No Character Breakdowns, and Main Characters, Stay Away from Me

I can't understand it, the plot is very strange

The writing is terrible, like keeping a running account, many things are not explained clearly, and the plot is fragmented in some places.

The plot is quite confusing and the settings conflict.

😠 Are you okay? Author [awkward laugh], if you look down on the profession of being a lover, don't write about it [awkward laugh], Xiao Jinsui has helped Xiao Hui escape from the manipulation of the world line. Xiao Hui chose to respect the original owner's wishes, and also showed a mother's love for her children. No matter what profession, there is no distinction between high and low. Don't write about it just to make fun of your lover, and she's also the original owner's mother [laughs awkwardly]. Are you okay? Author 😠, my pure outlook on life is shattered. Although it is wrong to be a mistress, there is no need for my own son to ridicule his mother, right? What's the difference between this and raising a white-eyed wolf? If you don't know how to write about the relationship between a lover and an illegitimate child, why don't you write OK? Now I seriously doubt the author's three views

It's so messy, I'm a little confused.

Novel for Idiots: Everyone is controlled by the consciousness of the world, so why bother saving them? Other people's worlds are aware of your own world, and you can play however you want. Everyone is under control, so what are you going to do? There are other time travelers in the first small world, and it's very confusing. The author can't write it clearly.

The plot is very strange

It's really good-looking 😘 Xiao Jinsui and Ji Xuyang really have a good relationship [staring] and this brother really doesn't have a good impression [puckering] If this comes out clean, I will fight the author desperately [punch out] I'm so angry 😠 I feel sorry for my Yangyang 🥺

I actually like the setting of each world, it's quite interesting, especially the pairing of Xiao Jinsui and Ou Xuyang (although they are not a couple, their tacit understanding and feelings of mutual loss and mutual respect are really great), just It's Jin Sui's brother who is really annoying. He almost killed Xiao and Ou, and then used tricks to make them lose their memory, creating an illusion of being in love with each other, and calling it compensation... Do you really like him? (*≧m≦*) It's just a pity that the ending can't be written anymore and it's unfinished (╥ω╥`) I made a mistake, it's Ji Xuyang... I'm blind, sorry π_π

How can I put it, the setting is okay, but a bit messy, it should be almost very messy. If it is reorganized and revised, it should be a high score of 9.0 Or above 😅, really, I didn't understand it at first, just like the author said at the end, and then there will be rewrites later, I will catch up!!! Can you look forward to it? 🤔 🤔 Author of Aite...