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Hey, if you write a book yourself, just give it a five-star review! Huo Hua is a mature author, but he hasn't coded for a year, and his coding speed has not recovered yet. After recovering, he will update three times a day! ٩( •̀㉨•́ )و Get!

It's cool how the author writes it now. The heroine doesn't want the hot-blooded chapter. I want to pamper Luffy more.

There are only a few people who can continue to follow the boat flow and must support it. This is the fan fiction in my mind. You can follow the protagonist to adventure and grow up without stealing the spotlight from the captain. After all, if Luffy is not the leader, what else is One Piece called?

Momonosuke must die. This is the only requirement. He will be hacked to death upon meeting.

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I only saw Twin Gorges. It is definitely the best among ship-traveling games. It will not interfere or even control Luffy's actions and thoughts as the captain. It will not invite people without permission before Luffy speaks. It will not rush to fight monsters in every battle, leaving the original protagonist group with nothing to do. It is very comfortable to watch, and that is how it should be with ship-travel.

Well, the settings are fine, but there is one thing that I can't do well. Who can see that just doing that in one day? What will the protagonist's eyes look like? When to drive Gundam? To be honest, I'm running out of books on pirates right now. This is one of the few books I'm looking forward to. Please don't stop updating.

So far so good

At present, I only have two Byakugan, one is farsightedness, one is clairvoyance, and the other is Sharingan, which can read those genjutsu and see other people's memories. Why don't you use it? I want to know

Although it's very beautiful, why doesn't anyone watch it?

Come on, I hope there is no harem

The heroine Nami seems to have this tendency in her daily life. I support her.

After raising it for such a long time, it can be considered fattened.

Is there a female protagonist?

It's pretty good. I just finished watching War on the Top. The protagonist is really good. Woooooooooooooooo It fits the original work quite well. It basically follows the original plot and adds the protagonist as a variable. The logic is quite reasonable. The companion competition and the amnesia and the almost breaking up of the gang that I have always disliked have been changed to a much more pleasing one. Moreover, the protagonist is capable but not invincible and not brainless. And there are some details that I didn't see in the anime. Sometimes you can add a little more details. When I look at them now, they all remind me of the details of anime. Also, there are really too many exclamation points. The end of a sentence is basically an exclamation point, which makes me dizzy.

It's a really good book. I don't know why there are so few readers and the ratings are low. It's probably because the author set the protagonist up and doesn't know the plot. In fact, after you digest it and accept this setting, you will feel very wonderful while reading it and experience the romance unique to pirates.

Anyway, the author's writing is really good, without any poisonous points. Unlike other fans, the bounty of the crew members is higher than that of the captain! The front is okay, but don't watch the terrifying three-dimensional sailing ship. I'm still looking forward to the war. Hasn't nothing changed? On top of the war, the Eight Gate Dunjia seems to have not been activated. I just want to ask the Flying Thunder God? Wouldn't it be better if you just fired Thunder God and rescued Ace? No wonder no one is watching!

It's very interesting and has a lot of laughs. I like it very much [send heart][send heart][send heart] I really don't understand it after seeing it. The protagonist's existence seems to be transparent, just like the original One Piece with the protagonist's "spoilers and inner drama" added.

Very nice and interesting time travel. Will Bai Yu's left eye evolve into the Samsara Eye? The right eye becomes the reincarnation eye? After becoming the Six Paths Mode, didn't all the nine tailed beasts enter the One Piece world? It is possible that Bai Yu will appear in the Six Paths Mode, his ultimate form.

It's so pretty! It's so pretty!

Brothers, you are getting better,

Really pretty

I just want to know whether Monosuke will die later [smile]

Seeing that there is no big problem now, it's not bad. After all, not everyone will agree with it. It's not interesting to have such a fast pace. It's pretty good. Among the pirates and ships I've read, I like it the most. Of course, there must be people who don't like this book. I give it 5 stars directly. If the battle power collapses later, it will be lowered! In fact, one of the reasons I like this book the most is that the protagonist doesn't always stand out, and even if he does, he's not as direct and invincible as he is 🐮 Don't believe the author's lies, start reading from the first chapter

It's one of the best-written books I've ever seen in Fate Flow. It has its own background and grew up with Luffy. It also makes up for some of Haimi's regrets, and there's no sense of inconsistency that comes from knowing the plot. It feels like there is such a character in the first place. I look forward to the follow-up development! ! !

Five stars, the plot is not too abrupt and very interesting.

I was watching with great enthusiasm. No more.

How can I put it this way? I think this book is okay, but it's a bit too similar to the original work, with too few changes.

The writing is very good, and it gives you an immersive feeling. It is similar to the main storyline of One Piece, but the update speed is a bit slow [please update]

Not bad but no one is watching

I just wanted to ask if there is a female lead?