Grave Robbing************

It's very interesting. I hope the author can update it soon [shy]

The author writes very well [like], keep up the good work

I originally didn't like some demonic fandoms and stolen pen fandoms on the Internet, because many people's writing skills are not very good and their writing is too exaggerated. I have also seen two books connected with each other in a dream, and I opened them with great expectations, but came out with physical discomfort. Wei Ying doesn't just act coquettishly towards Lan Zhan, which is teasing, Lan Zhan doesn't just do it every day, Wu Xie is not stupid, he just trusts his friends, on the contrary, he is smarter than Xiaohua. And even though I drank a bottle of Xie Hei Hua, Wu Xie and Xiao Hua were both very capable people and would not be "squeamish, weak" and so on. I like all kinds of love, but I prefer evenly matched love, just because they are both very strong, otherwise why would I like them so much [pouts]. Having said so much, here comes the point! This book is the best one I have ever written that combines two fantasy books! The writing is not bad, the humor is interesting, but it is a little immature, but the wonderful plot makes up for this shortcoming. The characters are not very OOC, but within the acceptable range. The part that gives people the feeling of OOC is that there are some problems in the description (evaluation in the previous paragraph). The character control is still very good, and no breakdown has been found so far. The plot is reasonable, the pace is appropriate, and the development is compact, but it doesn't happen overnight. This is a plus when writing other novels, let alone fan fiction that easily collapses the character design. All in all, this book can be read by those who like magic and stolen pens. It is updated daily and the writing is still very good. The only shortcoming that is not considered a big shortcoming is that this book is serialized... I can't get enough of it... [I'm about to cry] I read in the comment section that Wei Ying was worse than the younger brother, and Wei Ying was written off as a waste, but I don't think so. Wei Ying was born with fetal transmutation. How could a child deal with a huge family even if he had memories? I don't need to explain how awesome the Zhang family is. If Wei Ying comes up and confronts them, how long can he survive? Don't forget, they originally wanted Wei Ying to die. If Wei Ying hadn't been an adult, would he have persisted? The reason why Wei Ying was miserable was because he had flesh and blood and people he cared about. Otherwise, even if he was a child, he would have been able to figure out the escape route in a few years. I care about Zhang Qiling because in this book, they are brothers. He is greedy for the warmth of his family. Even though the Jiang family is very kind to him, he must also long for the love of his biological parents. (I like Jiang Cheng and Mrs. Yu very much. Some people say they are bad, but people with flaws are more real. The flaws of Wei Wuxian and Lan Zhan are related to love and each other, otherwise why are they the protagonists?) Also, trash? Laughing to death, then who are we? It turns out that your loser's skills are so good that they are almost close to monsters. He kills people without batting an eyelid, and chops down strange beasts like he's chopping melons and vegetables? [Cover face] Then let me become such a waste, okay? [Almost crying]

It looks good, but there is too little. Please give it a try, author! !

The author works hard, I look forward to the eye contact between Lan Zhan and the little brother [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Looks good! ! ! Dear author, when will Lan Wangji show up? ! ! ! I'm looking forward to it! ! !

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Come on, I hope Xiaoguan and Aying will be more sweet and less bitter later.

Nice! But there are a few new ones and I finished reading them in one day. I want to keep them up but I can't help but pray that the author will be in a better mood and write more. I love you [blowing kiss]

Beautiful, but sad to see!(ಥ_ಥ)!

I will be an old fan from now on

Why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why

Ouch! Nice! But I want to ask if I will be abused later? If I am abused, can I be gentler? Can I be kinder to Wei Ying and the little brother? (.•ω•.)ノ♡

It's really beautiful, thank you to the author!

The author writes very well, come on

Super pretty! Thank you so much for the author~

Dear author, a small gift has been sent to you. You are so gentle, beautiful and considerate. You definitely don't want your fans to be sad, so can you please update more throughout the day? Don't have too many chapters. Two or three chapters a day is good. One chapter is too little.

The author writes very well, keep up the good work! [Praise]

The author is great and I really like it.

It's very well written, I read it whenever I have time.

Very nice! Come on!

It looks so good, I almost cried when I saw it

I just want to say "Gou Tomato, give me back my book!!!"

Very good, very beautiful

I read it every day after I stopped updating, hoping that the author would say it was an April Fool's Day joke. As a result (T＿T), Shabi🍅 returned my book.

Author, if possible, it might be better to let Zhang Piling also lose his memory.

It's very well written, thank you to the author for your hard work.

I like this book very much. The author really tries to calm our regrets.

It looks good, and the subject matter is quite good. Aying's character should be able to warm up the little brother. When will Wangji come over?

It's so well written and exciting, keep it up It's beautiful. This is the first time I've seen this kind of theme. It's very beautiful. I really like the combination of magic and tomb robbing.