A practice piece! A practice piece! A practice piece!
◎Two female leads◎
After a car accident, Bai Yuran transmigrated into a novel she had once read. Her mission was to win over the protagonist, Qi Suyu.
“I already like someone. Could you assign a different mission holder?”
The System told her she was already dead in the real world, and that completing the mission was her only chance of returning.
Thinking of her family and friends, Bai Yuran had no choice but to give in.
She asked the System how much Qi Suyu liked her so far, but it told her that affection levels weren’t displayed.
“How am I supposed to win her over if you won’t even show me her affection level?!”
“That’s the rule.”
Bai Yuran was utterly despondent.
But when she saw Qi Suyu the next day, her jaw nearly hit the floor. She looked exactly like the person Bai Yuran liked in the real world!
After spending a week together, Bai Yuran was certain that she was the person she liked. She had transmigrated too! But for some reason, that person didn’t know Bai Yuran had come to this world as well.
“Maybe it’s better that she doesn’t know. We’re close friends in the real world, and if she knew who I was, how could I complete my mission?”
In the end, Bai Yuran stared at the words “Mission Failed” on the screen in front of her and fell into deep thought.
Jade Stone Gate is great, needless to say. Although it is a bit classic, it is relatively new. The character design of Qi Suyu is quite good. First of all, the setting of the female protagonist being bullied will give people a stereotype, mistakenly thinking that Qi Suyu is the kind of cowardly white lotus. (No derogatory meaning), and then the plot unfolds and it is discovered that Qi Suyu is actually Bai Qiehei, and Bai Yuran, who was domineering at first and is now cowardly, has little contrast before and after, just enough to highlight that the two of them have changed slightly because of each other. Qi Suyu It would be better to be more proactive. After all, it is not good to pull all the time. You can also pull in a few assists, such as Zhong Yuanyuan, to speed up the development of the plot and enrich the content. Organize another group activity. The sugar content can be higher. Group activities are used to give out sugar. Make good use of it. Just have some unexpected events. Looking back on the last group activity, the sugar content was too low and the plot was a bit short. Let's improve it based on this. Come on, Beibei 😘 😘
Rich and interesting plot, distinctive characters
It's beautiful [sending my heart] but the author disappears from time to time [staring]
It looks good, I love reading it, cheers for the author