Mushoku Tensei: Sairan's Notes from Another World

I feel like no one is watching, but I still want to say: Give yourself a five-star rating first 🍉 Restoring updates… The low rating is because the contract was signed late, please still patronize 😢 New writers are not yet mature in terms of writing style, so I ask for your advice. I'm reading all the comments and suggestions, but I can't see the paragraphs here and can only read them one by one, which is a bit depressing. In terms of settings, there have been many mistakes, mainly because I wrote this book after reading the web version. There is a plot conflict with the library version, which can easily cause misunderstandings or confusion. It is currently being supplemented. If there are any problems, please correct them and actively learn from the lessons... 1. Based on reader feedback, the frequency of pinching will be reduced or the quality of pinching will be improved. 2. The fighting aspect is not very good, and will be improved. 3. The plot is boring. This can be considered as my poor skills and lack of fun, but I still enjoy it, hehe (check it out). 4. Some chapters have characteristics of the Riddler. Let's ignore this for now. It's roughly as follows: I write stories for my own pleasure, so I usually write them according to my own ideas. Of course, if you have any suggestions in this regard, please point them out. I hope Scott can also live his own life!

How to put it this way, the author's early writing was quite good. Although it was a second creation, he deliberately did not have any contact with the main characters (except the heroine) in the early stage and wrote his own story about another world. However, this also resulted in very few new changes after contact with the main characters later. It obviously felt that the author was also trying to avoid having too much impact on the original plot. But the charm of second creation is not only to create new characters and new stories, but also to use new characters and plots to enrich the characters of the old characters in the original work or to explore another side that the original work did not show. The above requirements are a bit overwhelming, but a good second creation does not only create new characters, but also digs into old characters. The author is actually suitable for writing original novels, but without a large number of fans, it is really not easy to write original novels. Generally speaking, the writing is really great, but the appearance of some original characters did not play their due role. After all, the various characters in the novel are still used to serve the protagonist, whether it is good or bad. Although some characters spend a lot of writing and ink to create, they do not have a special impact on the protagonist. Of course, they may also be used to advance the plot. This is my humble opinion. Don't take it personally. Being determined to write the story you want is admirable.

I found it, I get it, I would really love original drama The delicate writing style made me immerse myself in it, just like watching a jobless reincarnation. This is another story, like opening another chapter. I am so happy. One drawback: The food is so good, and the early original work is so delicious, so I personally feel that the part where Scott and Sarah are dating is too similar to the original work. Although, the content of the date is only a little easier to write, but I still hope there are some differences. Also, I kind of wish I could travel back in time and write hundreds of words directly. Hahahahahaha, it would be so fun to watch. The dating part is not particularly similar!! I'm a big idiot, it really doesn't look like that (again)

Let me tell you what I am. I want to read what others don't read, and I want to read what others see. I read it first and then like it. My permission. The summary is that it is good-looking. Keep writing. I will keep an eye on you. Don't update, otherwise you will suffer the same fate. [You taste carefully]

In other words, this book is very similar to Japanese light novel writers in terms of language and expression, and the writing style is very strong. And the savings in the second dimension are enough to use a lot of language in the anime, and each chapter has a lot of words. I hope you will stick to it.

Very good fan fiction When I read the original novel, I was actually disgusted by many of the male protagonist's bad tastes and sexual attitudes. Therefore, it can only be regarded as a masterpiece but not a god. This novel perfectly fits my previous fantasy of a male protagonist with three positive views going to the world of swords and magic. It is not an attachment but has its own story. It has a little bit of poison, but it is very rare. It is also flawless. 4 And a half stars. I have persisted for so long. 5 Stars⭐

It's cool, but the protagonist hasn't cheated yet? [What]

This is not a royal and vulgar story, nor is it an interpretation of the original work that has been left to a few people. It was a relatively fun journey that led to new experiences. Believe me, just read on patiently, and I also believe that this long process can reflect each other.

It fits the original work very well, I will keep reading it

It's a good fanfic, although it doesn't give me the feeling of being amazing, but it's not bad. There are original chapters that are very good. I won't say more. I hope the author can complete it. I can consider this unprofessional fanfic to be approved.