hp山谷笔记

This article is five stars because it only has five stars at most. I love the author so much. I came here from the old Ford and it satisfied my need for GGAD sugar. The writing is nice. Please cheer up the author [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [please update] Deducted one star for not finishing the update. I understand the author's difficulties, but I really can't give it five stars until it's finished. Anyway, the writing is still very good. What a pity.

This book fulfills my fantasy, it's so beautiful! ! !

This book is really well written. Although the overall storyline has changed, it really writes the relationship between gg and ad very well. It also makes up for a lot of regrets from the previous life. Gg finally knows that ad loves him. But! The only bad thing is! Big! Why isn't it updated? What a beautiful book! Are you willing? Please update it again! (Humble... [Crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Don't stop updating! Please, please! [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Very very beautiful! I started chasing him when I was in lof, but I found out that the teacher seemed to have lost his account, so I finally found him here. This is the article I have seen that is most in line with the character of ggad in my heart, and it integrates love and plot very well. Teacher, please don't give up!

It's really beautiful, help me~\(≧▽≦)/~ The author's writing is very good

It's really, really beautiful. I don't know how to describe it. Please forgive me for my poor Chinese and lack of dictionary. I don't know what words to use to describe this book, it's just so special and wonderful. Hmm... The plot is also very novel. It is really rare to see this kind of book. It can even be said that this kind of book has never been seen before. The layout is precise and the writing is also very good. None of the characters in it are OOC, they are all very realistic. I really don't know what to say, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. ! ! It transformed me from dead to alive! ! ! Let me change from a dark b to a sunny and cheerful little girl. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I love you author (comparison of hearts) You make me intoxicated~[Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses][Admiration] Super invincible and fragrant rice, I eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat (but the update speed makes me tired, although it has been completed, don't mention the dark period during the unfinished period [smile]) I will say it again, your writing style is superb. If it can be published, I will definitely be the first to buy it. This can be written into my reading notes.

It's super, super, super beautiful, and the writing is exquisite. It attracted me right away. Unfortunately, I came late and couldn't see the car on Weibo [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The plot is smooth and not procrastinating, GGAD is sweet in love and violent in ambush. The proportion of love and career is well controlled, and one aspect will not appear to be overweighted, resulting in fatigue and numbness. [Learned] The reason for giving four stars is that this article contains a large number of basic language flaws that cannot be ignored - typos, missing words, incorrect use of adjectives, incorrect use of colloquialisms, incorrect use of idioms, incorrect use of syntax, etc., Which somewhat affect the perception. [Thinking] For example, to describe being in a prison and not just waiting to be killed, the text uses the phrase "waiting for the rabbit"; for another example, to describe killing them all, the text uses the idiom "to see people alive, to see corpses dead", which is specifically used to describe missing people. [Understood] Overall, the story is told well, but the language skills are lacking. [Eat melon]

It feels like it's basically all sweet and doesn't have any abuse points. If you want to read some sweet fandom to comfort yourself, this is the right article (I personally don't like the part about giving birth). Generally speaking, the early stage is okay, but there are many problems in the later stage. The characters are sometimes a little OOC, the love relationship between Snape and the original character is a bit strange, and there are vocabulary errors in some parts of the article, but these are relatively minor points, and I feel that the most unreasonable one The point is that Voldemort died of self-destruction in the end. As far as I know, a character like Voldemort would never commit suicide in this way. This point is a forced advancement of the plot and leads to OOC. However, as a fan of a few years ago, it feels generally good. Sometimes it is good to leave your mind and read a short sweet article.

Just a personal opinion: The teacher's writing style is very delicate. Although there is a little personal setting, the whole thing is still very coherent. I can only say that it is very interesting to read (there is also a childbirth, if Lei gives birth to a child, you can choose not to read it)

I read the whole book in one go. Most of the early perspectives were on GG, so I can clearly see GG's love. I didn't just focus on the jealous king to describe GG's love. In the campus chapter, the charm of gg's leader is highlighted, and we can also see that under the influence of love, gg becomes a hero and a true leader. Ad is really, really cute. In the original work, he is a reliable and lively character, but in front of gg, he is hesitant about love, but later he becomes firm, and he can rely on gg with confidence. In 🍅, there are very few long-form fanfics that are not OOC.

GGAD Hope you are blessed❤️ "Both my love and I perished in the tower, Both your heart and your heart remain in midsummer. " Two months of confusion and infatuation, a century of indescribability. It's very interesting and very immersive. Most of it is not deviated from the original book. If you like GGAD, you must read [Adoration]

I have calmed down a lot of my worries, and I feel that it is really good for me to deal with the drama of giving birth. This is a novel worth reading many times. I'm going to refresh all the hp again and take a look at it again. The author greatly cheers (ง •̀_•́)ง Eternal God (ง •̀_•́)ง

Very nice! ! ! This is one of the best Harry Potter books! ! ! (I would like to ask the author what the setting is like. I don't understand it. Are Gai, Deng and the foursome Lily reborn? Is the timeline after Deng's death? [What] [crying] [crying] My head feels so itchy, I need to grow a brain...)

