Manda*************

It's very good, but I find it awkward when the male protagonist confesses his love. Although this is a normal confession in reality, I would prefer the female protagonists to confess their love. After all, you are a man and who doesn't like to post it, right? Author? [Laughing evilly] And don't show the pig's feet too harshly. After all, real experienced drivers will hide their secrets in front of beautiful women, right? [Sneaky laugh]

Not bad, but I feel like something is missing, but I can't put it into words

You need to have a certain ability to resist poison. I have a relatively high opinion of comprehensive comics and can bear it. In fact, generally the authors of comprehensive comics will avoid poisonous points. There are very few poisonous points. Even if there are, everyone will not have much opinion. If there are, they will only mention one sentence. After reading the comments below, no wonder it looks weird. There are no fighting scenes throughout the whole process of flirting with girls. I still like to be a little more mature. Most of the comprehensive comics are about flirting with girls, which is a bit aesthetically fatigued. Forget it, support it (the end of the growth path is Swastika, if not, I didn't say it, just don't want to watch it). If you just like porn, just skip the poisonous part. The first part is yy, and it should start from the end.

The author can read this book "Live Broadcast Rewarding, I Really Don't Want to Be a Scumbag Patriarch". I believe the author can fully understand the knowledge in it... [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]

How to write the paragraph about the visible girl, Michiru appears later and protects Miko? I feel like the male protagonist has been written as a pile driver. In these few pictures, he only saves people and looks at whether he is pretty or not.

I won't let any of the protagonists go, I'll take all the ones that look good! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Come on, the author is great

Looks good. Come on. I really like the harem.

The subject matter is good, but the supernatural appears too frequently, and the daily routine is gone. And you can add spells later to return to the battle, after all, the fields are out. Otherwise, it would feel very monotonous if I didn't rely entirely on the protagonist. And keep up the good work

It's okay to have a little ambiguity, as long as you don't end up with so many that even readers can't remember their names~~[face covering]

Not bad, not bad. It tastes great. Update the Big Boss Harem show quickly. That's enough. Your ending is too hasty, right?

There are many shortcomings, such as the characters' emotions... Etc., But they are still acceptable

I think it would be better to add a double star Onmyoji plot

You can watch it without thinking [thinking]

Good-looking, much better than the eunuch protagonist

The old gentleman expressed his appreciation [like] [laughing evilly]

Well written, the author should quickly grow dozens more livers.

Overall, it's pretty good. If I write about replicants in the future, there are one or two poisonous points in this abandoned book. It won't be a big problem (it seems like it now)

Putting aside the brain and facts, this book is still very interesting.

Okay, come on, author

Comprehensive comics highly recommended

Come on, come on, come on

OK, no problem.

Not bad, five stars for encouragement

The author probably didn't include those scary pictures. If he did, it would be a one-star warning. After all, seeing those kind of pictures suddenly in the middle of the night is really scary. Using the protagonist's genes to create clones, or using the protagonist's genes to create something against the protagonist, has always been a big poison. If the author planned to do this, his ratings would definitely plummet.

Don't collapse later. Why no ripples? Why isn't there a substitute? It's okay. Do you want to write about other worlds? Is it time-traveling or comprehensive? Comic?

I hope the author can persevere and finish writing this book

Yes, you will become invincible immediately in Chapter 47. With the residual fire sword in hand, just slash everything to increase your spiritual pressure. Okay, there is your [details], the male protagonist is awesome, and then the male protagonist turns into a devil, this routine has something [note]

What does Hokkaido War God mean? Can anyone tell me?

Author, you wrote so well, why did you end it so quickly? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]