Jobless Reincarnation: Saylan's Notes from Another World

I feel like no one is watching, but I still want to say: Give yourself a five-star rating first [eat melon] Restoring updates...... The low rating is because the contract was signed late, please still patronize [crying] New writers are not yet mature in terms of writing style, so I ask for your advice. I'm reading all the comments and suggestions, but I can't see the paragraphs here and can only read them one by one, which is a bit depressing. In terms of settings, there have been many mistakes, mainly because I wrote this book after reading the web version. There is a plot conflict with the library version, which can easily cause misunderstandings or confusion. It is currently being supplemented. If there are any problems, please correct them and actively learn from the lessons... 1. Based on reader feedback, the frequency of pinching will be reduced or the quality of pinching will be improved. 2. The fighting aspect is not very good, and will be improved. 3. The plot is boring. This can be considered as my poor skills and lack of fun, but I still enjoy it, hehe (check it out). 4. Some chapters have characteristics of the Riddler. Let's ignore this for now. It's roughly as follows: I write stories for my own pleasure, so I usually write them according to my own ideas. Of course, if you have any suggestions in this regard, please point them out. I hope Scott can also live his own life!

How to put it this way, the author's early writing was quite good. Although it was a second creation, he deliberately did not have any contact with the main characters (except the heroine) in the early stage and wrote his own story about another world. However, this also resulted in very few new changes after contact with the main characters later. It obviously felt that the author was also trying to avoid having too much impact on the original plot. But the charm of second creation is not only to create new characters and new stories, but also to use new characters and plots to enrich the characters of the old characters in the original work or to explore another side that the original work did not show. The above requirements are a bit overwhelming, but a good second creation does not only create new characters, but also digs into old characters. The author is actually suitable for writing original novels, but without a large number of fans, it is really not easy to write original novels. Generally speaking, the writing is really great, but the appearance of some original characters did not play their due role. After all, the various characters in the novel are still used to serve the protagonist, whether it is good or bad. Although some characters spend a lot of writing and ink to create, they do not have a special impact on the protagonist. Of course, they may also be used to advance the plot. This is my humble opinion. Don't take it personally. Being determined to write the story you want is admirable.

Let me tell you what I am. I want to read what others don't read, and I want to read what others see. I read it first and then like it. My permission. The summary is that it is good-looking. Keep writing. I will keep an eye on you. Don't update, otherwise you will suffer the same fate. [You taste carefully]

I found it, I get it, I would really love original drama The delicate writing style made me immerse myself in it, just like watching a jobless reincarnation. This is another story, like opening another chapter. I am so happy. One drawback: The food is so good, and the early original work is so delicious, so I personally feel that the part where Scott and Sarah are dating is too similar to the original work. Although, the content of the date is only a little easier to write, but I still hope there are some differences. Also, I kind of wish I could travel back in time and write hundreds of words directly. Hahahahahaha, it would be so fun to watch. The dating part is not particularly similar! ! I'm a big idiot, it really doesn't look like that (again)

In other words, this book is very similar to Japanese light novel writers in terms of language and expression, and the writing style is very strong. And the savings in the second dimension are enough to use a lot of language in the anime, and each chapter has a lot of words. I hope you will stick to it.

It's cool, but the protagonist hasn't cheated yet? [What]

It fits the original work very well, I will keep reading it

Very good fan fiction When I read the original novel, I was actually disgusted by many of the male protagonist's bad tastes and sexual attitudes. Therefore, it can only be regarded as a masterpiece but not a god. This novel perfectly fits my previous fantasy of a male protagonist with three positive views going to the world of swords and magic. It is not an attachment but has its own story. It has a little bit of poison, but it is very rare. It is also flawless. 4 And a half stars. I have persisted for so long. 5 Stars⭐

This is not a royal and vulgar story, nor is it an interpretation of the original work that has been left to a few people. It was a relatively fun journey that led to new experiences. Believe me, just read on patiently, and I also believe that this long process can reflect each other.

