Oops, If the Country Discovers Me, I Will Travel Through Time

✴️✴️✴️This comment is only my personal opinion, please don't criticize me if you don't like it🐶🐶🐶 (This review is based on personal experience only. This book is still worth reading. It may be due to personal personality issues, so I feel this way. But it is still highly recommended to read it) In fact, the concept of this novel is quite good, and the writing is also very good, but personally, I think the protagonist and his group are a little greedy. Perhaps it's because the author hasn't updated this content yet, so it seems that they are very greedy. Everyone in the elite team is like a contracted beast king who insists on going his own way, never thinking about causing any trouble to others. And in terms of timing, I see a little confusion. How could there be so many battles happening in 24 hours, so I always make the timing very confusing. The second is the idea of ​​​​the people in the apocalypse. They only use the contract beasts as tools and never thought of them as partners. However, their compatibility is still very high. This is something I don't like very much.

It's okay. The author has a lot of imagination. The world in the end is quite novel, but the ending is really bad. It ends so abruptly. Then the male protagonist says he is the male protagonist. There is no emotional drama at all, so he is not the male protagonist. In the final chapter, it is said that White Snake and the female protagonist are a couple and they have to go to other worlds to continue the emotional drama. Such a very nonsensical and open-ended and hasty ending. I originally wanted to give 3 stars after reading the ending, but after thinking about it, I forgot about it. It's not easy for the author to write it. It's good. It's still 5 stars. I hope the author can work hard. I can write a perfect ending in the future

This ending is really hard to put into words... Every world is very interesting, the plot setting is also very good, and the protagonist's character is very positive. Especially the last world, it has a very interesting world structure. The author's writing style is good, and each character seems to appear vividly on the page, playing out the joys and sorrows of the world before his eyes. A good novel is like this. You can look at the text in front of your eyes, but it is like a movie or TV series playing in your mind. Scenes are playing... Looking forward to the author's new work!

[Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Although the beginning of this story is very long-winded. And the world is relatively long. But it feels pretty good when I see the back. At least give that world a chance to stabilize before changing to another world [I learned], and the subject matter is different from others. It was quite tear-jerking at the beginning. Anyway, I kept crying [almost crying] as soon as I saw my teammates die. If you like fast pace, don't quit and be patient and look back for surprises. But if you really can't stand it, there's nothing you can do┐(─__─)┌[awkward laugh]

It's beautiful, very exciting. I hope there will be no male or female protagonists who are beautiful alone [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's beautiful, very beautiful. But the author killed some of the good supporting characters in it, which is really sad. Then the ending was really caught off guard. It felt like there were still a lot of holes left unfilled, and it also felt a bit unexpected.

The author wrote a novel about the fishing world in the end, and the writing is still very good, but I don't understand the emotion aspect, but later I saw the author wrote the reason, it was because the dragon deprived the emotion, that's why it was like this, but letting the heroine disappear like this, no longer in their memory, will make people feel lost. The child they have loved since childhood has forgotten it, and it makes me sad to see it [crying] But it's really beautiful and well written. Good luck to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's been a long time since I've read a novel in one sitting. I really like the setting of this book and the heroine, but the ending is too rushed. I suggest the author make a sequel.

Overall, the plot is good, and the male and female protagonists are also quite strong. But at the end, how do you make the female protagonist lose her feelings for her relatives? It turns out that the truth is revealed. The male protagonist and the female protagonist are both from the Time and Space City. They manage 3,000 small worlds and can travel and experience at will.

Among the five kinds of small worlds, I think the fishing world is the most fun. The supernatural apocalypse and the interstellar orcs are just ordinary. The final spiritual energy recovery world feels too hasty. The heroine Golden Finger is super strong, but she just disappears in the end. I feel that the heroine's family is so miserable. After waiting for a long time to come back, the memory is erased and the traces of life are gone.

It's quite interesting, especially the last plane, but the ending is so sudden and unexpected. In addition, it's basically the first plane that's related to the country. From the second plane, there's nothing about the country.

It's nice to watch, but I didn't expect the ending to be like this. No wonder the heroine is not interested in men, it turns out it's the hero's fault [face covering].

Very good, I watched it in one day and one night

I just read about a dozen pages at the beginning, and I thought it was quite interesting, so I thought I would recommend it to everyone, because I am a reader. Then I read it, and it caught my attention.

Very nice setup. Especially the world of fishing is so fresh.

It's a relatively new subject matter, but the beginning is pretty good.

The plot is great, very interesting, I like it very much, the content is wonderful, and the author is great!

Too novel, too exciting and enjoyable 666666

The author writes so well, the writing is good, the concept is good, the plot is attractive, each world is novel and unconventional

The content of the article is great, the subject matter is novel, and the writing style would be better if it were improved. There are a lot of typos. 5 Stars encourages the author to get better and better.

Different experiences, different feelings, very novel ideas, not bad, not bad, you can feel free to enter!

It's quite exciting, the ending is rather rushed, I like it very much

The subject matter is novel, the plot is tight, not wordy, and beautiful.

Those who like to read book reviews can read it. The heroine travels through various small worlds. The setting of one small world is very unexpected. Friends who like fishing will definitely want to travel there.

It looks good and has no bad points. I hope it can get a high score of 9.8.

It looks good. It was just so-so at first, but the more I look at it, the better it looks.

Good luck with it. Good luck with the author.

It's quite interesting. It's not a bad plot. Anyway, it's the first time I've seen such content. Good reviews. Big boost for the author!

Good-looking and good-looking [admiration] [admiration] [admiration], recommended [learned]

It looks good. The country is getting richer and stronger. It's a good subject.