domineering at first and is now cowardly, has little contrast before and after, just enough to highlight that the two of them have changed slightly because of each other. Qi Suyu It would be better to be more proactive. After all, it is not good to pull all the time. You can also pull in a few assists, such as Zhong Yuanyuan, to speed up the development of the plot and enrich the content. Organize another group activity. The sugar content can be higher. Group activities are used to give out sugar. Make good use of it. Just have some unexpected events. Looking back on the last group activity, the sugar content was too low and the plot was a bit short. Let's improve it based on this. Come on, Beibei [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]
Rich and interesting plot, distinctive characters
It's beautiful [sending my heart] but the author disappears from time to time [staring]
It looks good, I love reading it, cheers for the author