Rebirth**********

Unlike many novels, although the character creation in this novel has many flaws, it still allows me to deeply understand the real flesh-and-blood people, making me feel as if things are really happening around me.

There were 1,009 chapters updated in one day from July 7th to 19th. Since Douyin has given you traffic, you should seize the opportunity to continue updating. The popularity you have gained is so great.

I think it's pretty good. I hope the author doesn't care too much about bad reviews. Everyone has different opinions. Please try to update. I really hope you can be more considerate.

Look good, come on, come on, come on

Weilong can't evolve, just because there is a...

Come on, come on, I'm waiting for you to have a good story

I'll give it four stars. The writing is average to above average, and the story structure is okay. However, the descriptions in some paragraphs are rather wordy, and there is no need to explain them at all. It feels like I'm just trying to make up the word count!

Third Elder: Protector Huang, go ahead and get rid of Tang Monk and the other four. Protector Huang: [vomit]

It's really good, the author updates too slowly [cry][cry][cry]

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The writing is not very good, but the improvement in writing later is more important than persistence. The emotions contained in more than three million words are worthy of recognition. Looking at my reading time, I have read your novels seriously, and I also want to write them. You are infinitely better than me and those who only criticize others.

It's okay. The first part is a bit annoying, but the second part is much better.

The content is novel, and there are no other problems except that the update is a bit slow. Although it has nothing to do with Douyin, it is undeniable that the writing is quite exciting. The ones on Douyin may be books on other software.

Overall it's good, the plot is quite gripping

Although it cannot compare with famous teachers such as Wo Longsheng and Jin Yong, it is more vivid and rounded than many recent novels. Like it very much. Old aunties born in the 1980s have been looking forward to updates. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Overall it's okay, but can the heroine be made smarter and more sensible?

I think 5 stars is okay, but the character creation needs to be strengthened.

I think it looks good

Can't it be written in a cool way?

The characters become more and more full-bodied in the later stages.

It's very well written, don't be affected by the comments. It's great. Come on, come on.

Don't give up, I think it looks pretty good. Long Yao, Noya, Anhitia, Devian, Amber, [crying] [crying] Although they are not particularly good, everyone is shining. The thing that makes me most regretful is Dai Wei'an. If she hadn't been anti-party, she might have been with Long Yao [smile] She is really smart. After reading it carefully, you will find that many places are intertwined. However, the characters' treatment of emotions is a bit sloppy. The plot of the story is quite well written. Long Yao waited for Noah for 300 years, rescued Amber from the underground Colosseum, and went to the Royal Academy together. Later, they went to the four major academies to learn about the natural elements, and met Devian, Anhitia, Hailin, and the two princesses of the Osolo Empire. One of them dared to fight against the royal marriage arrangement for his love. And the flat-chested Ethelbe, hahahaha. He invented the psychic cannon, brought peace to Osolo and saved many ordinary people. After the end of the Four Colleges, it was time for the Battle of the Empire. Long Yao successfully evolved in the last game and said "It's freedom" which shocked me. After the identity of the Dragon Clan was exposed, the war between the two countries and even the entire continent was calmed down. I went to the Dream Forest again, found Noya's race, and began the story of destroying the world for the Lord of Darkness. A group of people went to the Flame Lion Clan and Ice Phoenix Clan to find the user who inherited the power of the Six Kings. Return to the Dragon Domain to participate in the Battle of the Dragon King. From leaving alone to having many partners, activate the Dragon King to win the Dragon Throne. The story of going to the Black Sea to find the Silver Shark Clan, getting the inheritance, the Lord of Life and Light breaking the seal, and fighting against the Lord of Darkness has just begun [crying] [crying] I can still remember it vividly. I really read this book with great care, and I also really want to know the final story. I thought that the Lord of Darkness was influenced, and all races began to become gods. I thought about Long Yao taking the girls back to earth, and thought that this might just be a dream of Lin Qi... I can't tell, I really can't tell! ! ! A declining third prince of the dragon clan, he can only protect the people he wants to protect by acquiring the scepter of power and destiny step by step. The 18-year-old heroine Noya lives in a poor family. She has never seen the outside world since she was a child and has never met anyone who truly likes her. Later, I thought it was normal for Long Yao to cry a series of times. It's just that as readers, we feel that she is very coquettish, but I feel that on the contrary, such a person is flesh and blood. Especially when accepting the inheritance of Lingxi, I lost my memory and looked at the diary I wrote before, burying all my truest thoughts [crying] [crying] So the author hopes you don't give up this book, don't give up the Long Yao, Noya you wrote... Don't give up this flesh and blood continent [almost crying]

It was fun watching it from beginning to end

Not bad, author, don't stop.

Not bad, I think it's still okay

The characters are well-depicted, with distinct personalities, and the plot is detailed. It would be better if there were less nonsense.

It looks good, but I still have to wait.

The writing is very good, I like it very much

It looks okay so far

Not bad, keep up the hard work, come on