Let's just say, it's really awesome! The author writes superbly! I really love [send my heart] [send my heart] [admire] [admire] The author greatly and perfectly makes up for the regret in my heart, oh, I love the author greatly! (Broken sound) Ahhhhhhhhhh I finally waited until it was over! Mrs! Please, can Old Ford's extra episode be updated soon? Really well written!

How to put it, interesting, funny, and ridiculous, at least that's what I think. Anyway, I got a lot of joy here, and the author, do you know how difficult it is to be in bed in the middle of the night, holding back laughter and turning into maggots [crying] [crying] [crying]

This book is really the best GGAD fanfic I have ever read! The timeline does not give people a confusing feeling. The emotional line between the two teenagers is very natural, and there is no feeling that they suddenly got together for no reason... Well, Naihe is uneducated and has nothing to say, but it is very interesting! I feel like there is no room for such a good author in such a small Western persimmon! [Cry][cry]

Love it so much! ! ! ! I first got to know GGAD through fan art at Old Ford, and because of Harry Potter, I got to know Dumbledore, and also went to see the three Fantastic Beasts movies. I really felt sorry for this couple, so I went to find fan art to make up for it. This novel is my favorite since I saw it [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Ahhhh! ! , Love it so much! ! ! It really makes up for those difficult feelings💗 [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's so well written and awesome ww. It was recommended by HP's other fan fiction series. I've only roughly read the complete series of HP, so I can't be called a fan even if I'm intermittently watching it. For the Fantastic Beasts series, I only remember Newt's face and Gale's classic gas stove scene (it seems that the primary school teacher released half of it, but I was sick and took leave when it was first released, so I couldn't understand it), but it doesn't affect it at all. The author's writing style is super great. I plan to read through the entire Fantastic Beasts series later ww

It's very interesting. Although it's my first time to read a fanfic, and it's very sweet. I came here after watching the movie Harry Potter. In the barrage, when Dumbledore appeared, someone would post about Grindelwald, so I searched it on Xiaohongshu out of curiosity. When I saw those clips, I fell in love with their relationship, so I searched for the fanfic. This book is very, very, very good! ! ! Very very very very very sweet! ! ! ! ! ! Highly recommended. Even if you don't read Harry Potter, you can still read it as a brand new story. Of course, this is my own opinion.

Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! The only drawback is that there are no drawbacks! ! ! ! ! ! !

I really have nothing to say, this is the second time in my history that I have seen such a wonderful HP fanfic. Please take my knees off [blowing kiss][love] I've finished reading it. I really love the writing style. It's so romantic.

Very beautiful! ! Real! Although it is different from my understanding of their love. But this one is particularly beautiful! It's very sweet (suck) I think if they don't give up something. Then even if they are resurrected, they will only be endlessly pulled together and will not truly be together (in my personal opinion). However, the writing style of this novel written by my wife is so smooth and foreshadowing is really sweet (

After reading it, I can finally leave a review! A very good book. It is a very good fanfic in terms of concept, plot and character creation. The characters are not OOC and the emotional lines are very smooth (except for some quarrels that are very childish in our opinion...). Once again, both of them have matured and know how to love each other, especially GG, who is finally not a mute [face covering]. Nurmengard is finally no longer a symbol of regret, but the wedding room of two people ([laughing evilly]). Ahem, anyway, long live HE! ! ! Looking forward to the next new episode!

It's very interesting! The amount of one chapter is really too much! (Sometimes after reading one chapter, I thought I had read several chapters [shocked]) The author, please give me a lot of support!! I don't know what time I finished it. The author has greatly revised it, and the writing style has become better (sometimes I keep underlining). I really love the plot settings and so on! The current plot is quite immersive! ! The author writes very well! Keep up the good work, author! ! ! I will keep following the updates! (Compare your heart)[Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart]

Really, this book can really be called a masterpiece in our HP circle. Personally, I feel it is comparable to the next door "Glory's End". Counting this time, I have already read it three times. Every time I watch it once, I still want to watch it again.

It's so beautiful. I've been looking for it for a long time and finally found a good book. Please author, I want to read the post

It is the best book I have ever read written by GGAD. It is very delicate and has divine foreshadowing. It is so sweet that the corners of my mouth never dropped while I was reading it. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] The plot is very smooth, a great book, like it 👍

Well written, a new world gives GGAD a new possibility. It's not like the fandom of making GGAD remarry through jokes, but rebirth➕creating a foreign enemy so that they can truly come together from the heart. The setting is a HP parallel world. Just think of the story as a Wizarding World No. 2 With HP characters. Because the setting is so different from the original that it can no longer be regarded as a simple bug. There is no proof. Hahaha [laughing and crying] Except for some basic settings, the rest are basically private settings, but surprisingly they are all logical and reasonable, and they are also very novel and creative. The story is generally relaxed and does not torture for the sake of torture. The main plot of finding a Horcrux to kill Lao Fu is also well designed, with foreshadowing and recycling. Except for the setting of AD Phoenix Bloodline which is a bit ridiculous, GG's character has been a bit broken in terms of rescuing people and being generous in forgiving. Some readers may be offended, but I can't find any shortcomings [OK]