I am re-writing a book review, and now I have read the big transfer event in volume 2. I dare to say that this is definitely the most serious author among the unemployed fan novels. I can see the author's intentions between the lines, but due to lack of writing power, I can't write what I want in my heart. , It is worth reading. The whole article is a slow-burning type, and it is also similar to being unemployed. There is no awesome Long Aotian, only silent efforts, and a feeling of regret to fill in the original work as much as possible. I also wrote a review before, more than 500 words, that is, I just read this book less than 30 chapters. I can feel that the author wants to write a lot, wants to add his own things, but can't integrate it, which reminds me The pain point of reading other fanfics in the past was that my tone was very intense at the time. I'm sorry. Now I feel that the only shortcoming is that I forcibly avoided Ludi in order to write my own new things. You are writing a fanfic. There is no need to avoid it, whether it is the sadness of being with the protagonist group or the advantage of foresight. Even if there is no chance to help, you should know the character of people. They have no shortage of geniuses. Plus The new ideas in another world that you know can definitely make you progress faster and save more. A teacher that a prince can hire, a teacher that the Pope's son can hire can make you progress rapidly. In fact, I still have many points, but I don't want to write them. They are the shining points I discovered. I should also write a fanfic in the future, which will be included in it. Especially the choice of the heroine can make up for regrets and not grab the red, white and blue. I saw the Academy chapter of Meet Ariel. The magic changes in the last few volumes were serious, and the fandom was severely reduced. It was like a novel about another world, and a few fictional genius heroines were added. Personally, I felt that it was a failure. Then I skipped reading and watched Saving Ludy's Mom directly. The ending was very good. Without Wushuangtong, Wushuangtong would be boring. I seem to have written it at the end of that paragraph, so I won't write it now. I will save it and wait for the author to update a few chapters before reading it.

A hundred faints! A hundred faints!

I haven't seen much of it yet, but I can only say that the taste is very pure and it feels like watching the original work. This should be Tomato's best jobless fanfic at the moment, but I feel like not many people are reading it. I hope the author can keep writing it, and I will keep reading it.

It's such a good fan novel, why doesn't anyone read it? Alas, my wife Sarah, alas My wife Sarah [crying]

To be honest, even if you put aside the bonus point of jobless reincarnation, the writing style of this book is very good. Moreover, the author did not blindly "follow the group" but wrote according to what he wanted to write. This is a huge challenge, but it is also a very exciting place. The characters created by the author are very vivid, and they are not written randomly for the development of the plot.

It's a good fanfic, although it doesn't give me the feeling of being amazing, but it's not bad. There are original chapters that are very good. I won't say more. I hope the author can complete it. I can consider this unprofessional fanfic to be approved.

There really aren't too many cheats. So far, almost all the backgrounds have been introduced, which is consistent with the original work, and there are also some novel and interesting originals.

I hope the author will be more diligent [like]

Although I haven't read much, the plot transitions are still very smooth, at least better than most bulk system texts. Although it is a bit subjective, I really don't understand why this kind of book has not become popular.

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I'm used to watching the brainless Wudi flow, which is more about growth, which makes me feel more comfortable. It is more in line with the growth process of a normal person, a little bit of trouble but not too much. It is more in line with a traditional genius rather than a pervert, and the combat effectiveness will not collapse too seriously. Looking forward to updates. [Praise]

The writing style is very good, almost like a light novel, and the psychological development of the characters is also great. Come on!

Come on, it's still pretty good so far.

I've read a few chapters, it's very good, I hope the author won't stop updating [Like]

The overall content is very good, don't be scared by the ratings.

This is the best jobless fanfic I have ever seen! The author is also requested not to stop updating! I really like it!

The inner drama is as interesting as the description in the original work. Come on, I will always support the author as long as he is not too censorious.

This writing style is one of the best [Like]

Author, don't give up, work hard to update, only if you persist can more people read it.

Yes, the book is relatively smooth to read, and there is no feeling that a tiger cannot be compared to a dog (I am talking about the genius swordsman next door)

Damn, why isn't this popular?