[Book-traveling, system, koi, late-stage abuse] After Lu Yunxiao entered the world of immortality, he met a deer. After raising it, he found that it was actually a sacred deer. He stepped on a piece of grass and discovered that it was a precious medicinal material that no one else could ask for. He encountered all kinds of opportunities. Later, he just threw it away, but the system told him that the protagonist in the original book had turned dark! That is to say, his apprentice has turned dark! Just as he was packing his luggage, his apprentice appeared behind him...
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An extremely boring person, I am talking about myself
Come on, everyone has to work hard
It's quite good to watch, but there are some language errors in some parts. I'm looking forward to the next plot.
Although I don't like the main character, the author is very interesting
The content of the novel is very exciting! The author is also very gentle [adoration] I like it very much [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]
Good! I think it looks pretty good, but it's a bit short. I plan to save it for a few months, so go for it! ! ! [Blowing kiss]
Come on, come on, keep writing
It's really good to read, the author's writing is very good, and some places are quite funny.
The writing is good, why do I feel it's a bit sadistic? Cry to death [almost cry]
I came to the Writer Center based on your comments [cool]
An extremely boring person, I am talking about myself
Come on, everyone has to work hard
It's quite good to watch, but there are some language errors in some parts. I'm looking forward to the next plot.
Although I don't like the main character, the author is very interesting
The content of the novel is very exciting! The author is also very gentle [adoration] I like it very much [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]
Good! I think it looks pretty good, but it's a bit short. I plan to save it for a few months, so go for it! ! ! [Blowing kiss]
Come on, come on, keep writing
It's really good to read, the author's writing is very good, and some places are quite funny.
The writing is good, why do I feel it's a bit sadistic? Cry to death [almost cry]
Be literature, it hurts, it really hurts! ! !
The articles are quite good, but there are few.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's a bit cruel, but it's pretty good [like]